I will give this manga credit for one thing, it is definitely an interesting concept. The idea of a schoolchild adept with the world of Dragon Ball being thrown into the body of best boy Yamcha had so much interesting and creative potential. That being said, there is a strong emphasis on the "potential"
This short manga--emphasis on short--by Mr. Dragon Garow Lee is a cute mini-story that explored the above-stated concept in an entirely proficient way. The art perfectly emulated not every era of Toriyama's present in the story and worked as one of the major highlights.
My biggest problem is easily how abridged it
is. A concept like this could easily lose its luster after a while, but I'm sure it could have gone on for a bit longer while still retaining its charm. Overall. the manga is criminally short, especially for the clear thought that was put into it. I would love to see how the story would have been handled at other points that were never shown, and I find it a shame that I'll never see them.
I'd recommend this story to any Dragon Ball fan looking for a nice 10-minute read. I guess if I had one more minor complaint, the English release's cover is disgusting and is a clear downgrade from the Japanese.
Have a nice day!