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Sep 11, 2015 9:39 PM
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Don't know why this was marked as "Shoujo" on mangapark. Seems like your average otaku fapping material.
Feb 2, 2016 12:58 AM
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For what it is, it's alright. The art style was nice for the most, and the plot was about what you'd expect for a one shot. Though there was some fanservice, I wouldn't quite dumb it down to just being fap material. I liked Umi's character design, and the whole automaton aspect. I wish it had a bit more romance, but there's only so much you can put into 30-some pages. I wonder if the author has any longer manga series that showcase their abilities more.
Oct 11, 2016 6:02 PM
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Well, the author basically wanted to create a Yuri chobits version. Too bad it suffers from too few pages, so that some events didnt have a great impact (like switching out the heart wasnt shown. did that actually happen or sth else?) and the comedy relied too much on kicking perverted men (not that I wouldnt have looked too in their position -.-).

I would have created the story that way, that the real Sora died and left her concious inside the robot, but ofc that would have altered a lot. Well, anyway it wasnt bad, but it just didnt leave a big impression, though Im a fan of science and the AI nad Cyborg(which ofc wasnt implemented here) genre.
It’s time to ditch the text file.
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