| Atlast the first season of our story is over ^^ We decided to just post the story here so if you are interested in it feel free to pesterize "Miru-sama" hahaha... And if you want to see the composed theme songs for this again pls feel free to bother "wolfsbane" And for the characters... since im the only one left who hasnt finished the coloring job you can also bother me =3 4/22/2010: sorry for the mess up we've changed their ages from 14 to 16 =3 |
Fatal1078Apr 21, 2010 11:32 PM
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| Is it an original story or is it just a fanfic? If it is the first then of course I'm interested in it. |
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| wAnna seE thE chAracTers Fatal.. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa^_^ |
Please read it and leave some comments^^  |
| It is original. ^^ |
    ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| I want to see it then lol |
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| I'll be posting it soon and hopefully Fatal finishes coloring 'em... I'll be typing the whole notebook. GAH!. Too lazy for now... |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| well this only mean one thing Miru-sama... well refrain on watching soul eater for now... but look on the bright side atleast we get to finish our work before school starts again... (hopefully) hahaha note to miru-sama: you shouldnt have accepted the note book from wolfsbane hahaha |
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| well here are the first two charas (sorry only two since im addicted to watching anime now). There will be 2 types of coloring versions one belongs to me and the other to Miru-sama and then there's the 3rd ver. from wolfsbane but she's not using any pc programs for coloring just coloring pencils so its not available although all the drawings belongs to her^^... first up Midori Yuki: fatal's ver:  Miru's ver:  Yushikuni Kumiko: fatal:  miru:  |
Fatal1078Jun 19, 2009 5:13 AM
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| WAHH WHY DID YA POST MY VER..TOTALLY MESSED UP! I DID IT LIKE IN 15 MINUTES..NEVER GAVE ANY THOUGHTS ON THE COLOR AND STUFF.. GAHAHAHA.. LOL SORRY FOR THE BAD QUALITY AND LAME COLORING ^^ |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| THANK YA! THANKS TO WOLFSBANE SHE MADE It ;) |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| hahaha yeah thanks to wolfsbane =3 but other than doing anything else... MIRU-sama start typing already! hehehe |
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| TOO LAZYYY!!! *MIO SINGS*PLEASE DON'T SAY THAT YOU ARE LAZY |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| *MIO CONTINUES*BECAUSE I AM ACTUALLY CRAZY |
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| XDXDXDXDXD I LOVE MIO! |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| yeah yeah i know that... and here i thought you love soul more hahaha maybe i should just take him just kidding peace yo! now write the 1st chap or you wont have enough time just to remind you school starts next week |
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| I love MIO more - if I'm bisexual... but I'm not sooo... I love SOUL more.. nyahahha |
| ♥ ♪ ♫ ♥ Something you told me when you knew you had my heart |
| correction: I'll be the one typing now not miru since she's busy... I'll be writing it in a play form and pls excuse our dividing of scenes cuz some of them are ultimately short while some are long Its mainly bcuz were writing it while having lessons (since its originally written in play form in the manuscript) ofcourse some of the lines were edited in the manga version (too bad wolfsbane has that version) also i've added some more info in Yuki (post no.8) Its about her family that is well in anycase sorry for the delay... --------------------------------------- Chapter 1: Meeting SCENE 1 (outside Yuki's house) *cling cling - the sound of wind chimes clingning (in Yuki's room) *ring ring - alarm clock ringing Taiyo (bro): Yuki! you're late for school! Yuki: *wakes (in the manga ver. her name and info appears here. In our case see my post which is post no.8 in this thread). *looks at clock...*shocked I forgot today is the first day of school!!*panics while combing/getting dressed/spraying perfume then she hurried down, grabs toast on the table Ohayoo! Mom, Dad, Bro. bye! *leaves kitchen Haruki (mom): Take care dear! *tears Kenzaburo (dad): *reading newspaper Ganbare! Yuki: Ok got it! *grabs bike then leaves the house Taiyo: I'm gonna go now too*leaves Haruki: They grow up so fast Kenzaburo: It was like yesterday that they can't even walk yet *glistening eyes with flower backgrounds Yuki: *riding bike Midori Yuki here, 16 yrs. old and today I'll enter the world of highschool , the day I've been longing for *excited face the first thing I'm going to do is join the writing club! Cuz writing to me is like making something more than ordinary, I can unravel the mysteries of the people around me and turn it into a novel based book. (CRASH) *sound of car's emergency brakes SCREECH... SCENE 2 *The driver gets out of the car Yuki: Ouch! Driver: Watch were you're going little girl. Next time I wont pay for you're hospitalization. *then the car window drops open Ryuzaki: Don't waste your time over her. Let's go! Yuki: (in Yuki's mind) Stupid rich people. He didn't even asked me if I was fine. SCENE 3 ---------------------------------------------- sorry i'll have to continue it tom. cuz its already late here at my time... |
Fatal1078Apr 21, 2010 11:31 PM
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| woah! really? thank you very much *tears oh yeah i'll write its continuation tom. since we dont have classes for 2 days now and bcuz of the storm she has no means of giving me the notebuk... |
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| pls tell me if there are any typos tnx ------------------------------ SCENE 3 *ring ring - school bell rings *Yuki made it to school then she went to her classroom and found a vacant seat next to a girl Ai: Yuki: It's a long story. *The teacher enters... Yuki with the other girls turned their eyes into hearts and fell inlove with him with a blink of an eye Takezo-sensei: Good morning class I will be your adviser for the whole school year Ishiin Takezo is the name. *girls screaming We have 2 new classmates. First up Midori Yuki, please come infront. Yuki: *Drooling with hearts as her background pic. Ai: Hey! you're a new student right? So are you Midori-chan? Yuki: *heart pops Uh yeah *stands and goes in front then writes her name on the board Yuki: *Super active Good morning! My name is Midori Yuki you can call me Yuki. I'm 14 yrs. old and someday I'm going to be a famous writer also I'm seeking for something interesting to write. Takezo: Thank you Ms. Yuki next is... Komiyama Ryuzaki. Ryuzaki: *writes his name on the board the he just stood still Girl #1: Ryuzaki: *Glares evily Girl #2: What type of girl do you like? Ryuzaki: *Glares evily then the girls froze Girl #3: so cold Yuki: *Thinking...then a light bulb appears I remember him! He was that rich guy who almost got me killed. Ai: Huh? Yuki: *Yuki narates to Ai about the incident this morning Takezo-sensei: Thank you Mr. Ryuzaki. You can now take your seat. Ryuzaki: *He made an evil eye to eye contact with Yuki. Class starts SCENE 4 *ring ring - bell rings Takezo-sensei: You may now take your break. Yuki: *Lookes at window then sighs Nothing interesting happened yet... *Yuki walks out the classroom then bumps into someone Yuki: Ouch... Kumiko: Sorry are you alright? Yuki: Yes, compared to what happened early this morning. Kumiko: ??? Hey! you're new here right? Want to eat lunch together? Oh and what's your name again? Yuki: Midori Yuki, you can call me Yuki if you like. Kumiko: Ok Yuki-chan *Grabs Yuki then drags her to the cafeteria Yuki: *Shocked SCENE 5 to be continued @.@ |
Fatal1078Jun 27, 2009 12:01 AM
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| SCENE 5 (At the cafeteria) *Ryuzaki was surrounded by girls Kumiko: *Looking at Ryuzaki Yuki: He is such a show off. Kumiko: *Looks at Yuki Umm... *Blushes Yuki: Dont tell me you have a crush on that Mr. Showoff?? Kumiko: *Face turns red Yuki: *Laughs =)) Ai: Hey!*Pops out, out of no where Kumiko/Yuki: *Shocked Ai: *Looks at Kumiko Who are you? *Gets closer to Kumiko's face Kumiko: Ku--Kumiko, I've been your classmate since middle school. Ai: Huh? *Looks above eh? Kumiko: Forget it... Ai: What are you guys talking about? Yuki: Mr. Showoff Ryuzaki! Kumiko: *Blushes Ai: *Stands, looks at Ryuzaki then she suddenly laugh Yuki: Why? Ai: Hehehe...nothing...hahaha*Leaves hahaha! Yuki: What a weird girl. Kumiko: You got that right. So do you wanna come with me to my dorm. Yuki: Sure! (At the dorm) *Yuki is roaming around the room running in circles like a child Yuki: Wow! *Eyes sparkles This is sooo much bigger than my room back home. *Looks outside searching for someone Kumiko: What's the problem? Yuki: Where is she? *Suddenly a girl with megaphones stands in the center of the field Momoka: Welcome back everyone and welcome new students! I'm your student council president this year. I hope you are enjoying your stay here. If you want to join a club please line up to the respective room assigned to the club. Goodluck you guys! *The students returned to their classroom *ring ring - bell rings Takezo-sensei: Class dismiss. Yuki: *Suddenly runs to the bulletin board Where is it?...There! *Runs off all of a sudden SCENE 6 (At room 404) *There are 6 students sitting and Momoka standing infront Yuki: Are you the student council president? Momoka: Correct! Welcome to the Writing club! So may we start the introductions Megumi: Mikan Megumi from Class 2-B. I dont have anything better to do so I came here and I also dragged some friends. Hana: Hikari Hana from Class 2-B and apparently she dragged me here by force of course. *Angry Jun: Hikari Jun from Class 2-B my stupid twin dragged me here because stupid Mikan dragged her. Twins (Hana/Jun): What a bother. *Looks at Megumi Suzuka: Kanojo Suzuka from Class 3-A. Unlike the others I take this club seriously! Aki: Akimoto Asuka from Class 1-A *Grins Justin: Justin Renoir from Class 3-A Yuki: *Super active My name is Midori Yuki from Class 1-A. I have interest in writing mysteries. Suzuka: *Sighs Atleast someone is pepped up Momoka: Ok! I am your club president Maiban Momoka. I hope we can make this club interesting and fun. Yuki: Yosh! *Goes with Momoka then dances off with head bands on their foreheads *ring ring - bell rings Momoka: You can go home now. SCENE 7 Yuki: *While leaving school Miharu: Yuki! *Waving Yuki: Miharu?! Miharu: Yuki! *Attempted to hug Yuki but Yuki evaded her. Huh?! Yuki: I've been looking for you everywhere! What the --? Why are wearing a different uniform? Miharu: Eh! ehehehe well it's a long story. Yuki: What do you mean a long story?!? I thought for sure you enrolled here. Miharu: We can walk together. Yuki: Hmmm... You!! You!! *Very angry Miharu: *Runs Yuki: Come back here! I'm not done with you! -THE END- --------------------------------------- Chapter 2: New Life to be continued |
Fatal1078Jun 28, 2009 2:08 AM
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| Chapter 2: New Life SCENE 1 (View: Yuki's house) Yuki: WHAT?? (In the kitchen) Haruki: We’ve decided that you should have a dorm. Yuki: B-but why? Kenzaburo: It will help you with your studies. Yuki: How? Taiyo: To get rid of you NITWIT. Yuki: *Stares at Taiyo Kenzaburo: *Pushes Yuki out Haruki: *Throws bags at Yuki Taiyo: *Laughs Mom and Dad: See you in winter vacation. *Closes door Yuki: Hmmm...*Grabs her bags Miharu: Yuki!! Yuki: Oh my gosh! She's back. Miharu: What was that supposed to mean? Yuki: Nothing *Grins So what school did you moved in? Miharu: *While walking together with Yuki SE-CRET! *Winks Yuki: Never mind. Here we are see you! Miharu: Bye! *Goes back to the direction were they came from Yuki: Why are you heading back? Miharu: My school's this way. Yuki: Tsk..tsk...*Walks away She is just making her life harder. *Ai pops out Ai: *Hugs Yuki Yuki! Yuki: You're squishing me. Let go... Ai: But you're just so soft... *Lets go of Yuki Who was that girl with you earlier? Yuki: My stupid old friend. Ai: Ohh... What's with the bag? Yuki: I'm moving to a dorm here. Ai: *Big smile Really! Move to our dorm. There's still more bunks left. Yuki: I dont know. Ai: Why? Is there a problem? Is ti me? Yuki: No! (Inside Yuki's mind) *Yes! It's actually you. hehehe... Ai: By the way we have another roommate. I forgot her name again hmm... Was it Fumito?? Kumito?? Nuriko?? Monster?? *Still thinks Kumiko: It's Kumiko! Ai: *Looks back and sees Kumiko Hehehe... sorry SCENE 2 (At the office/Teacher's Faculty Room) Takezo: Here *Gives Yuki a form sign it up then return it to me ok? *Smiles Ms. Midori. Yuki: *Completely red and frozen Ai: *Elbows Yuki Yuki: *Grabs the form Ah... Yes sir. Kumiko/Ai: *Laughs (At the bench somewhere in the office) Yuki: *Still deciding on her room number Kumiko: So which dorm room are you going to stay? Yuki: I haven't decided yet... Kumiko: What? Yuki: This dorm thing was so sudden to me you know... Its not like I have enough time to plan all of this... *Tired face Ai: *Energetic Then you should stay with us. *Grabs the form and pen then writes 248 on the room number. Then she gives it to Takezo-sensei with a jolly smile and gets Yuki's keys. Yuki: Wha... What was that for!! *Screaming her lungs out. Teachers look at her for a pause moment. Kumiko: I think it is such a great idea. *Smiles with matching nods Great job Adachi-san. Yuki: Great job!? That decision wasn't yours to make Adachi! Ai: Whether its me, you or... *Looks at Kumiko ... Kumiko: For the last time its Kumiko! Ai: Yah... You'll still end up in our dorm. Yuki: And why is that? Ai: You're a new student here and so the only people that I see that you barely know and talks to is either me or Kumiko. Kumiko: *Feels a little joy inside because Ai remembers her name. Yeah Ai is right and besides you already saw and liked our room. Yuki: ...Yeah I guess you're right *Sighs If you put it that way. Ai: Then what are we waiting for. *Gives Yuki her keys then grabs Yuki and Kumiko. Let's go! SCENE 3 (At the dorm room) Yuki: *Super smile Wow! Ai: Yours is the bed next to the window Yuki: *Nods.. Throws her bags on the bed Kumiko: Let's go before were late for class! Ai: Race you there! Kumiko: Unfair you're a member of the track and field team. Ai: *Sticks her tounge out then runs off. Kumiko: *runs I'll get you Ai! Yuki: *Looks at the window then runs. Halfway there she bumps into Ryuzaki and looks at him. Sorry! I'm really sorry. Ryuzaki: Not you again. You are so prone to accidents. Yuki: *Mad Whatever! You dont even~ Ryuzaki: *Walks out Yuki: Hey! I'm not done talking to you! Ai: *Walks near Yuki He is so cold. Kumiko: I think he is really good inside. *Blushes Ai: You're just saying that because you have a C-R-U-S-H on him. Yuki: *Giggles Kumiko: Am not! Ai: It's so obvious! *ring ring - bell rings Yuki: Let's go! SCENE 4 to be continued ---------------------- were open for any comments or corrections |
Fatal1078Jul 3, 2009 5:24 AM
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| sorry for the late post... here's the continuation ---------------------------------- SCENE 4 *Class ongoing *ring ring - bell rings *Class ends Yuki: *Fixing her things Another day, still nothing interesting happened, yet if only for those two! Ai: *Pops out Hey Yuki want to do our homework together? Kumiko is waiting at the dorm. (At the dorm) *Kumiko singing and Asuka playing the guitar Yuki: *Shocked (Inside Yuki's mind) *She's in the same club as I am Kumiko: Oh!... Let me introduce you to~ Yuki: Akimoto Asuka! Aki: Huh?! *Shocked at the same time curious How did you know my name? Yuki: We're in the same club remember. Aki: Ah... Who are you again?... Yuki: *Giggles Midori Yuki Aki: Oh yeah! I remember you now, you're the super energetic girl from yesterday. Ai/Kumiko: Huh? Ai: That's weird they're both in the same class and they don't know each other. Kumiko: *Looks at Ai while whispering from afar Look whose talking. Ai: Huh? did you say something? Kumiko: Ah... nothing Aki: Hahaha... Sorry I wasn't really paying attention on the new students. Yuki: Ah... I see, so what are you guys doing? Aki: We're jamming *Smiles Yuki: Jamming as in jamming? (Inside Yuki's mind) *Playing music Aki: Whatever *knock knock (at the door) *Takeda Kunio - (dormhead) standing Takeda: Sorry for the interuptions we will have a dorm meeting later at 4:00 at the school HQ. We will expect all of you to come especially the new dorm users. All: Ok! SCENE 5 *Meeting starts *Meeting ends Yuki: *Sighs Atleast its over... Well that was boring. Ai/Kumiko/Aki: *Nods Kumiko: *Stops Ai: Hey! What are you stopping for? Yuki/Ai: *Spots Ryuzaki Oh... I see *Smiles Aki: Huh? I dont get it. What's up? Yuki: As you can see...blah~blah~ Aki: Ahh... I see... eeee *Teases Kumiko Kumiko: *Blushes *Then suddenly a guy who is 5'7 tall with spiky brown hair and a pair of two green eyes stopped before them Guy: Ummm... Excuse me, do you know where the school HQ is located? Ai: Why? Guy: Uhmm... The dormhead told me that new dorm users should come by for the meeting. Yuki: Huh? Why is that? The meeting is already finished. Guy: What?! Kumiko: Hey! You're our classmate right? Guy: Yeah Aki: What!? He's our classmate? Guy: Don't tell me you don't know me? *Sighs I'm Murukami Tanizaki... Yuki/Kumiko/Aki/Ai: *Introduces themselves as well Tanizaki: You dont need to introduce yourselves I know the 4 of you already. Kumiko: Hahaha... Sorry for that Murukami-san! Tanizaki: Just call me Tanizaki. 4: *Nods Tanizaki: So, I guess the hurrying up for the meeting is useless after all! So see you tomorrow guys! *Waves 4: *Waves SCENE 6 to be continued |
Fatal1078Sep 3, 2009 4:33 AM
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| SCENE 6 Aki: *Seems in a hurry Hey, I gotta go... Ja ne! *Dashes off Kumiko/Yuki: To where?... *Looks at each other then sighs for the consecutive strange acts of people. *Suddenly they saw Ryuzaki alone in the garden. *Kumiko blushes as usual, becomes panicky. Yuki: *Looks at her with rolling eyes Kumiko: *Sounds nervous What? Yuki: You have a weird taste. Kumiko: But he's~ Yuki: He's what? Ai: *Pops out again as usual Do you want me to call him? Kumiko: No! Dont! Ai: I'm just kidding! Kumiko: It's not funny... Yuki: Why dont we just have a goodnight sleep so tomorrow we will have a joyful morning!? Ai/Kumiko: Yeah sure... SCENE 7 (In the dormroom) *Yuki throws herself in the bed Yuki: *Sighs with relief This day seemed to be tiring... (Inside Yuki's mind) *But I'm still not contented with what happened today Kumiko: OMG! Yuki/Ai: What happened? Kumiko: I forgot to finish my homework! Yuki: Oh yeah! I totally forgot about it! Ai: Oh man, I'm too tired to finish it tonight! Kumiko: Yeah, me too... Yuki: Same here... *The room suddenly filled with negative aura, filled with boredom Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *I never imagined it to be boring as this. *Tok tok - door knock 3: Huh? *Looks at the door Ai: I'll get it! *when the door opened the 3 was delighted on who they saw. Takezo: Hi! Yuki: *Lovestruck Ai: Hey teach, what are you doing here? Takezo: I was just wondering if somebody is interested in joining the high jump team for the girls... 3: Umm... Yuki: *Remembers Miharu,because she used to play in the High Jump team for girls. Takezo: So none of you is interested? well, ok! Sorry for the bother! *Smiles Yuki: *Melts Ai/Kumiko: Bye Takezo-sensei! *Closes door Ai/Kumiko: Hey Yuki, you alright? Yuki: *Still melted. Sighs for joy Kumiko: (Inside Kumiko's mind) *I think I'm the only one left normal around here. Chapter 3: She's back ------------------------------- to be continued |
Fatal1078Aug 3, 2009 5:25 AM
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| Chapter 3: She's back SCENE 1 Yuki: *Walking in the corridor going to class It's been one week and there's still nothing interesting happened, well maybe except for Takezo-sensei! *Hearts (background) *Opens the classroom door then seats on her chair. Ai: Have you heard the rumors that we'll have a new classmate? I heard that she's super active in her school. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *Maybe she'll be interesting. *Smiles I hope that's true. Takezo: *Enters room Okay class we'll have a new classmate. She's from a rich school. *Door opens then a girl is standing there. Takezo: Come in Ishigawa Miharu. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *It cant be Miharu: YUKI! Yuki: *Puts her hand on her forehead Oh no! Miharu: *Hugs Yuki. Takezo: I guess you know each other. Miharu: *Lets go of Yuki. Nods and smiles Takezo: You can seat there *Points a seat next to Tanizaki. Miharu: *Skips towards her seat. Humming. Hello! *Smiles with flowery background. Tanizaki: Hi! Miharu: *Blushes. Nods SCENE 2 *Ring ring - bell rings Miharu: *Grabs Yuki while holding a bentou Yuki: W-what? Ai: Sighs! *Looks at Kumiko I guess its just the both of us, Tumito! Kumiko: *Angry face You're on your own. *Leaves Ai Ai: Dont leave me!! Aki: I guess they left you. Ai: Yeah Aki: Ok bye *Leaves Ai Ai: (Inside Ai's mind) *I thought she will accompany me. (At the Cafeteria) Miharu: *Opens bentou full of delicious food. Yuki: *Sparkling eyes Wow! I missed your cooking. Miharu: I made it extra special just for you. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *Even if I tried to get rid of her she still finds me as her best friend. Takzo: *Walks near Yuki's table. *Waves Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *Oh my gosh he's coming. *Blushes Takezo: Miharu-san! Yuki: Huh? (Inside Yuki's mind) *What the~!? Takezo: I want to talk to you in private. Miharu: *Nods Yuki: *Mad (Inside Yuki's mind) *NO! Takezo/Miharu: *Whisper whisper Yuki: *Tries to listen I cant hear anything what are they talking about... Ai: *Pops out crying Let me join. *Blocks Yuki's view Yuki: Get out of the way! *Still blocking Yuki: Grr... Miharu: Hey! Yuki: Hey?! you're done? What did you guys talked about? Miharu: SECRET! *Winks Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) Yuki: So what did you guys talked about? Miharu: Nothing Yuki: Are you sure? Miharu: *Crying. He propose, I confess. Yuki: Did you say yes? Miharu: Yes Yuki: NOO!!! *Head explodes Ai/Miharu: *Staring at Yuki looking worried. Miharu: *Pokes Yuki Yuki: *Pops out bubbles Ai: What a weird girl. ----------------------------------- SCENE 3 to be continued |
Fatal1078Sep 3, 2009 4:00 AM
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| tnx =3 im sure Miru-sama would be delighted to hear that because Miharu is based on her ^^ -------------------------------------------------- SCENE 3 *They heard a crashing noise. Kumiko: Hey guys! Ryuzaki has been asked for a fight! Ai: What? Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *I don't care. *Pretends she didn't heard anything. Miharu: Who's Ryuzaki? (In the fighting scene) Boy#1: Hey Ryuzaki Asshole! Get your butt out of there! Ryuzaki: *Just stares at him. Boy#2: *Taunting Ryuzaki copying his gestures. Ryuzaki: *Still acts cold Boy#2: *Gets irritated Boy#1: This isn't working... Boy#2: Once I lose my temper I'm gonna hit him... Ryuzaki: If you're here to waste my time, then you are free to go and leave me in peace... Boy#1/Boy#2: *Angry. Smoking nose and vein throbs Yuki: Umm... *Looks nervous Boy#1/Boy#2: *Gained crush on Yuki. Nose hole widen, faces turned red Yuki: Can you please keep you're voices down. It's so annoying... (Inside Yuki's mind) *I was only ordered by Kumiko and among the 3 of us I have the most guts Boy#1: *Whispers to Ryuzaki You're lucky this cute girl interfered us or else... Boy#2: We're not yet done with you, so don't think its over. Girls: Wow! Ryuzaki you're so cool! Ryuzaki: I haven't done anything *Looks at Yuki Yuki: *Puzzled Ai: You're awesome Yuki! Yuki: I am? Kumiko: Thanks for that... I owe you one! Yuki: Hahaha... No prob! SCENE 4 Ryuzaki: *Enters music room Aki: *Sees Ryuzaki ??? *Follows him *She hears music *Peaks in Ryuzaki: *Playing the guitar Aki: *Shocked. Door suddenly opens Ryuzaki: *Shocked Aki: Sorry! I'm very sorry, was I disturbing you? Ryuzaki: *Speechless Aki: Haha! I caught you! Ryuzaki: *Still speechless Aki: You were playing the guitar, so does that mean you're in a band back then? Ryuzaki: Kinda... Aki: Wow! That's amazing! Ryuzaki: Keep it a secret... Aki: Huh? Ryuzaki: Be quiet about this... Aki: Sure! In one condition... Ryuzaki: *Looks at her with a straight face. Aki: You're gonna join our band. Ryuzaki: But they will know... Aki: No... Of course not! Our band is an underground band, we only play at night when the students are asleep... Ryuzaki: What about you're bandmates? Aki: Well.. They're like me... They're secretive too... They're reliable as well... Ryuzaki: Sure... Aki: YEAH! Finally our band is complete! *Aki leaves room and Ryuzaki continued playing the guitar. SCENE 5 *Coach whistles (In the Track Field) Takeshi: *Ai was super amazing, they were blown away by her skills Takeshi: Impressive. Next Akimoto Asuka. Aki: Ok (After her run) Takeshi: Good next... (After some students) Takeshi: 7th Ishigawa Miharu *Miharu starts Good you seem to jump high. Next 8th... (After a few more students) Takeshi: 11th Midori Yuki. (After Yuki) Takeshi: You got skills. Yuki: YOSH! (After some students) Takeshi: The last one on the girls line, 18th Yushikuni Kumiko. Kumiko: *Starts off nervously then trips Takeshi: Nice try but you should practice more. Next are the boys. Boys: *Lines up Takeshi: 1st up (After 4 students) Takeshi: Ok... Next 5th Komiyama Ryuzaki. Ryuzaki: Hai *Gets in position Kumiko: (Inside Kumiko's mind) *This is it. *Ryuzaki starts. Girls screaming. Boys awed in amazement. Takeshi: You seem to be pretty athletic *Girls screaming. Kumiko proud with heart-shaped eyes Yuki: Showoff.. (After several students) Takeshi: 8th student please, Murukami Tanizaki. Tanizaki: Uh... y-yes sssir... *Eerie voice. *Starts off but then his jump wasn't succesful. The boys laughs at him but the girls cheers him on. *Laughs Hahaha my bad but I'm ok Miharu: *Blush, eyes widens because she was moved by Tanizaki's motivation Takeshi: You should use more practice. Next ~~ 10th Namihazure Shirou. Show me what you got. Shirou: *Nods then starts Takeshi: Good job. Next ~~ Ok will the 12th try off now, Matsuda Hiei. Hiei: Yes sir! *Dedicated face. Starts Takeshi: Good... Good, ok now may the last student start. (After the last student) Takeshi: I see that all of you did try your best and some really have athletic skills. Although some of you needs to practice a lot and I mean it, that is if you want to pass my subject *Looks at students who didn't do well All: Yes sir!! Takeshi: Class dismiss. SCENE 6 ----------------------------------- to be continued |
Fatal1078Sep 2, 2009 4:25 AM
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| this is it guys..post the season 1 already fatal, if we didn't finish the season 2 by next week...miru will get what she deserve...bwahahahahaha! she won't get away with this.. |
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| yeah yeah i got it ------------------------------------------------ SCENE 6 (Inside the Locker Room) Yuki: *Grabbing her school shoes You were great Ai! Ai: Hehehe *Winks Kumiko: As expected from the Track and Field team member. Yuki: *Looking around Where's Miharu? Ai: She's outside with Takezo-sensei. Yuki: What?! Ai: I think she's~ *Yuki dashes off (Outside) Miharu: *Doing High jumps Hah! *Walks near Takezo How was that? Takezo: Real great. So are you interested? Miharu: Yes! Since I have nothing interesting to do. Yuki: *Looking at them Miharu: *Looks back and sees Yuki YUKI! *Waves Yuki: *Blushes. Waves back and walks near them. *Whispers to Miharu What is this about? Miharu: *Whispers I'm joining the High jump team. Yuki: *Relieved Good! (Inside Yuki's mind) *Good thing, I thought they have a relationship. (Back to Reality) *Looks at Miharu then smiles. Miharu: *Smiles back Let's go to our next class. Yuki: OK! (Inside the Classroom - English time) English Teacher: Okay! Class here are your essays. *Hands out essays. When she reached Ryuzaki. Great work! Ryuzaki: *Speechless... Yuki: *Whispers Showoff! Ai: What did you say? Yuki: Nothing. SCENE 7 (At the Dorm) *Yuki and the others are having a hard time doing homework while lying anywhere around the room. Yuki: This is hopeless... Aki: *Looks at Kumiko You're not doing your assignment? Kumiko: No, I'm done Aki: That fast?! Kumiko: *Nods Yuki: *Surprised Wow! Kumiko you're smart! Aki: *Agrees Kumiko: Umm... Not much Ai: *Suddenly gets in the room Hello! Yuki, Aki! The President of the Writing Club is looking for you! *Momoka suddenly appears Momoka: Yuki, Aki *Teary eyes You forgot its our meeting today. Yuki: ??? *Thinks for a while I remember. Momoka: *Grabs Yuki and Aki then dashed off. (Inside Room 404 - Club room) Momoka: *Fired up Ok! All are present! Hana and Jun: *Cries She was scary when she dragged us here. Jun: *To hana Its all your fault you made me join here! Momoka: Ok everyone listen up! Here is your assingment for the week. Aki: *Whispers to Yuki Not another assignment. *Was suddenly surprised. Yuki: *Was also fired up Yosh! This is where the fun starts. Aki: *Scared Scary... Momoka: Everyone should pass anystory in the end of the week. It could be whatever you like. Kanojo: Group or individual? Momoka: Individual! Jun: Ugh! Oh no! I'll just print it out on the internet. *Momoka goes nears Jun with a scary face most likely a Demon's face. Momoka: What did you just say? Jun: N-no-nothing... She is so scary. *Crying Momoka: I thought so... Hahahahaha! Secretary! Aki: Yes?! Momoka: Write all the schedules. Aki: Yes ma'am! (After the meeting - Outside the room) Yuki: So what will you write about? Aki: *Smiles Bye! *Yuki was curioused Yuki: Hmm... What should i write about? Chapter 4: Secrets of Ryuzaki -------------------------------------------- to be continued |
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| yeah i know what you mean the other writers are busy cuz of school too and so are we admins *sigh ------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 4: Secrets of Ryuzaki SCENE 1 (While walking in the School Garden) Yuki: I only have one day left to pass my assignment in Writing Club. I still don't have any topic... Ahh!!! *Bumps to Ryuzaki. *Looks at Ryuzaki. Yuki: Sorry again. *Looks back *Evil smile I got it! Ryuzaki: *Leaves Yuki (Inside Ryuzaki's mind) *What a weird girl. (Dorm Room) Yuki: Okay everyone, I have a mission for you! Aki: I'm out! Yuki: Wa-wait Aki: *Opens dorr and sees Miharu Miharu: Hello! Aki: You replace me. Ja ne! Miharu: Huh? So what's up? Yuki: YOSH! *Points at the people she calls Miharu! Ai! Kumiko! 3: Us?? Yuki: We will have an investigation! 3: What? Yuki: About Ryuzaki! Kumiko: I'm in! Ai: For what? Yuki: Writing club! Ai: Is it an individual work? Yuki: *Begs Please I only have one day left. Miharu: I'm out. I have things to do. Yuki: *Blocks Miharu No! Miharu: *Slides between Yuki's legs. Yuki: Clever! Miharu: See ya later! Yuki: What about you Ai? Ai: *Grabs Yuki's hand then out of nowhere her uniform changes into a European suit. Yuki: YOSH! Let's change our clothes! I have a uniform for you guys! Ai: *Whispers to Kumiko She seems prepared. (After changing clothes) Ai: WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!!!? Yuki: Your uniform. Ai: I look like a military soldier fighting in war. Yuki: Hehe... That's all I have... Hehe Kumiko: Just for the sake of Ryuzaki. Yuki: YOSH! Let's go! SCENE 2 (School Campus) *Yuki and the others are hiding behind trees and bushes while following Ryuzaki. Classmate #1: Hey guys! What are you doing? And what the hell are you wearing? Yuki: What?! You noticed us even if we were in disguise?! Classmate #2: You're so obvious y' know? Yuki: What?! So this disguise is not working? Ai: Yuki! Dont' talk too loud or Ryuzaki will notice us! Kumiko: You'll blow our cover! Yuki: Sorry, *Looks at Classmate #1. don't tell anyone about this, ok? Classmate #1: Sure, you're weird... *Walks out. *The 3 returned to their proper positions. *Ryuzaki is heading towards the Library. Yuki: So, no wonder he's smart... Kumiko: *Heart eyes That makes me more in love with him. Ai: Eww... That's so corny... Yuki: Now, Patrol #1 and #2 let's head to the Library too. Ai: Patrol #1 and #2? *While questioning she walks with them. (In the Library) Yuki: Oh no! We lost track of him! Kumiko: *Worried Classmate #2: Hahaha! What kind of costume is that!? Yuki: *Angry face You dont'care! Classmate #2: Whoa! C'mon I'm just messing with ya! Yuki: Well, its not funny... Kumiko: Umm... Yuki, you've been carried away again... Yuki: Huh? Ai: Remember our previous classmate? She saw us behind the bushes and you entertained her, That's why we lost Ryuzaki-kun... Yuki: *Awaken by her mistake A-Ahehe... Kumiko: Mr. Classmate, please leave us alone and don't tell anyone about this... Classmate #2: Yeah yeah... Sure... Whatever... 3: *Sighs Yuki: *Alarmed It's Ryuzaki! Kumiko: Where? SCENE 3 ---------------------------------------- to be continued |
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| SCENE 3 *Ryuzaki chose a book entitled "Of Mice and Men". Kumiko: Wow! He is fond of reading books too just like me! *With heart-shaped eyes. Ai: Of Mice and Men is a wonderful book, I've read it before! Yuki: *Writing about the reading thing. *After several minutes Ryuzaki stands and returns the book. Yuki: Wow... That was boring. Ai: You like it to be this way... Kumiko: I don't mind staring at him all night! *After returining the book Ryuzaki leaves the Library Yuki: He's out! Patrol #1 and #2, let's roll! Ai: Yes commander... *Sounds bored. Kumiko: Yes commander! *Sounds excited. *The 3 walks out of the room to follow Ryuzaki. *Ryuzaki now heads toward the Cafeteria. Yuki: Look, he's heading for the Cafeteria... C'mon... *Walking sneakly *Ryuzaki orders for a Chocofudge Donut and a Hot Chocolate. Ai: Wow, that looks so yummy... Kumiko: *While Ryuzaki eats his donut Wow... He's so hot when he's eating... Ai: You're creeping me out, that's gross... Kumiko: *Funny look Yuki: YOSH! I'm sensing this assignment in a near success? ???: Hi! 3: *Looks at the person. Tanizaki: Yo! Wassup! Yuki: Oh! Its you Tanizaki-san! Ai/Kumiko: *Looks at each other knowing that Yuki has been distracted again. Tanizaki: What's with you guys? Is it Halloween already? Yuki: No! We're in disguise! Tanizaki: For what? Yuki: *Whispers to Tanizaki their aim.[i/] Tanizaki: Oh! So that's it! Yuki: Yeah! Ai: Uhmm... Yuki... *Yuki still talking to Tanizaki. Kumiko: Yuki! Ryuzaki's leaving! Yuki: What?! SCENE 4 *While Ryuzaki was nowhere to be found. Tanizaki: Are you suppose to follow him? Yuki: *Stone cold Tanizaki: Uhmm... Yuki? *Still, Yuki is frozen. Tanizaki: Ahaha... Well I guess I should leave now, sorry for the interuptions! Haha... *Walks away with worry. Ai: Hey! Yuki wake up! *Shooks her head. Kumiko: If you're not gonna fix yourself then we'll stop this! *Yuki suddenly gets back on her feet. Yuki: *Shakes her head. Sorry about that! Huh? Where's Tanizaki-san? Ai: He's off... Yuki: Is that so? Kumiko: If we're not gonna hurry we might not catch up with Ryuzaki! Yuki: Ah!... *Runs outside the Cafeteria. *Then... when they saw Ryuzaki they immediately hid under the bushes. Kumiko: Shhh... You're making the leaves rustle... Yuki/Ai: Sorry! Ai: It was so sudden... Yuki: Let's get back to business! (After an hour and several distractions) Yuki: Agh! So boring... Yawn! Ai: Wait! Look where he is going... Yuki: Outside? In the middle of the night. Kumiko: Look! He got some guitar with him. Yuki: ??? What will he do. *Follows him Ai: Look its Akimoto! Yuki: Yeah you're right! That backstabbin' jerk. Kumiko: Are they some kind of band or something? Ai: Why are they playing at night when nobody's listening or watching. Kumiko: I don't know. They must be an underground band or something. Ai: Yeah! I heard about that. *Music starts to play. *Yuki starts to remember something. SCENE 5 --------------------------------------- to be continued |
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| SCENE 5 Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *I think iheard this song in my sleep. In my dreams. I saw a standing beside me he was loneloy but i couldn't see his eyes only his nose and lips. There were tears from his cheeks. Then he hugged me and smiled, and whispered "Thank you". Ai: Yuki! Focus. Yuki: We're done here. Kumiko: Why? Yuki: Nothing. I got all the information needed. Ai: Are you sure because it seemed like there was nothing interesting. Yuki: *Smiles Every person is interesting. Ai/Kumiko: *Looks at each other. Okay! Let's go back to the dorm. Ai: I need some goodnight rest! *Yawn Kumiko: Yeah! That was very tiring. (Back at the Dorm) Ai: *Yawns Goodnight. Kumiko: Goodnight! Hey are you going to sleep Yuki? Yuki: No... I'm going to finish this. Ai: Okay! Suit yourself! Goodnight! Yuki: YOSH! *Grabs her pen and paper So... What title should it be all about??... *Thinks (1 hour later) *Crumpled papers are all over the place. Yuki: *Looks at clock - 1:00 a.m. What! I still don't have any title yet... (Inside Yuki's mind) *Hmm... What? What? What?... I got it!    Yuki: Phew! I'm done. Yosh! *Looks at time - 6:30 a.m. *Ring ring - Clock alarms Ai/Kumiko: *Wakes up Aki: Goodmorning! Yuki: What! I was up all night~ Since when did you get here? Aki: 3:00 a.m. While you we're writing your essay. Yuki: I didn't notice that. Aki: Well, you we're pretty serious. Yuki: Oh! So are you done with your assignment? Aki: Yes! 3 days ago. Yuki: *Mouth drops Kumiko: *Just finished taking a bath and changing clothes stiil has a towel on her hair. Hey Yuki you should get ready. Yuki: But Ai is still in the bathhroom, I'll just go to my closet and get my clothes. Kumiko: Okay! Hurry up or you'll be late. Yuki: *Went in to the closet and fell asleep. (After 40 mins) Yuki: *Wakes Huh? Where am I? *Looks at watch Oh no I'm late! *Dresses *Runs SCENE 6 *Yuki opens door and looks like a mess. Yuki: Ohayoo sensei, sorry if I'm late. Takezo: Uhmm... What happened? Yuki: Nothing. Takezo: Okay, you may take your seat. *Yuki seats Ai: Where were you? Yuki: I was inside the closet. Why didn't you wake me? Ai: We didn't know where to find you. Yuki: *Sighs Ai: You're a mess! Yuki: *Looks badly at Ai. Ryuzaki: *Looks at Yuki then they met each others eye. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *Why is he Looking at me? Ryuzaki: *Turns away Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *What a strange guy. Takezo: Okay let's go back to our discussion. Yuki: *Sighs *Ring ring - Bell rings (At the Cafeteria) Aki: *Walking Yuki: *Points her finger to Aki. Aki: *Surprised *People looked at them. Yuki: Akimoto Asuka!! Aki: Me?? Yuki: Why didn't you tell me?? Aki: What did I didn't tell you? Yuki: Why did you kept it a secret?? Aki: What did I kept a secret? *Eye widens. (Inside Aki's mind) *NO! Yuki: Why were you~~ Aki: *Covers Yuki's mouth. Shh... Don't tell anyone. Yuki: *Looks at Aki. Aki: *Dragged Yuki outside. Yuki: Let go of me! Aki: Shh... Keep your voice down. Yuki: Why didn't you tell me? Aki: We are an underground band. It's supposed to be a secret. Yuki: But I thought you said we should tell our secrets. Aki: When did I say that? Yuki: In my dream! Aki: (Inside Aki's mind) *Eh?? Just don't tel anyone! Wait?!. did you put it on your assignment? Yuki: Nope. I knew you would be mad. Aki: Phew! Ok! Bye! Yuki: Wait! What did you write about? Aki: *Smiles About you guys. Bye! Yuki: *Staring blankly (Inside Yuki's mind) *About us?? Miharu: Hey Yuki! Yuki: Uhh... Hey! Miharu: What's up with you? Yuki: Umm nothing... Hey! I haven't seen you lately. You've been skipping classes so many times. Miharu: I've been busy for a while. Bye! Yuki: Busy? What for? *Walks SCENE 7 (Club Meeting) Momoka: Please hand in your assignment. *Everybody hands it out except for Jun. Momoka: *Goes near Jun. *Mad Jun?! Where's your assignment? Jun: Umm... Funny story... Hehehe *Ducking under the chair. Momoka: *Shouting You! Tomorrow pass me a 100 page essay about how great writing club is. Jun: *Whispers to Megumi. She's scary. Momoka: I heard that!!! Jun: Sorry... Ehehehe... Momoka: Okay... You can now leave. *Everybody leaves. Yuki: *Sighs I'm glad I'm done with that. *Ryuzaki met them then he stares badly at Yuki. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *What's wrong with him? *Looks at Aki. Aki... Do you think Ryuzaki-kun likes me? Aki: I don't think so. Yuki: What is his problem... Aki: I don't know. Yuki: You're his band mate and you dont know?.. Aki: Shh... Keep your voice down. Yuki: Sorry... Aki: He never talks to us. Yuki: Does he have any friends? Aki: I never saw him with a company before. Yuki: What do you think is his problem? Aki: Beats me? Bye! Yuki: Ok! Bye... *Sighs What should I do now??? Umm... I never visited Miru-chan's dorm before... Maybe I should go visit... *Looks at the board of Dorm building and searches Miharu's dorm. Yuki: There it is! Room 555... (Inside Yuki's mind - While walking) *I wonder what it's like... Come to think of it I never went to her house before nor met her parents... Miharu: Hi Yuki! What are you doing here you dorm is on the first floor right? Yuki: No! I came to visit you. Miharu: Well I'm heading to High Jump practise wanna come? Yuki: Sure! (In the School Field) Takeshi: Okay! I'll leave you guys to your captain. Team: Yes sir! Captain: Okay 20 push ups! Team: Yes sir! Yuki: Wow! That seems hard. Momoka: Go Itou! Yuki: Momoka? Momoka: Oh! Hey Yuki! What re you doing here? Yuki: I'm with Miharu what about you? Momoka: Oh! Itou's my boyfriend. Yuki: Oh! Momoka: *Looks at Miharu Wow! Your friend is so talented no wonder she's the vice captain. Yuki: *Surprised I didn't know that. Momoka: Wow! You seem like you don't know much about Miru-chan... Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *I noticed that. I don't know a lot about her but she knows everything about me... *Yuki having flashbacks about everything that Miharu did. Miharu: *Waves at Yuki. Yuki: *Waves back. *Sigh There's a lot of things I don't know about her but I hope I will. Chapter 5: Yuki's First Lead ------------------------------------------ to be continued |
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| hahaha lol read to find out ------------------------------------ Chapter 5: Yuki's First Lead SCENE 1 (After a month) Yuki: *Looks up at the sky. Its been a month since I went to this school. *Sigh A lot has happened. *Flashbacks on the things that they've done. (Mainly Chap 1-4). Ai: *Pops out. Hello! Guess what?! Yuki: What? Ai: Next week is the Cultural Festival and we have a week to decide what to do. Yuki: *Smiles YOSH! This is gonna be exciting. Ai/Yuki: Now what should we do? (Inside the Classroom) Classprez: *Infront of the board. Okay! What should we do next week? Classmate #2: Tea party? Classmates: Nah! Yuki: Whare's Kumiko? Ai: She said she has something to do. Kumiko: *Enters the room holding a chart. *Serious Sorry if I'm late but I have a proposal for the Cultural Festival. Yuki: She's prepared. Kumiko: *Goes in front of the board and stands the chart. I have been planning this for a month so listen carefully. Let's have a play. Snow White! Classmates: *Nods Kumiko: Let's choose the character by draw lots. Chibi Ai: *Drum roll Kumiko: Snow White will be played by *Opens the paper. Yuki! Yuki: *Shocked Kumiko: The prince will be played by... Chibi Ai: *Drum roll Kumiko: Tanizaki. Tanizaki: Hehehe *Scratches head. Kumiko: Okay... Next the Evil Stepmother... Chibi Ai: *Drum roll Kumiko: Will you please stop that! Chibi Ai: Okay! *Cries Kumiko: *Continues Miharu. Miharu: *Sad... =( Kumiko: Ok then the role of the Magic Mirror will be played by... Chibi Ai: *Cries Kumiko: Akimoto Asuka! Aki: *Evil laugh Seatmates: *Scared Kumiko: Uhh... On to the next one. (After a few more characters) Kumiko: Happy will be played by Adachi Aizawa. Ai: *Lightens up like her life has been restored. Kumiko: Fine, fine... Next Dopey from the Seven Dwarfs will be played by... *Draws a name then her eyes turned into hearts. Ryuzaki-sama. Ryuzaki: *Silence, kinda irritated. *Girls screaming Kumiko: Ok I think we've got all the characters done... I will be your director for this play. I hope everyone will cooperate. SCENE 2 (Recess time - at the Cafeteria) Yuki: *Seems to be worried. Kumiko: Hey Yuki are you alright? Yuki: Yea, I'm fine. Kumiko: (Inside Kumiko's mind) *Maybe she's worried about the play. Ai: Hey, when are we going to start practice? Kumiko: As soon as possible... *Miharu shows up. Miharu: Yo guys! What are you doing? Kumiko: Talking about the play! Miharu: So how can you deal with that? *Then Kumiko shares her ideas. Ai: Wow! That's cool! Im in! Miharu: Yea, me too! Kumiko: How about you Yuki? Yuki: Uh... Ah! Yes, sounds great *Smiles weakly. *Kumiko looks at her with a worried face. *Aki appears. Aki: Hey guys! I have good news! Ai/Kumiko: What? Aki: Takezo-sensei told me that we can practice our play in room 1024 tomorrow! Kumiko: Really? Then we should start tomorrow! Ai/Miru: *Nods Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *Takezo-sensei is such a wonderful teacher! *They practice, practice and practice but still Yuki seems to be not her normal self. Kumiko: Yuki! What the hell is wrong with you? You've been acting like that since we started this play! Yuki: *Sigh To tell you the truth I am really pressured. Kumiko: You? You're pressured?! Yuki: I've never been the lead in my entire life! This is my first time! Kumiko: I know how you feel but you need to try your best! *Tanizaki appears Tanizaki: Are you okay? You've been acting strange lately. Kumiko: Comfort her for a minute Tanizaki-san. Tanizaki: Huh? Ah!... Ok! *To Yuki. What's wrong? Yuki: I'm... n-nervous about the play... Tanizaki: *Grabs Yuki's hand with a huge smile. We can do this! Yuki: *Smiles back weakly. Yeah... I guess. *Their practice went on and on until... Classprez: Ok class! Our play is already two days from now. So everyone please I'm asking all of you to cooperate! Let's make this play a memorable one! Yuki: *Looks worried. Tanizaki: *Whispers. You can do it! Yuki: Thank you... SCENE 3 ---------------------------------------- to be continued Oyasumi everyone! *yawn |
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| SCENE 3 (One day left till the Cultural Festival) Yuki: *Made a mistake. I'm sorry *Cries then runs. Tanizaki: Wait! Ai: Let her go... Give her time to think. Tanizaki: Ok. Yuki: *Crying alone at the backstage. I'm so worthless. Ryuzaki: *Heard Yuki *Goes near her and gave his handkerchief. Yuki: *Looks up. Ryuzaki? *Teary eyes. Ryuzaki: *Offered his handkerchief again. Yuki: *Gets the hanky Thanks. Ryuzaki: Just don't tell anyone okay? Yuki: *Nods (Inside Yuki's mind) *I didn't know that he was a nice person inside. Ryuzaki: And don't tell anyone that I'm in a band. Yuki: *Surprised *Eye widens How did you know? Ryuzaki: *Smiles (His eyes aren't visible) *Leaves Yuki. Yuki: *Blushes The first time I saw him smile. *Goes back I'm ready! Kumiko: *Eye widens Yuki-san! I know you can do it! *Hugs Yuki Yuki: Thank you Kumiko. *Looks at Tanizaki and smiles. Tanizaki: *Smiles back and blushes. Let's go back. *The practice continues. Kumiko: *Goes near Tanizaki then whispers. So are you ready for your kissing scene?? Tanizaki: *Blushes Uh... Uh. Kumiko: *Elbows Tanizaki. Eh.. Eh.. Ahahahaha. Classmate 1/2/3: Scary!.. Kumiko: What are you guys looking at? Classmates: Nothing. Kumiko: Go back to your work!! Classmates: Yes sir!! Kumiko: *Irritated Tanizaki: *Looks at Yuki then his cheeks turned red. (Inside Tanizaki's mind) *She is so kawaii. Yuki: *Looks at Tanizaki and smiles. Tanizaki: *Super red then faints. Yuki: Tanizaki! Tanizaki! Tanizaki: *Wakes What happened? Yuki: You fainted. Tanizaki: Oh! Ehehehe... Yuki: You're weird. Tanizaki: *Scratches head. Hehe. Kumiko: Okay! tomorrow is the day of the play so everybody should prepare! Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind) *I can do this. SCENE 4 (Day of the Festival) *There are Fireworks and Balloons *All kinds of stands *People everywhere - chatting Yuki: WOW! People here are extravagant. Ai: Well, it only comes once a year. Yuki: WOW! *Big eyes I want that. *Goes near a barbecue stall. *Looks at the price What!? So expensive... Ai: You should expect it. Miharu: Here Yuki I'll lend you some. Yuki: Thank you! Miru-chan! Tindero: Yuki: *Pays Thanks! *Eats Yummy! So what's the time of our play? Ai: 5 p.m. Yuki: *Breathes deeply. Ai: Are you okay?? Yuki: I'm fine. Miharu: It'll be okay Yuki! Yuki: *Smiles (4:15 p.m.) Kumiko: Okay everyone 45 mins left. Put on your costumes and make-up. Everybody prepare. All: Yes ma'am! Kumiko: *Eye widens This is my big break! The moment I've been waiting for! Classmate #1: Where will I put this? Kumiko: Don't disturb me! Classmate #1: Sorry... *Runs Yuki: *Trying to put on her ribbon then suddenly it flew inside the Broom Closet. She chased it without noticing that something above her is about to fall. Ryuzaki: *Saw it then suddenly hugs Yuki pushing both of them inside the Broom Closet. Yuki: *Teary eyes Ryuzaki: Are you alright? Yuki: *Blushes What happened? Ryuzaki: Something above you is about to fall. Yuki: *Hugs Ryuzaki. Ryuzaki: *Surprised, blushes Yuki: Thank you! Ryuzaki: Ok! Ok! Our problem now is how to get out of here. Yuki: *Lets go of Ryuzaki. You're right. Ryuzaki: *Stands up, tries to open the door knob. It won't open. We're stuck here. Yuki: No! We only got like 30 minutes left. Ryuzaki: This is a problem. *Pushes the dorr. Ugh! Ugh! Yuki: Stop! You're hurting yourself. Ryuzaki: *Surprised (Inside Ryuzaki's mind) *She... Yuki... Yuki: *Knocking the door. Please help someone... Someone... Please! Ryuzaki: *Looking at Yuki. (Inside Ryuzaki's mind) *She's different. (After 20 mins) *Both of them are tired. *Still knocking weakly on the door. Yuki: Someone... Please... Ryuzaki: *Quiet (Meanwhile - Outside) Kumiko: Where's Ryuzaki and Yuki? Ai: I don't know I havent seen her for a while now. Kumiko: Where are they? We only got 10 mins left. Everybody search for them! *All went to search. Kumiko: *Saw the door. Yuki: *Still knocking. Please help! Kumiko: Yuki! Yuki? Are you there? Yuki: *Wakes up suddenly. Kumiko! Please help! Kumiko: Okay! Wait there I'll get some help. Yuki: (Inside Yukis mind) *Like we can go anywhere. Kumiko: Okay everyone help me lift these things up... *Everyone joined forces in clearing the door way. Kumiko: *Opens the door. Yuki? Yuki: *Hugs Kumiko, crying. Thank you Kumiko. Kumiko: No problem. *Sees Ryuzaki *Surprised. Ryuzaki? Yuki: He was with me. He helped me from the falling things. Kumiko: Oh... (Inside Kumiko's mind) *I hoped nothing happened. Okay everyone... 5 minutes left, let's go back... (Play starts) SCENE 5 --------------------------------- to be continued |
Fatal1078Sep 15, 2009 5:05 AM
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| SCENE 5 *Curtains Narrator: Long time ago in a land far away, there lived a Queen. She wished for her daughter to have lips of red like blood, white as a snow and hair black as a blackbird. She named her Snow White. *Yuki appears. but the Queen died. So Snow White had a stepmother. Queen(Miharu): HAHAHA!! *Evil laugh. Mirror mirror on the wall who's the fairest of them all? Mirror(Aki): You my Queen and no one else. Narrator: But as time pass by, Snow White grew to be a beautiful princess. Queen(Miharu): Mirror mirror on the wall who's the fairest of them all? Mirror(Aki): Not you my Queen, but Snow White. Queen(Miharu): What?! Narrator: This angered the Queen. (The play goes on) blah~ blah~ Snow White(Yuki): Thank you Dopey. Dopey(Ryuzaki): *Blush Girls: *Hearts Snow White(Yuki): *Kisses Ryuzaki's forehead. Thank you! Ryuzaki: *Blushes (The play goes on) blah~ blah~ Snow White(Yuki): *Lying in a coffin. Prince(Tanizaki): My Princess! *Goes near Yuki's face, he's all red suddenly he froze because of nervousness. *He's still frozen so the Narrator starts to narrate. Kumiko: *Whispers Tanizaki. Tanizaki: *Frozen Narrator: And so Snow White woke up and lived happily ever after with her Prince. *Curtain close *Curtain opens - All cast standing on the stage Kumiko: I hope you enjoyed the play! *Curtain close Kumiko: Tanizaki!! What was that about? Tanizaki: I was nervous hehehe... Yuki's parents: Yuki! *Holding a boquet. Yuki: Mom, Dad you came! Mom/Dad: *Gives flowers. Yuki: Thank you. *All of Class 1A's parents came except for Miharu's. Yuki: *Looking at Miharu. (Inside Yuki's mind) *Maybe I'll see her parents. Miharu: *Searching Yuki's parents: Miharu-san! Miharu: Oh! Hi there Mr. and Mrs. Midori. Mom: I missed your cooking. Miharu: Okay next time I'll visit I'll make something. Dad: I can't wait for that! You were great by the way. Miharu: Thanks! Mom: So where's your mom? or dad? Miharu: They didn't come. *Eyes turned serious. Mom/Dad: Oh... I'm so sorry. Miharu: *Smiles That's okay! I'm used to it. Yuki: (Inside Yuki's mind)*Miharu... She's really sad... I can tell. Miharu: Bye I gotta go! Mom/Dad: Ok! Bye! SCENE 6 (Few days later) Takezo: *Clapping Congratulations to all of you. We got a great review. Especially Snow White. Yuki: *Heart eyes Ai: Miharu's absent again. Yuki: *Heart pops Huh? (After class - In the Field) Yuki: Hey there coach! Coach: Oh hey! Yuki: Is Miharu here? Coach: Nope. She only visits practice occassionally. Yuki: Oh! Coach: Do you know why? Yuki: No... Coach: Tell me if you know. Yuki: Where could she be? (Back to Class) Yuki: *Looking at the window *Sigh She never told me about her birthday. *Remembers She encircled 24 *Ring ring - Bell rings SCENE 7 *Yuki rushes to her dorm. *Searches for her wallet. Aki: What's the rush? Yuki: *Still searching I'm looking for my wallet. Ai: What for? Yuki: A surprise party! Kumiko: For who? Yuki: Miharu! 3: *Surprised Tomorrow's her bday? Yuki: *Nods then smiles. Please help me prepare. Ai: Isn't she absent today? What if tomorrow she's absent again. Yuki: I'm sure she won't... *Goes to the Bakery shop with Ai. Yuki: Wow!! So many sweets. Ai: What's her favorite flavor?? Yuki: I don't know let's just pick chocolate! (Back to the Dorm) Aki: Hey! Have you heard the news? Yuki: What news? Aki: The owner of the school will come tomorrow with his daughter, apparently the daughter's next to the throne. I heard they own 12 companies here in Japan. Yuki: Wow! They're pretty rich... But we've gotta prepare for tomorrow. *Smiles (Inside Yuki's mind) *24 (The next day) Yuki: Everybody ready? *Holding cake Ai: Yes! *Holding balloons Kumiko: Ready! *Holding gifts Aki: Let's go! *Holding food *Knocks on Miharu's door. *No answer *Knocks again Yuki: Miru-chan... Ai: *Opens door *The room is empty except for the king sized bed and a laptop with many paperworks. Yuki: Miharu? Kumiko: Looks like she's still absent... Yuki: *Sighs... She's all alone without any roommates... Aki: So many flies. Classmate #1: *Running and shouting The President's here!! Yuki: Let's go! (Outside) *Crowd everywhere *A limo parked outside opens door. Volume 2:Chapter 6: Do you know Ishigawa Miharu? ----------------------------------------- to be continued |
Fatal1078Sep 19, 2009 6:38 AM
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| hahaha dont expect too much or you'll be disappointed. well currently were still working on season 2 and we write what comes to our mind the moment we have the pen and ntbk for it. though we've set plans already for the whole season 2 except for the ending. And besides the 3 of us think alike its creeping me out already just like when an idea pops inside my head I always feel the urge to tell them but then they have thought of it too just then and plans to write it or discuss it. Its like my brain isn't private anymore O.o |
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| Sorry for the delay I already finished typing the whole 7 scenes for this chapter and when I was about to save my work the power went out T_T it was a blackout and its all thanks to the rain >.< so i have to start all over again :(( -------------------------------------------------- Volume 2: Chapter 6: Do you know Ishigawa Miharu? SCENE 1 (In front of the limo) *Crowd whispering *Limo's door opens *somebody goes out Crowd #1: It's the President! President Hatsuhara: *Serious Go out my daughter. Daughter: Yes sir... *Goes out *Silence Yuki: Miharu! Miharu: Yuki... Hatsuhara: Daughter! You know her? Miharu: Yes sir. Hatsuhara: *Disappointed look. Let's go. *Enters school *Silence Crowd #2: *Whispers It's Ishigawa Miharu from Class 1A. Crowd #3: Yeah... It's her. Yuki: Miharu... (Inside Yuki's mind) *Why didn't you tell me. Aki: It's Miru-chan. Ai: Did you guys knew about this? Yuki: No... *Tears *Runs away Ai: Yuki seems to be upset... Aki: *Nods SCENE 2 (At the Office) *Miharu with her father. *Looking at the window. Miharu: *Sigh... I'm sorry Yuki. (Flashback) *Back to Grade school - 2nd Grade. *Classroom Teacher: Okay class we have a new student, Midori Yuki. Yuki: *Silence *Shy Miharu: *Raises hand Teacher: Yes Miharu. Miharu: Why is she so quiet. Teacher: It's her first day here. Miharu: Shouldn't she be happy? Teacher: I guess she's shy... Yuki: *Bit her lips. Miharu: When introducing yourself you should be active so people will have a good impression... Yuki: *Silent~ Miharu: Hmph! *Ring ring - Bell rings Teacher: Okay class you may have your break... *All of them ran outside. *Yuki is being teased by 3 boys. Yuki: Stop it... Please *Tears Miharu: *Kicks a ball that hit the 3 boys. You guys are so pathetic. Hurting the weak. *Spits 3 Boys: *Crying *Runs Miharu: Are you okay? Yuki: *Nods *Wiped tears Miharu: You're the new student right? Yuki: *Nods Miharu: Wanna be friends? *Smiles Yuki: *Nods (After Class) Miharu: Do you want to see my secret place? Yuki: *Smiles *Nods Miharu: *Runs (Somewhere in a hill that has a tree with a swing) Miharu: This is my favorite spot... *Swings Yuki: *Suddenly active My name is Midori Yuki! Thank you for bringing me here. Miharu: *Surprised My name is Ishigawa Miharu! You're welcome. *Both laughed and played. (Back to Reality) *Lying on the bed Yuki: *Sigh... Why didn't she tell me? SCENE 3 |
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| SCENE 3 (Flashback - Middle school) *Yuki's house *Yuki and her family are having breakfast *Door opens Miharu: Yuki-chan! Dad: Ohayou Miharu. Miharu: Ohayou!! Ottosan! Dad: *Smiles Miharu: *Holding a box I have a present for you ottosan! I baked it especially for you! Dad: You remembered my birthday? Miharu: *Smiles *Grabs a fork *Gets a piece of cake *Looks at Taiyo Taste it! *Feeds him the cake. Taiyo: *Blushes I must say this is your best one yet. Miiharu: You are so hard to please... Yuki: *Infront of the Scoreboard It makes the score 92-91... *Claps Miharu you're on the lead. Miharu: *Smiles (Back to Reality) Yuki: I missed the old days. Miharu was the one who changed me... *Gets up *Walks out *Goes to Miharu's room *Opens door *Surprised SCENE 4 Miharu: Yuki? Yuki: Why are you packing your bags? Miharu: I'll be leaving soon. Yuki: *Tears Why? Miharu: It's hard to explain... Yuki: *Sob It's unfair... you never tell me anything. Miharu: Yuki... (Flashbacks) *Miharu is the one narrating "Ever since I was a kid my dad always reminded me that when I turn 15 I'll be the one who will replace my father since I'm the only child..." Hatsuhara: Remember daughter do your best all the time for you will be the next who will manage our companies. Miharu: *Nods "...I really never wanted to be the heiress..." Hatsuhara: *Giving Miharu a lesson. This is what you do compute accurately! Miharu: Yes sir! "...That's why I've always skipped school. He always lectures me... When I reached High School..." Hatsuhara: You will go to this school. It could teach you how to manage our companies... Miharu: But... Hatsuhara: But what?! Miharu: Nothing... "...But I disobeyed him because I wanted to be with you..." Hatsuhara: What's the meaning of this? Miharu: I'm sorry sir... Hatsuhara: This is the first time you disobeyed me... I'm disappointed. Miharu: *Eye widens I'm sorry... Hatsuhara: But you will continue the lectures. Miharu: Yes sir. (Back to Reality) Yuki: Miiharu... Why didn't you tell me... Miharu: I knwo you would stop my father... But if my father knew about you he might do something horrible to your family. Yuki: *Tears *Tightens fist *Tears I don't care... Miharu... You helped me overcome everything... That's why I'll help you this time... *Smiles *Runs *Tears Miharu: Yuki... *Tears SCENE 5 ---------------------------------------- to be continued... |
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| don't worry, i'm sure you're gonna like the ending..though i don't have any idea about it, because i don't want fatal and miru to spoil the ending for me.. and the last chapter is still a long way to go.. :D |
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