Mar 17, 2024
This was such a horribly written story, it lacks "awww" moments and their confessing didn't even feel like a confession they would say it and then act like it was a joke and not a serious thing but then finally when they got together they didn't even confess normally, I didn't even know it was a confession on both ends until the next chapter they are together or so it seems but somehow they are still just arguing back and forth with felt childish and not even like a romance story because it ends there. No kiss, no talk of first date not actual communication
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about their feelings, no opening up, and then the extra chapter the 4.5 is a jump in the future when the uke is already in college and they are taking a trip and have sex however after their trip the uke is in school and he is saying "Finally it took you 2 years to graduate and arrive" then the ukes best friend walks over and takes a sakura flower off of his head and the uke says "I thought you were going to kiss me" and it ends there... what...so the uke just sat there and let his best friend get that close and was going to let him kiss him even though he is in a relationship with his man. Excuse me...it ends just like that???
Unless it just wasn't written well and that was supposed to be the flashback to when his BF the ML/seme came to high school during the ukes/MC's senior year.
Horribly written, makes you feel no emotion or like they don't even love each other. We don't get to see their first date, them spill their heart out, their first time or even them talking about who is top or bottom which would have been interesting if they did since the uke has a inferiority complex because of his height and his childhood friend being taller WHICH also the ML is the MC's childhood friend and we don't find this out until we just hear him say "CHICHAN" and it leaves us confused like okay what? They did a horrible job at introducing his past childhood friend or how he thought he was a girl.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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