Noboru said:@Erg_Orgy: Style is not only about using fancy Words or having a bigger Vocabulary, though. It's also about how you start your Sentences and how you connect different Ideas. Merely knowing more Words and Phrases to express yourself more accurately doesn't help - not only because of the missing Balance that you were pointing out, but also because solely having an unfamiliar Way of Expressing yourself by switching your style from short Sentences to long ones or vice verse is already a big Challenge.
Style is not only about flavoring your Text with fancy Words, it's about avoiding Repetitions whenever it is possible without changing the Meaning. Wherever you have to me more precisely, you sometimes have to use the same Words twice, thrice and many other Times, as Synonyms are nothing but Words, which are only related in Meaning and thus can't always be applied in a given Context.
As for Understandability, if you try to break down scientific Subjects in Laymen-Terms, you'll get a Corruption of the Meaning. The Challenge is to balance it out between what can be still expected from the average Reader or Listener, and what is needed to convey a given Topic closely to the Point enough.
I'm not too familiar with Goldilock; have only watched a Cartoon about it if I'm not mistaken. However, I believe it's very Possible that Children Stories have been weakened with the Editions that followed after. There was even a little Uproar because of controversial
"Political Correctness" - Changes being made to established Books for Children a few Years ago over here.
That's the Feeling I'm getting as well, since I feel like the modern English Language is lacking Words from their own native Word-Stock to express more complicated Ideas like "Past", "Present" and "Future" however primitive the Words may sound if you take them literally like how "Present" used to be something like
"andward" where the Word itself is describing a Direction you're walking onto right now that could be at least partially understood by modern Speakers.
But then again, English is a
pluricentric Language with multiple Standards and all Standards have multiple Substandards and Dialects. With that, you can have a much richer Vocabulary as well.
Do those Synonyms fit the Meaning in all Situations precisely? Because "sicher" also means "secure" and "safe" in other Contexts.
That's a Shame, because History and everything begins with Mythology. If you're not looking more closely to your own Folklore, you cannot investigate your own History extensively enough, since orally passed-down Sayings and Stories are Parts of the cultural Heritage. Having them collected can give you a better Picture to how People from an older Age have really thought.
All right, then.