| Name: Anastasia Faction: soldiers Gender:female Age: 16 Role:caster Weapon: camera(it's like a floating egg) Ability: can take a picture of an enemy, uses it to find weaknesses and for her noble phantasm. Spells: 1) hail beak, shoots a beam of ice along the ground (1m wide)that becomes a beak (diameter of 4 meters) about 5 meters away cooldown, 3 posts(it's her weakest spell)(no cast time) 2) hail break, a frozen meteor( about 5 m by 5m) comes crashing down, 4 post cool down(1 post cast time) 3)(not a spell from the game) hail storm, her strongest spell that isn't a noble phantasm, a ice storm that is 10m by 10m wrap around the target area pelting the enemy with chunks of ice.(two post cast time) lasts 3 posts, 8 post cool down Noble phanatsm: photo album Description: uses the most recent picture tooken to call a double of whatever was tooken, the double lasts either 6 posts or until it is killed, can not think on its own but has full access to the abilities of target as long as she knows about them. Has access to the NP, but if the clone uses it, it will die immediately afterward. Weakness: she loves animals, bring an animal into the situation and she will be to distracted to fight, she is also physically lacking relying on her spells and noble phantasm to do the trick. Personality: will do what she believes is right, fun and loving, will protect mother russia to the end. Bio:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anastasia_romanov(I'm using ice instead of water because it fits the game she was in better...) Picture:see bio. |
LilGreasyKidAug 17, 2015 3:40 PM
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| Name of Servant: King Arthur Gender: Male Age of Character (12 – 65): 25 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Agent Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Lancer (DUN DUN DUUUUUUN) Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Rhongomyniad (Ron) Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Leaves difficult to heal wounds Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Rhongomyniad (seeing as his spear is not well known, revealing it's name for the Noble Phantasm is hopefully okay as a name) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): The attack takes 2 posts to charge. After having charged it he calls out the name of his spear and throws it at his target. The spear is thrown at the speed of sound with perfect precision aiming for the heart which would kill his target instantly (even Berserkers), but that's not all, everyone he sees as an enemy who gets in a 10 meter radius of his spear after it's been thrown will receive deadly injuries, just surviving those wounds would be something only a strong body of a Berserker could do, weaker classes like Assassins would be instakilled by those wounds, but classes like Sabers would need to withdraw immediately to have their wounds healed. After use of the attack he will immediately collapse though, waking up several hours later, unable to move for 30 posts. Even if he is brought to HQ immediately, he mustn't be left by himself. At least 1 ally has to stay with him and tend to minor wounds he suffered from his own attack. They are minor and as such can be treated by any class with intelligence (not Berserker) with a simple first aid kit (fate explained servants get accustomed to the modern world, meaning they should be able to use one) but if the wounds are left unattendet for 30 posts, he will die. The last drawback would be him forgetting the name of his own sword for 90 days after activation, making him able to fight, but not use his Noble Phantasm. Personality: kind, ambitious, talented and when in battle serious Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/King_Arthur Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): If someone critisizes him, his hands start shaking slightly, outside of battle, this proves not to be too bad, but in battle his ability to wield his lance would be worse Pic (No extra abilities): http://i.imgur.com/dekdg3H.jpg Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mbEZJVa75MM |
diogoraAug 17, 2015 4:04 PM
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Leafz said: Name: Anastasia Faction: soldiers Gender:female Age: 16 Role:caster Weapon: camera(it's like a floating egg) Ability: can take a picture of an enemy, uses it to find weaknesses and for her noble phantasm. Spells: 1) hail beak, shoots a beam of ice along the ground (1m wide)that becomes a beak (diameter of 4 meters) about 5 meters away cooldown, 3 posts(it's her weakest spell)(no cast time) 2) hail break, a frozen meteor( about 5 m by 5m) comes crashing down, 4 post cool down(1 post cast time) 3)(not a spell from the game) hail storm, her strongest spell that isn't a noble phantasm, a ice storm that is 10m by 10m wrap around the target area pelting the enemy with chunks of ice.(two post cast time) lasts 3 posts, 8 post cool down Noble phanatsm: photo album Description: uses the most recent picture tooken to call a double of whatever was tooken, the double lasts either 6 posts or until it is killed, can not think on its own but has full access to the abilities of target as long as she knows about them. Has access to the NP, but if the clone uses it, it will die immediately afterward. Weakness: she loves animals, bring an animal into the situation and she will be to distracted to fight, she is also physically lacking relying on her spells and noble phantasm to do the trick. Personality: will do what she believes is right, fun and loving, will protect mother russia to the end. Bio:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anastasia_romanov(I'm using ice instead of water because it fits the game she was in better...) Picture:see bio. Approved. Soldier Caster 2 diogora said: Name of Servant: King Arthur Gender: Male Age of Character (12 – 65): 25 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Agent Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Lancer (DUN DUN DUUUUUUN) Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Rhongomyniad (Ron) Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Leaves difficult to heal wounds Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Rhongomyniad (seeing as his spear is not well known, revealing it's name for the Noble Phantasm is hopefully okay as a name) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): The attack takes 2 posts to charge. After having charged it he calls out the name of his spear and throws it at his target. The spear is thrown at the speed of sound with perfect precision aiming for the heart which would kill his target instantly (even Berserkers), but that's not all, everyone he sees as an enemy who gets in a 10 meter radius of his spear after it's been thrown will receive deadly injuries, just surviving those wounds would be something only a strong body of a Berserker could do, weaker classes like Assassins would be instakilled by those wounds, but classes like Sabers would need to withdraw immediately to have their wounds healed. After use of the attack he will immediately collapse though, waking up several hours later, unable to move for 30 posts. Even if he is brought to HQ immediately, he mustn't be left by himself. At least 1 ally has to stay with him and tend to minor wounds he suffered from his own attack. They are minor and as such can be treated by any class with intelligence (not Berserker) with a simple first aid kit (fate explained servants get accustomed to the modern world, meaning they should be able to use one) but if the wounds are left unattendet for 30 posts, he will die. The last drawback would be him forgetting the name of his own sword for 90 days after activation, making him able to fight, but not use his Noble Phantasm. Personality: kind, ambitious, talented and when in battle serious Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/King_Arthur Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): If someone critisizes him, his hands start shaking slightly, outside of battle, this proves not to be too bad, but in battle his ability to wield his lance would be worse Pic (No extra abilities): http://i.imgur.com/dekdg3H.jpg Approved. Agent Lancer 1 |
| Name of Servant:Riken Gender:Male Age of Character (12 - 65):23 Faction (Agents/Soldiers):Soliders Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info):Lancer Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount):2 lances Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):both lances unsealing wounds Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit):Rouketpolemos(Rocket in Greece) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):Rikens third lance strapped to his back when activated he stabs his two lances into the ground and throws the third one like a rocket at the target and it will explode on impact exploding and releasing a shockwave one post charge 1 use per battle Personality: Vicious violent glory hog outspoken hot headed Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time traveling):Riken was known as the Demon King and the king killer in Rikens young days he read up on all the others legends like King Arthur Alexander the Great and Gilgamesh he wants to be known as a great hero as well but went about it the wrong way and with the terrible things he’s committed he was thought to be myth and not fact in his time as ruler he genicided one third of a race and had the rest turned into slaves he even attacked a country and had the land salted so that nothing would never grow there again one of his best kills was on a boat to boat battle he lighted his lance on fire and threw it and it hit the king of the other boat and the king fell into the boat lighting the gun powder on fire causing the ship to explode which gave him his noble Phantasm his biggest goal is to kill other kings to prove himself with his main target being Gilgamesh Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info):He is easy to anger and becomes careless in battle or he gets to cocky Pic (No extra abilities):http://orig10.deviantart.net/caa5/f/2014/276/a/c/akito_die__2_code_geass__akito_the_exiled__gif_by_doomslicer-d81i8d6.png Voice Actor (Optional):NA Theme Song (Optional):NA |
LoveandHate91Aug 24, 2015 4:14 AM
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LoveandHate91 said: Name of Servant:Riken Gender:Male Age of Character (12 - 65):23 Faction (Agents/Soldiers):Soliders Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info):Lancer Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount):2 lances Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):Right lance unsealing wounds 2nd lance ignores armors Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit):Rouketpolemos(Rocket in Greece) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):Rikens third lance strapped to his back when activated he stabs his two lances into the ground and throws the third one like a rocket at the target and it will explode on impact exploding and releasing a shockwave one post charge 1 use per battle Personality: Vicious violent glory hog outspoken hot headed Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time traveling):Riken was known as the Demon King and the king killer in Rikens young days he read up on all the others legends like King Arthur Alexander the Great and Gilgamesh he wants to be known as a great hero as well but went about it the wrong way and with the terrible things he’s committed he was thought to be myth and not fact in his time as ruler he genicided one third of a race and had the rest turned into slaves he even attacked a country and had the land salted so that nothing would never grow there again one of his best kills was on a boat to boat battle he lighted his lance on fire and threw it and it hit the king of the other boat and the king fell into the boat lighting the gun powder on fire causing the ship to explode which gave him his noble Phantasm his biggest goal is to kill other kings to prove himself with his main target being Gilgamesh Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info):He is easy to anger and becomes careless in battle or he gets to cocky Pic (No extra abilities):http://kleanritecleaners.com/images/fullmetal-alchemist-brotherhood-greed-ling-i9.png Voice Actor (Optional):NA Theme Song (Optional):NA You can have two lances if you want, but only one of them can have an ability. |
| Can both lance have the same power? |
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| Yes, although you know that if you have two lances, your physical power with take a hit since you attack more times. Furthermore, the armor piercing thing doesn't effect magic armors. And the unsealing wound is just code for 'very difficult to heal'. |
| I'll just have them inflict unhealing wounds |
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| Okay. Repost when fixed. |
| ok changed him |
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| Approved! Soldier Lancer 1 |
| Name of Servant: Aki Mitoshi Gender: Male Age of Character (12 - 65): 24 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Agents Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Lancer Soldier Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Black Scythe Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): When he cuts something with his scythe it becomes twice as heavy. Armor that is hit makes only the armor heavier. When f.e. an arm is hit only the arm gets heavier Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Gas Splash (special attack): he slashes his scythe into the air making a giant cut on that place which releases a cloud of toxic gas. The poison when in someone's body will go for their nerval system making them paralyzed. However if the opponent has something ro cover their mouth and nose the gas won't have effect and if you manage to take Aki's gas mask of his face, he will be paralyzed. The gas takes 1 post to actually come down and it keeps stunning you till you cover your mouth and nose or till you get out of the gas. The gas itself lasts 10 posts Personality: He is a cold hearted person who doesn't care much about his allies. If they get cuaght it's their own fault he always says. He never takes his gas mask of in order to hide his identity. (And some other thig I'll reveal in the rp) Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): In the future the world is wrecked and completely different. Many nuclear wars have been fought and a lot of laboratories are using humans for experimental reasons, one of these is superhumans. One day a few superhumen escaped a lab and were attacking a city. At the moment one wanted to kill a child Aki jumped in and cut it's throat running off with the child to his mother. He was able to fight alongside with his only friend for years till he got captured and turned into 'one of them'. One day Aki was patrolling the area and saw his escaped friend. When he greeted him, instead of the friend greetjng back, he got furious seeing Aki. He rushed at him and cut into his heart with a sword. Aki died after a few minuted killed by his own friend. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): He's very short tempered and has weak legs so when struck here will be a lot slower. Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Takuma Terashima Theme Song (Optional): |
CalCeeeumAug 18, 2015 2:22 AM
| If you hit a person's armor, do they get heavy or does just the armor get heavy? Also, if you hit a person's body part, does their entire body get heavy, or just that part? For the specifics of your gas, I recommend 1 post activation + 10 post duration of the ability and the stun is for 1 post, refreshed for each post they are still in the mist for a make of 11 posts. Fix these concerns and then post when you're ready. |
| Approved! Soldier Lancer 2 |
LilGreasyKid said: Approved! Soldier Lancer 2 he's an Agent though |
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| Name of Servant: Zerzura Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 31 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Soldiers Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Caster Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): A Persian Dagger, once gotten from a thankful adventurer Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): >Sandy Deserts, Allowing her to control the sand as magic. She can shoot it, use it for small sandstorms to blind the enemy, or make a nice beach near some water, making a nice firepit and beach bench >Dry Heat. This basically makes the air dry, causing the Desert Sun effect. It doesnt actually do much except for make things heat up, so its possible to get it quite amazingly warm, perhaps some will see Fata Morgana's, but it doesnt exactly do much~ Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Reality Marble, Zerzura's Oasis Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): In this Plane, Everyone is cast into the Desert, only those with Zerzura being at the Oasis. The Desert is a tricky thing, it causes dehydration and makes it tough to move in, especially if youre not used to it. In here, the sand is treacherous, as its controlled by Zerzura. Enemies arent too far away from the Oasis though, thus unless theyre stopped from reaching it and manage to go the right way, they can restock their water, as total dehydration would hit after 5 posts, for both Ally as well as Enemy. this doesnt kill them, but leaves them unable to really fight. ofcourse, walking and perhaps running is still possible, but fighting wouldnt be. Zerzura herself is somewhere around the Oasis at all times, and can only control the sand. Sure she can walk around, but she wont directly attack someone, and is quick to hide underneath the sand if needed. The way to the Oasis would be to the right, or north, from the point where others would begin, as the desert is a mysterious place. Wondering the other way is still possible, though Zerzura would know where you went Personality: Welcoming and slightly bored at times, loves a good drink, misses her desert. Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zerzura It had been called a City or Oasis, Zerzura however, was a person, the place got called after her by the people who talked about the myth. The City and Oasis were actually the place she lives and resides, yet people don't seem to recall her when they return, and she barely got visitors anyway. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Tough winds and Gigantic Frost Pic (No extra abilities): |
RazorDestinyAug 18, 2015 12:47 PM
diogora said: LilGreasyKid said: Approved! Soldier Lancer 2 he's an Agent though Then Agent Lancer 2! RazorDestiny said: Name of Servant: Zerzura Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 31 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Soldiers Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Caster Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): A Persian Dagger, once gotten from a thankful adventurer Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Sandy Deserts, Allowing her to control the sand as magic. She can shoot it, use it for small sandstorms to blind the enemy, or make a nice beach near some water, making a nice firepit and beach bench Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Reality Marble, Zerzura's Oasis Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): In this Plane, Everyone is cast into the Desert, only those with Zerzura being at the Oasis. The Desert is a tricky thing, it causes dehydration and makes it tough to move in, especially if youre not used to it. In here, the sand is treacherous, as its controlled by Zerzura. Enemies arent too far away from the Oasis though, thus unless theyre stopped from reaching it and manage to go the right way, they can restock their water, as total dehydration would hit after 5 posts, for both Ally as well as Enemy Personality: Welcoming and slightly bored at times, loves a good drink, misses her desert. Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zerzura It had been called a City or Oasis, Zerzura however, was a person, the place got called after her by the people who talked about the myth. The City and Oasis were actually the place she lives and resides, yet people don't seem to recall her when they return, and she barely got visitors anyway. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Tough winds and Gigantic Frost Pic (No extra abilities): Alright. Just remember not to spam. I know you know, but just so you know, you know? As much as I like the idea of the Noble Phantasm, I question how exactly will you determine the 'right way'? I know you said they're decently close by, but I need to know a bit more. Also, what can your Servant do with her Noble Phantasm active? If its almost an instant kill, then we can't have her do too much. Good explanation for the city > Person. It makes sense. I'll be sure to update the page to let people know that this is another possibility, although I'll have it count for the original character/future servant slot. |
| Edited a bit ^^ And thanks~ I thought it was a nice thing :P |
| Alright. So it (NP) is more debilitating than anything? That's balanced and interesting. Good work. Approved! Soldier Caster 3! 0_0; We need some more Agents! |
| So much soldiers... we sure need agents, a lot :P |
| Note to future posters! We need more Agents, Casters especially! Please fill the void! |
| Name of Servant: Ace Blackheart Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 24 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): soldier Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Soldier Saber Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Dual katana's Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):they light on fire is all Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): the cold of darkness (Blackheart) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): his blood literally turns cold and his eyes turn black and the flames disperse replaced with an ice cold touch (ice forms around the wound causing pain but no weakness unless of course the guy he's fighting is to much of a baby) Personality: violent and aggressive if needed and he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): he grew up as an abused child with a natural hate for his father then one day his father forced him.to go to school there he joined a gang and he fought in the gang a bit before leaving the city and becoming a mercenary he's killed many people often hired by police men then one day his contract was his father which he did in an instant but he was framed as the man who hired him was a fake and the man killed was someone who wanted to.kill himself so ace spent a few days in prison before being sent out again to find the fake policeman then.he found him and cut of his head and came back later with the man's head then he was offered a job as a police man he took the job so he now is a police officer and and he's never failed to catch a criminal then he was teleported to some other time and he died from a failed bullet dodge Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more information):his head (Only in the area he got shot) Pic (No extra abilities):  Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. |
SleeplessVampireAug 19, 2015 5:45 PM
| Name of Servant: Hestia Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 18 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Soldiers Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Saber Soldier Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Rapier Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): The rapier's ability is to make the user faster and more athletic Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Lightning Shiv (weapon enhancement): her rapier gets engulved in lightning and every time she hits something it will strike them with lightning paralyzing them for 1 post and will shoot extra lightning around that target damaging people close to the target. The NP lasts for 8 posts Personality: She is cheerful and loves to play with men. She loves to eat sweets all day and drink coctails in the evening Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): Hestia was born as the daughter of the goddess Hestia. Her mom raised her to be strong and help people in need. Once she was 16 she was sent to a city to protect the people in need. She would always fight bandits, demons and all sorts of culprits terrorizing the city. The people loved her and would bring her all sorts of gifts. Also a lot of men wanted to make a move on her but always got rejected. She would also duel men thinking they were stronger and beat them. She would make it a happy city. But one day, a dragon appeared. It started burning down all the houses and people. Hestia started to fight it but hadn't seen demons behind so they held her as the dragon burned her alive. She saw her mom on too of the dragon and realized she had done this all. She died after the dragon roasted her and the demons. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She sometimes gets too excited and rushes into battle with tunnel vision making it easier to flank her. Also her left eye was actually burnt out and doesn't work so her vision on the left is gone. Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Inori Minase Theme Song (Optional): |
CalCeeeumAug 19, 2015 9:29 PM
| Name of Servant: robin hood but in this world his name got changed to Ren Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 26 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): agent Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): agent archer Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): bow and arrows along with a dagger for close combat Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):his arrows light on.fire Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Eagle eye (enhancement) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Eagle eye makes the bows range increased x2 Personality: he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robin_Hood He was teleported to a different time and he now has newer clothes Died from an arrow to the heart (How ironic) Weakness: His bows limited range and a patch of skin near his heart Pic (No extra abilities):  Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. |
SleeplessVampireAug 19, 2015 12:52 PM
SleeplessVampire said: Name of Servant: Ace Blackheart Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 24 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): soldier Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Soldier Saber Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Dual katana's Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):they light on fire is all Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): the cold of darkness (Blackheart) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): his blood literally turns cold and his eyes turn black and the flames disperse replaced with an ice cold touch Personality: violent and aggressive if needed and he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): he grew up as an abused child with a natural hate for his father then one day his father forced him.to go to school there he joined a gang and he fought in the gang a bit before leaving the city and becoming a mercenary he's killed many people often hired by police men then one day his contract was his father which he did in an instant but he was framed as the man who hired him was a fake and the man killed was someone who wanted to.kill himself so ace spent a few days in prison before being sent out again to find the fake policeman then.he found him and cut of his head and came back later with the man's head then he was offered a job as a police man he took the job so he now is a police officer and and he's never failed to catch a criminal then he was teleported to some other time Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more information): his emotions Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. Ice cold touch? What does that mean? Does anything freeze or something? Please be more specific with what your NP does so I can give it a cool down and what not. Also, his weaknesses are his emotions? Please be more specific. How do they weaken him? Furthermore, all Heroic Spirits are dead heroes/villains brought to life. How did your hero die? LoliNinjaa said: Name of Servant: Hestia Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 18 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Soldiers Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Saber Soldier Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Rapier Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): The rapier's ability is to make the user faster and more athletic Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Sexy Charm (special ability): she can make the opponents see her in an even more sexier way distracting them from the fight. The attack has 1 post to start working and has a duration of 6 posts. But if you can get close enough you can see through making the charm not work Personality: She is cheerful and loves to play with men. She loves to eat sweets all day and drink coctails in the evening Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): Hestia was born as the daughter of the goddess Hestia. Her mom raised her to be strong and help people in need. Once she was 16 she was sent to a city to protect the people in need. She would always fight bandits, demons and all sorts of culprits terrorizing the city. The people loved her and would bring her all sorts of gifts. Also a lot of men wanted to make a move on her but always got rejected. She would also duel men thinking they were stronger and beat them. She would make it a happy city. But one day, a dragon appeared. It started burning down all the houses and people. Hestia started to fight it but hadn't seen demons behind so they held her as the dragon burned her alive. She saw her mom on too of the dragon and realized she had done this all. She died after the dragon roasted her and the demons. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She sometimes gets too excited and rushes into battle with tunnel vision making it easier to flank her. Also her left eye was actually burnt out and doesn't work so her vision on the left is gone. Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Inori Minase Theme Song (Optional): First off, could you switch to the Agent's side? They need more people. Furthermore, mind manipulation moves like that are not allowed period. Reality Marbles impose who new realities, which is why they seem like they affect the mind, but they are actually whole new physical worlds. Sabers, however, are not capable of forming Reality Marbles in this game. Please change the ability to something that does not affect the mind. Might I suggest a different amplification? SleeplessVampire said: Name of Servant: robin hood but in this world his name got changed to Ren Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 26 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): agent Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): agent assassin Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): bow and arrows along with a dagger for close combat Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):his arrows light on.fire Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): Eagle eye (enhancement) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Eagle eye makes the bows range increased x2 Personality: he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robin_Hood He was teleported to a different time and he now has newer clothes Died from an arrow to the heart (How ironic) Weakness: His bows limited range Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. I'll allow the name change, but remember that even someone figures out your legend, it won't really matter. Robin Hood is still Robin Hood. Also, the Agent's team already has two Assassins. Might I suggest the Archer class instead? You can change your Noble Phantasm to be more focused on stealth if you still want to be stealthy. The change in class might affect his weakness as well. Maybe the patch of skin around his heart is a weak point? It doesn't need to be just personality and weapon limitations. Everyone, fix the issues/response to my inquiries and then I'll look at them again. Keep up the good work. |
| greasy, regarding Hestia, he's already switching Goe to agents, so he's making Hestia as soldier because I asked him to >.< |
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| Edited Ren Ace will be edited later |
diogora said: Okay, so no need to faction switch.greasy, regarding Hestia, he's already switching Goe to agents, so he's making Hestia as soldier because I asked him to >.< SleeplessVampire said: Edited Ren Ace will be edited later Alright. So he has a really long attack range with a NP activated. Cool. Approved! Agent Archer 2! Faction leaders, please update the roosters with the newly approved servants! |
SleeplessVampire said: Name of Servant: Ace Blackheart Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 24 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): soldier Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Soldier Saber Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Dual katana's Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):they light on fire is all Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): the cold of darkness (Blackheart) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): his blood literally turns cold and his eyes turn black and the flames disperse replaced with an ice cold touch (ice forms around the wound causing pain but no weakness unless of course the guy he's fighting is to much of a baby) Personality: violent and aggressive if needed and he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): he grew up as an abused child with a natural hate for his father then one day his father forced him.to go to school there he joined a gang and he fought in the gang a bit before leaving the city and becoming a mercenary he's killed many people often hired by police men then one day his contract was his father which he did in an instant but he was framed as the man who hired him was a fake and the man killed was someone who wanted to.kill himself so ace spent a few days in prison before being sent out again to find the fake policeman then.he found him and cut of his head and came back later with the man's head then he was offered a job as a police man he took the job so he now is a police officer and and he's never failed to catch a criminal then he was teleported to some other time and he died from a failed bullet dodge Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more information):his head (Only in the area he got shot) Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. Alright, the NP is better and the bio's fixed. His head is his weak point...so, how is that different from any other person? Is it like if he's hit in a certain spot, he'll die instantly or something? Where did he get shot in the head? The right eye? The temple? Where? |
| Approved! Soldier Saber 3 |
LilGreasyKid said: SleeplessVampire said: Name of Servant: Ace Blackheart Gender: male Age of Character (12 - 65): 24 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): soldier Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Soldier Saber Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): Dual katana's Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info):they light on fire is all Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): the cold of darkness (Blackheart) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): his blood literally turns cold and his eyes turn black and the flames disperse replaced with an ice cold touch (ice forms around the wound causing pain but no weakness unless of course the guy he's fighting is to much of a baby) Personality: violent and aggressive if needed and he's kind and caring Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): he grew up as an abused child with a natural hate for his father then one day his father forced him.to go to school there he joined a gang and he fought in the gang a bit before leaving the city and becoming a mercenary he's killed many people often hired by police men then one day his contract was his father which he did in an instant but he was framed as the man who hired him was a fake and the man killed was someone who wanted to.kill himself so ace spent a few days in prison before being sent out again to find the fake policeman then.he found him and cut of his head and came back later with the man's head then he was offered a job as a police man he took the job so he now is a police officer and and he's never failed to catch a criminal then he was teleported to some other time and he died from a failed bullet dodge Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more information):his head (Only in the area he got shot) He won't die instantly it will weaken him a bit though and he got shot right in the part above the ear Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. Alright, the NP is better and the bio's fixed. His head is his weak point...so, how is that different from any other person? Is it like if he's hit in a certain spot, he'll die instantly or something? Where did he get shot in the head? The right eye? The temple? Where? He won't die instantly it will weaken him a bit though and he got shot right in the part above the ear |
SleeplessVampireAug 20, 2015 4:22 AM
| Alright. If it's fixed and edited, I say, good sir... Approved! Soldier Saber 2 |
| But isn't it Soldier Saber 3 since Hestia got approved before Ace |
| True...I thought that was weird, but I clicked the factions thing and it brought me to his character already...whatever. RE-APPROVED! Soldier Saber 3 |
| Name of Servant: Merlin Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 12 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Agents Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Caster Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): A tome full of scary drawings resembling death along with weird chants Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She does necromancy. Her abilities are these: 1. She can make 5 ghouls come from the ground (needs a graveyard. 8 post cooldown) 2. She can make 2 tombstones appear from the ground so she can make 2 ghouls. 7 post cooldown) 3. She can take a ghoul's life in order to heal herself (12 post cooldown) Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): In The Eyes of the Dead (noble phantasm) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She can make a person see all their ally's, friends, family and Merlin herself dead in the form of a zombie. It will seem like everything is covered in blood and like everything is in ruins. The weakness of this NP is that a person has to hurt themselves or Merlin herslef. Also there is always one zombie that will break the whole NP which if killed will break it. (1 post build up and lasts for 7 posts. 30 post cooldown) Personality: Merlin is an energetic girl who can sometimes be overly optimistic and positive. She always tries her best in everything, as the word "lose" doesn't exist in her dictionary. She is very bright and cheerful, and is usually seen with a smile on her face. But she is also childish, airheaded and often rely others to help her. Because of this attitude, she has developed a very carefree personality and can often easily accept other people's faults. Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): Merlin is a wizard who came from the woods in Brittain. She was soon visited by a king who wanted her to use her magic. She used her magic so that this king could spend the night with another king's wife. From this night a child was born, a boy named Arthur. Merling was appointed to raise Merlin to become a great Brittish king and so she did. Arthur later on appointed Merlin as his advisor and the two became very close. When Arthur got defeated in a war Merlin lost her wits and ventured back into the woods. Here she met the Lady of the Lake. The Lady didn't much care for Merlin but more about her secrets about magic and the forest's secrets. When she had learned enough after a years long fake friendship, she lock Merlin in a prison in the lake where she could never escape from. There Merlin died of starvation and her body rot away. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): (Np weakness in NP descrip.) she of course isn't extremely mobile so when she's getting chased she won't be able to escape all too well. Also she has a fear of starvation. She always needs to eat something in order to not get a pannic attack. Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Inori Minase Theme Song (Optional): |
| Intwresting character concept, but why did you choose Merlin to be a necro?, i would have expected Morgan le fey or other legendary magicians. |
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| Because why not, also the reason might possibly be not knowing many legendary magicians |
| Morgan le fey is anouther Arthurian magician that was evil, she is one of Arthur's biggest enemies fought against Merlin a few times if I rember correctly |
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LoliNinjaa said: Name of Servant: Merlin Gender: Female Age of Character (12 - 65): 12 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Agents Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Caster Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): A tome full of scary drawings resembling death along with weird chants Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She does necromancy. Her abilities are these: 1. She can make 5 ghouls come from the ground (needs a graveyard. 8 post cooldown) 2. She can make 2 tombstones appear from the ground so she can make 2 ghouls. 7 post cooldown) 3. She can take a ghoul's life in order to heal herself (12 post cooldown) Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): In The Eyes of the Dead (noble phantasm) Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): She can make a person see all their ally's, friends, family and Merlin herself dead in the form of a zombie. It will seem like everything is covered in blood and like everything is in ruins. The weakness of this NP is that a person has to hurt themselves or Merlin herslef. Also there is always one zombie that will break the whole NP which if killed will break it. (1 post build up and lasts for 7 posts. 30 post cooldown) Personality: Merlin is an energetic girl who can sometimes be overly optimistic and positive. She always tries her best in everything, as the word "lose" doesn't exist in her dictionary. She is very bright and cheerful, and is usually seen with a smile on her face. But she is also childish, airheaded and often rely others to help her. Because of this attitude, she has developed a very carefree personality and can often easily accept other people's faults. Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): Merlin is a wizard who came from the woods in Brittain. She was soon visited by a king who wanted her to use her magic. She used her magic so that this king could spend the night with another king's wife. From this night a child was born, a boy named Arthur. Merling was appointed to raise Merlin to become a great Brittish king and so she did. Arthur later on appointed Merlin as his advisor and the two became very close. When Arthur got defeated in a war Merlin lost her wits and ventured back into the woods. Here she met the Lady of the Lake. The Lady didn't much care for Merlin but more about her secrets about magic and the forest's secrets. When she had learned enough after a years long fake friendship, she lock Merlin in a prison in the lake where she could never escape from. There Merlin died of starvation and her body rot away. Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): (Np weakness in NP descrip.) she of course isn't extremely mobile so when she's getting chased she won't be able to escape all too well. Also she has a fear of starvation. She always needs to eat something in order to not get a pannic attack. Pic (No extra abilities): Voice Actor (Optional): Inori Minase Theme Song (Optional): Nice! Approved! Agent Caster 1 |
| STILL WORKING ON Name of Servant: Nio Gender: female Age of Character (12 - 65): 20 Faction (Agents/Soldiers): Soldier Class (Look at Necessary Information for more info): rider Weapon (if you're a rider, also include your mount): a motorcycle and a scythe Weapon/Mount Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): her mount has no ability except for the metal being extremely strong Her scythes power is resemblance memory (her hair turns the color of her last kill's hair color) Noble Phantasm type and name (Name has to be related to the spirit): deaths embrace Noble Phantasm Ability (Look at Necessary Information for more info): Runes appear on her body and she has enhanced speed and strength but it leaves her extremely weakened after the fight (it will deactivate during the fight but once the fight ends she will feel weak) and the exhaust on her motorcycle shoot flames instead of smoke Personality:kind and caring to her friends but to strangers she never shows her face and she is a bit cold Bio/Link to Historical/Mythological Hero (If you change anything, you might want to leave a little blurb about it. Minimum for self made legends is 100 words. Also, explain how they died, as well, as well as any achievements they had. For heroes from the future, you don't need to worry about time travelling): She grew up on the streets constantly abused and picked on and because of her car ears (no rape for this part) and some guy asked her if she wanted Money but it turned out to be a rape attempt and a girl 've and killed the men leaving her terrified of the woman for a bit then the woman took her under her wing and after a few years the go to began to train her in weapons combat and she began to like the girl and considered her a friend then one day the girl was dead murdered in front of her and she instantly moved into a life if destroying crime and she was nicknamed feminine death by survivors from her battles (they don't last long if they do escape their death she tracks them down) but one day she was murdered by the one who trained the girl but she took the woman down with her (dagger to the heart) Weakness (Look at Necessary Information for more info): her shin it won't kill her but it will lower her strength Pic (No extra abilities):  When she is wearing her gear  Voice Actor : Theme Song (Optional): If you're an admin and you'd like to designate a main servant and give it a small power boost, please put a * next to your servants name. Please don't make this servant an original idea. Base it off a figure, please. |
SleeplessVampireAug 22, 2015 7:19 PM
| Saber-rider? Pick one, please. |
| Oh whoops |
| Approved. Soldier Rider 3 |
LilGreasyKidAug 22, 2015 11:58 PM
| Greasy, there's 2 riders already, so Soldier Rider 3* |
| Lol, mind fart. You're right XD |
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