Sep 8, 2018
*Disclaimer*
Just personal scratch.
Advised, possible spoilers.
Opinion & Informal
Art: 5/10 Basic. I wouldn't say elementary, but I wouldn't be surprised at all if some kid drew all the art. Anatomy was believable. Proportions were alright. Semi-cute-realistic style.
Plot: 4/10 Stupid. Pretty attractive elf comes up with some convoluted and baseless reasoning that she wants to get violated by a well-to-do orc. Leave the dude alone, crap she was annoying.
Development: 4/10 Pointless. Any of the actual developments to add a bit of meat to this story was just so forced and half-assed. This whole manga should have been done as a one-shot. It pretty much added some
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half-assed extra development to the plot to add maybe 3 chapters of filler.
Characters: 4/10 Bland. Elf nothing more than a pretty face. Orc, same thing. The orc was just a receptacle to the lewdness and honestly just felt like a mode of self-insert.
Conclusion: 4/10 Stupid, stupid aftermath. Open-ended ending with a half-assed resolution for the future.
Panel Progression: 5/10 Average. Nothing was too confusing. Failed as an ecchi manga because there weren't any use of service shots or impact-panels highlighting "anything."
Overall: 4/10 Boring. Somewhat titillating at times.
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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