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Aug 1, 2008 3:40 PM

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Its not finished yet but whatever. Actualy I need help deciding what color I should make her clothes... any suggestions?

(Just noticed I need to touch up the face a bit more)



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Aug 1, 2008 4:07 PM

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Animator-Kite said:
hey raidan your making a mistake with your female character O_o when around the hips, it should be curved more...thats the big dif. between a man and a woman in hips ...females have the curves in the hips..=] this is an opinion and not an insult
I drew them, erased them, re-drew them, erased them again. Then I just forgot them and scanned it. Dx
Trust me, they were there. I was too busy measuring and stuff.
 
Aug 2, 2008 6:04 AM

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Well I decided to do some fanart of Sakura from Cardcaptor Sakura! here it is... (Its not that clear cause my scanner isn't that good!) ...:

 
Aug 2, 2008 6:48 AM

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Setsunaku said:
Its not finished yet but whatever. Actualy I need help deciding what color I should make her clothes... any suggestions?

(Just noticed I need to touch up the face a bit more)


Yellow. Like the one on your avatar.

PassionatexLove: Wow. You put some emotions in there. I can feel Sakura is happy. Nice work ;D
 
Aug 2, 2008 7:19 AM

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Halfdemon said:

Yellow. Like the one on your avatar.

PassionatexLove: Wow. You put some emotions in there. I can feel Sakura is happy. Nice work ;D


Thank yoo ^^
 
Aug 6, 2008 10:32 AM

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Kaguya love.


Agh, her hair didn't split in the middle! BLLAAARRGGGH.
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Halfdemon said:
Yellow. Like the one on your avatar.

PassionatexLove: Wow. You put some emotions in there. I can feel Sakura is happy. Nice work ;D


I had trouble getting that hue of yellow/orange... so I went with gray instead. You can tell I was in a great mood when I was finishing it, hehe.

 
Aug 6, 2008 3:12 PM

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pretty nice there set.
I can see she's been killing alot of...stuff xD
 
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Aug 6, 2008 10:21 PM

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just finished the first chapter of my new manga:

http://sonicspin2.deviantart.com/gallery/#kisuke-no-seitenkan-chapters
 
Aug 7, 2008 3:09 PM

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I finished this about a week ago and I finally got over my laziness and scanned it XD

btw there's a bare butt in it X3

<img src="http://i41.tinypic.com/5ukai9.png" border="0">
<img src="http://i41.tinypic.com/bgofnl.png" border="0"><img src="http://myanimelist.net/signature/Konahi_chan.png" border="0"><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/2zefm2x.png" border="0">
<img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/vcyjq0.png" border="0">
 
Aug 7, 2008 3:21 PM

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Is that C.C and Lulu?

Random drawing from me,

The back of her head is cut off, since there was no space.
 
Aug 7, 2008 7:10 PM

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I love seeing all of your artwork!!! It's all so gorgeous!

I only oekaki, but here is some of my work anyways :D
 
Aug 7, 2008 7:27 PM

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Okay, Karini? Your drawing of Hachi(wait, her name's Nana too, right?) is absolutely gorgeous. -bows-
 
Aug 7, 2008 7:53 PM
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here's one of mine, half-assed but pretty ok i think, i was originally going to enter it in the anime art that rocks club contest no° 7 freestyle and characters with glasses... but I ran out of time plus i procrastinate a lot too so bleh -___-;





ahhhh damn it ><''' sorry about that guys.
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Aug 7, 2008 10:39 PM

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Thank you very much Raidanzoup!

ClamMongrel ~ maybe it's photobucket being silly
but I can't see your picture v_v;
 
Aug 8, 2008 10:21 AM

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Me neither Dx!
 
Aug 9, 2008 6:09 AM

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Raidanzoup said:
Is that C.C and Lulu?

Random drawing from me,

The back of her head is cut off, since there was no space.
Yes it is ^^
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<img src="http://i41.tinypic.com/bgofnl.png" border="0"><img src="http://myanimelist.net/signature/Konahi_chan.png" border="0"><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/2zefm2x.png" border="0">
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Aug 9, 2008 4:31 PM

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Wolfie, healing squad leader and Mr.you-call-that-a-bankai needs a bit more work, but it's good nonetheless.
 
Aug 11, 2008 6:34 AM

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Love the drawing Shinobigami!

Here's a couple of mine. (very noobish. ^-^*)










 
Aug 11, 2008 1:37 PM

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nice nice but you have to be more careful with the face structure nex time
 
Aug 13, 2008 7:59 PM

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I havent finished coloring this yet but here's the line art, tell me what you think.

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I havent finished coloring this yet but here's the line art, tell me what you think.



i can't see anything =[
 
Aug 13, 2008 11:59 PM

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Aug 14, 2008 1:14 AM

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I'm not to happy with my coloring too much, but I still like it. The first one was a quick sketch I colored so errors abound. They're kinda big.



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@Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible.

On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda.
Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever.

The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU.
 
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kk the drawings were pretty ok but you have to watch out if you are trying to add some wind effects
 
Aug 14, 2008 9:26 PM

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Shinobigami said:


Wha~ I really like your sketch^^



 
Aug 14, 2008 11:43 PM

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icecreeaamm said:
Wha~ I really like your sketch^^


Why thank you
Here's a little more of my work.



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Aug 15, 2008 12:49 AM

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Shinobigami said:




it would be interesting if those two did fight



 
Aug 15, 2008 12:56 AM

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if that happened...i would've known who was the winner already
 
Aug 15, 2008 1:38 AM

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Raidanzoup said:
@Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible.

On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda.
Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever.

The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU.

Haha, it's nice to have actual critisizm once in a while XD And thanks. A thinner neck would probably be better, and it might look better if her eyebrows were still showing, but I don't usually do that with my style.

Yeah, the third is a bit weird in retrospect.
And a new sketch I did around the first three drawings

These are a lot older, but I'll put them up anyway.



 
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The third drawing is kinda cute, like her tongue says, but it looks like her sweater/whatever folds inwards, since we can't see a border of any kind.

Also, photobucket messed this on up, but whatever...
 
Aug 16, 2008 2:29 AM
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Xahkii said:
Raidanzoup said:
@Xahkii:A less realistic, I mean thinner, neck would suit the middle drawing. I mean, wow, that would be great. First one is AWW, PANDA, but I wonder if you should've let the eyebrows show through the hair. A lot of manga artists do this, because the eyes are the parts that show most emotion. I feel that a lot more emotion can be read if you leave them visible.

On the last one, I think the collar-bones are a bit... stiff. I know they're bones, but I mean they're very uniform, I just don't think they flow well with the rest of the drawing. Torso-shoulder shading makes her look really skinny, but I guess it works. Kinda.
Let's see... The shading on her chest area also makes it look like her chest is bulging inwards. Her hand also seems a bit weird with that line on top, but whatever.

The rest is WOW, I'M AIMING TO BEAT YOU.

Haha, it's nice to have actual critisizm once in a while XD And thanks. A thinner neck would probably be better, and it might look better if her eyebrows were still showing, but I don't usually do that with my style.

Yeah, the third is a bit weird in retrospect.
And a new sketch I did around the first three drawings

These are a lot older, but I'll put them up anyway.




These aren't that bad, I like the clothes design and poses on them. However, the fingers on the first one for the girl should be a bit longer the palm looks too big compared to her fingers lacing his.

As for Raidanzoup's critique I agree on some of them.The wrinkle flow does clash a little bit but mostly because there are some unnecessary folds that interrupts the rest of the "flowy" effect, but you have the right idea.

The Line detail on her left arm is actually semi-accurate, the only reason it looks strange is because we cant see the rest of the arm. If you can picture that her arm is raised slightly forward (facing you like as if you were about to point a gun) the line would make sense, know what i mean? (like right now it makes sense but it looks wrong because we cant see where the rest of the arm is facing)

The wrinkle under her breast is passable I say, only for the sole reason that it could have been your intention for the design of the shirt(?) that the white intricate design underneath her breasts are holding the top part of the shirt together. Plus it does not look wrong at a glance and at full attention. So i say its a plausible and its fine the way that area looks.

Opinions 1 and 2 i agree completely with Raidanzoup.

Overall they are good not too far from complete accuracy and very small errors that are hardly noticeable at a glance. ^___^
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Just a few old sketches from my stuff eh some of them turned out ok but I haven't drawn anything new in a while and MAL and these anime art clubs are inspiring me to go back to the drawing board. Thought I'd share my skill with you guys and then perhaps come up with new much better refined material xP



"Abashed the devil stood and felt how awful goodness is..."~ The Crow


~Wind~ from the Inuyasha "Wind" soundtrack cover.


Another Inuyasha sketch (though i got bored of the series after a while) the characters were always fun to draw. ^^;


He's all yours bounty hunter... ~ i know its not anime xD but i figured what the heck? gotta love Vader though


i know there are a few mistakes but with the exception of the first one, the rest were just randomly drawn and half-assed (notice the procrastination involved in the last 3 weheheheheheh. >.< V)
 
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Aug 17, 2008 5:47 PM

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Line art of, yet another, drawing that I haven't got to coloring yet. Anyway tell what you think.



Finished version:

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Aug 24, 2008 1:00 PM

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Wow, you guys are pretty talented! ^_^

I haven't drawn something in a long time, but this is something I finished a while ago. The link takes you to the finished one over at deviantART.



By the way, it's an original character...
 
Aug 24, 2008 6:10 PM

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:D its great xD!
 
Aug 24, 2008 10:25 PM

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Setsunaku said:
Line art of, yet another, drawing that I haven't got to coloring yet. Anyway tell what you think.



Finished version:



Going by the colored version, I'd say it's very good. I like the clothes.

For some critisizm (which just might be me):
-his left sleeve is a little weird at the top
-his left thumb is in his pocket right? I think the belt is in the way of a pocket there.
-right hand is wonky
-low pants are low
-is the triangle above the belt part of the pants or undershirt?
 
Aug 25, 2008 8:41 AM

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ItachixSasuke


 
Aug 25, 2008 1:38 PM

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Here's one from when I bought my tablet:


And my latest:
Wraithmare
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v3l3no-ansa said:
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That....is full of.......win.....
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Aug 25, 2008 5:24 PM

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v3l3no-ansa said:
ItachixSasuke




Isn't that just a cropped manga page?
 
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Konahi_chan said:
v3l3no-ansa said:
ItachixSasuke


That....is full of.......win.....


arigato gozaimashita^____^
 
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Xahkii said:
v3l3no-ansa said:
ItachixSasuke




Isn't that just a cropped manga page?


it's just a re-drawing
 
Aug 26, 2008 6:49 AM

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lol o_O no stealing people's artwork now
 
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"Cropped manga page"



Take it as a compliment, lolrofl. Got anything else, v3l3no-ansa?
 
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v3l3no-ansa said:
Xahkii said:
v3l3no-ansa said:
ItachixSasuke




Isn't that just a cropped manga page?


it's just a re-drawing



oooh I dig this one, you can tell its re-drawn by the black marker(?) strokes on the hair and maybe a little photoshop inking? cant be sure, but it is hand made. Awesome job. ^__^
 
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A work in progress that I'm slowly building up. Right now I'm at 2 characters, but I plan to have at least 6, all original characters from my own series

 
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