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Jul 2, 2016 6:57 AM

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@luna_lewis
You might want to remove the 1-km range from your ability. This is completely unnecessary, as none of Mirai High's amenities are that large.

Also, what do you mean by a "magic bow and arrow"? Does the weapon have a special power? According to your bio, the power was an acquired talent and not a blessing granted by a weapon, so I'm assuming the magic bow and arrow has "magical" abilities.
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Jul 2, 2016 7:44 PM

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If anyone gets a chance to take a look at my character application, please do, it would be most appreciated.

 
Jul 2, 2016 8:13 PM

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@Rachel_Fenrir

We've just finished discussing your character sheet. We've come to a conclusion:

Your character's ability is unusual. It's both overpowered and not.

Focuses all his energy and power into his Bō staff and transforms it into a black scythe, increasing the damage dealt and making the weapon longer, therefore having a larger range.

We've decided to give the damage increase a numerical value. The ability will increase damage by 1.4x.

Also, please specify by how much longer the weapon will be while the ability is active.

This transformation lasts 8 posts and has a cooldown of 12 posts beginning after the transformation has reverted... Following the transformation his features return to normal along with the staff and he is physically drained for the next x posts, depending on how long his transformation was active for (1 - 3 posts = 2 post drain, 4 - 6 posts = 3 post drain, 7 - 8 posts = 5 turn drain).

8 posts is simply too long for an ability duration. 12 posts is also too long for a cooldown. We've decided to give you two choices:

a. Have your ability only last for four posts at maximum, and the duration-cooldown ratio be at 1:1 (meaning that if you only activate the ability for 2 posts, then it will undergo a 2-post cooldown); or

b. Have your ability undergo a two-post cooldown, but your character will be physically drained while the cooldown is active.

Please make the necessary changes. :)
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Jul 3, 2016 7:15 AM

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@Nice Thanks for taking a look at my character :) Please let me know if there is anything else that you think I should change.

Name: Kurosawa Masumi

Age: 18

Gender: Male (Often mistaken for a female because of his feminine features and long hair)

Power: Manifest Power

Power Explanation:


Weapon:


Rank: F

Club: Dance and Drama

Pic:


Personality:


Bio:
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Jul 5, 2016 2:03 PM

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@Rachel_Fenrir
Please add the numerical value for the strength increase (which is 1.4x) to your character sheet.

After that, unless other admins have a reason to nullify this, I present you the seal of approval.
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Jul 5, 2016 3:43 PM

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@Nice Thanks :)

 
Jul 14, 2016 3:08 AM
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Name: Aaron Serah
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Power: Sigils
Power Explanation: Her powers gives her to ability to use sigils as a weapon with a sigil she can summom:
- weapons
- beings
she can even teleport her and everyone else trough sigils to any part of the world
altho it takes alot of her mana
Weapon: nope
Rank: F
Club: No Clubs Currently
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Personality: Calm, Bossy, Overconfident, Arogant
Bio: She was born and grew up in a successful family in a poor capital, she lived without worry until she was about 11 years old, but at that point things changed.

She lost her brothers in a horrible flood and was forgotten by everybody. With the help of a suspicious stranger she had to survive in a wicked world. But with her strength and powers, she managed to survive everything and overcome all odds. This has turned her into the woman she is today.

After finally turning life around, she now works on meeting new, kind people. By doing so, she hopes to start life over on a good note and finally find peace of mind she has never had.

 
Jul 15, 2016 1:27 AM

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@MusicChopers
I strongly suggest you to read the rules and guidelines before making a character. Teleportation of any form, whether short or long-ranged, is not allowed.

Her powers gives her to ability to use sigils as a weapon with a sigil she can summom:
- weapons
- beings

Please specify which weapons and beings she can summon. Also, indicate durations and cooldowns in terms of posts.

Keep in mind that she is still Rank F, meaning that her powers need to not be overpowered.
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Jul 15, 2016 2:44 AM
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so teleportation isnt alowed heh i understand
for weapons she can summom light meele weapons like (swords, daggers,etc..)
for havier wepaons and bigger takes more mana
and ranged weapons (bows, crossbows, etc..)
for beings she can summom normal animals only
for a cooldown hmm...this one is pretty hard
if her mana is 100% how about 3% of her mana goes for weaker summonings (like weapons)
and 5% animals
for bigger sigils she will need atleast 10-20% (thats for havier things)
cooldown it doesnt take much time to draw one so lets say after drawing one her cooldown can be half of minute? for weaker?
for summoning animals about 2-4 minutes?
and bigger weapons about 5-10 minutes?

 
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