Here is my fanfic can you guys please give me your opinions of it?
BE MY BOY
BE MY BOY CHAPTER 1 THE BEGINNINGS
AN: Hey guys this is my story about super junior and two boys who meet them and fall in love with the band. This is my first time writing fanfiction so be nice and give me good reviews!!!!!! Okay like my story and comment and rate and send to your friends and follow the adventures of Alexi and YURI .
One fine day in Tokyo the Super Junior boyz where getting ready for a concert and Siwon said and looked at his boday that looked so sexy in the mirror, “Donghae do these jeans look flattering on by buttock ?!” and Donghae said “Yes, Siwon, those jeans do look good” from across the room as he peered at the young boy’s butt. And dem Shingdong cum in and said, “Guys it’s time for the concert!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then both Donghae and Siwon said “sure” and then Shindong replied “Alright be out right now DESU~” with a laugh.
At the same time in Tokyo best friends Alexi and YURI got off a plain from St.Petersburg Russia and now they are in Japan, a place both have wanted to travel too since they were both young. They went to the Super Junior concert and they were realllllllyyyyyyyy excited (if you know what I mean LOL) because dat was their fav band. YURI liked Siwon because he is tall and angleic face and also because Siwon is the head leader of the OFFICAL Siwon fan club of Russia. Alexi likes all of them, but then again he thinks all Koreans are kute and they really float the boat, but he expecially thinks Shindong is supa kawaii because he has lost a lot of weight and Alexi thinks that is really sugoi. So while they were waiting for Super Junior to come out they were graced by other korean bands like Dalmation, Teen Top, and MMMBLAQ, but NOT HYUNA OKAY NOR PSY WHY Gangnem Style (Don’t even ask they just wernt invited to the show). Alexi was really happy bout this, because E.R. by Dalmation was his second favorite song. His first fav and number one is everything by Super Junior, because it’s so hard to pick one song. YURI likes the song Sexy, free and single I am ready to mingle which was off their newest album (Which everyone should listen too because its really good and the dancing is phenomenal in their beautifully executed music videos). So Alexi and YURI where standing next to each other and waiting for MMMMBLAQ to end their song “This is War”. When then they saw Eunhyuk incredulously hiding in the crowd with the fans in Japan because they are all the same so he didn’t look different than everyone else, even though he has dyed blond hair. Alexi pointed but whispered to YURI “SSHHH I Think that is Eunhyuk!” and YURI looked over and said “OMG, no f***king way why is he not with everyone else in the band?” and then it hit them, SUPER JUNIOR WAS BREAKING UP!
AN: Okay guys I know you are all are excited for chapter 2 that’s when you will find out what eunhyuk is doing and if the band will preform and if YURI and Alexi will finally get to see Super junior sing. So STAY TUNED.
-Kyandi-Kun
