This story might be a little too ecchi for me. I mean, they JUST met and she's stripping. Slow down, girl.
And another thing really bothers me, but going by the story's rules, she's 14 and he's 17. Age difference makes it feel really weird: a 14-year-old girl playing a stripping game with a 17-year-old guy. You'd think HE'D tell her to cool it. (Government parter assignment aside, he might get jail time for this.) If they were a year apart in age it wouldn't bother me so much, or even if they were both 14.
So there are my thoughts. I've read more since this part and I probably won't drop it but... ick.