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Jun 22, 2015 11:20 AM

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Finished my new signature.. don't know if I should go with the congruent border lines..
Could I get some feedback? :o



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Jun 22, 2015 11:24 AM

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Porofy said:
Finished my new signature.. don't know if I should go with the congruent border lines..
Could I get some feedback? :o




I think both versions look nice. But I would defintely remove that diagonal line pattern you put on the render.
 
Jun 22, 2015 1:50 PM

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Porofy said:
Finished my new signature.. don't know if I should go with the congruent border lines..
Could I get some feedback? :o





I think the one with the vertical lines looks better.
 
Jun 22, 2015 2:25 PM

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Porofy said:
Finished my new signature.. don't know if I should go with the congruent border lines..
Could I get some feedback? :o





I like the first one best and I don't like the diagonal line on the render
 
Jun 24, 2015 10:32 AM

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Here's my latest work!! ; v; May I have some feedback please and thank you!~ The program I use is GIMP btw!


Original photo:
 
Jun 24, 2015 11:03 AM

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MiharuNya said:
Here's my latest work!! ; v; May I have some feedback please and thank you!~ The program I use is GIMP btw!


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its good :)
 
Jun 24, 2015 11:37 AM

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Here's my latest work!! ; v; May I have some feedback please and thank you!~ The program I use is GIMP btw!


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I love it, good job!
 
Jun 24, 2015 1:01 PM

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Sylinchen said:

its good :)


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I love it, good job!


Thank you!! >//w//<
 
Jun 26, 2015 8:16 AM

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Anyone got ideas how to improve my profile? =)
 
Jun 26, 2015 9:11 AM

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My latest work would be this.~
 
Jun 26, 2015 10:03 AM

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not bad but you already are on the level where you should work a little bit more on the blending - your lighting is here and there still off.
 
Jun 26, 2015 10:05 AM

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Hmm, honestly I'm not quite sure on how to blend it well, aside from the lighting.
 
Jun 26, 2015 10:09 AM
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Well, needed something with summer.
 
Jun 26, 2015 11:25 AM

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Nymil said:
Hmm, honestly I'm not quite sure on how to blend it well, aside from the lighting.

Adjust colors (it's kind of not in sync here)
Put C4Ds or other stuff that fits in front of the render. (the little bubbles aren't really doing anything for that)
Improve your lighting (cause I barely see any)
 
Jun 26, 2015 12:01 PM

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Jun 28, 2015 7:20 AM

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Preview

Let's see what I can do with this orz
 
Jun 28, 2015 7:41 AM

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Isa__ said:
Nymil said:
Hmm, honestly I'm not quite sure on how to blend it well, aside from the lighting.

Adjust colors (it's kind of not in sync here)
Put C4Ds or other stuff that fits in front of the render. (the little bubbles aren't really doing anything for that)
Improve your lighting (cause I barely see any)


Ahh, I see. Thanks!
 
Jun 28, 2015 8:23 AM

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Jun 28, 2015 10:48 AM

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I think it looks great :o
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Jun 28, 2015 11:48 AM

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leMayo said:
Uhm~ Can I get some feedback please?



A bit more red

looks good to me =)
 
Jun 28, 2015 3:16 PM

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Here ( First time i make a banner :x )



Feedback please :3



Want a Banner, Avatar, Profile Pic, Signature, Layout or something else ? then take a look at my shop :)
 
Jun 28, 2015 3:30 PM

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Sylinchen said:
leMayo said:
Uhm~ Can I get some feedback please?



A bit more red

looks good to me =)
Thanks :)
 
Jun 30, 2015 3:37 AM

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Trying C4D styles. I feel like it's too oversharpened and too dark.
 
Jul 6, 2015 12:31 PM

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Update my profile with a new layout, feedback?
 
Jul 6, 2015 12:52 PM

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Update my profile with a new layout, feedback?


NAISUUUU.
Just the text about Takumi Aldini is somehow hard to read imo.

 
Jul 6, 2015 5:11 PM

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Update my profile with a new layout, feedback?

I can't read Takumi Aldini. Except it, the layout is great! Good job
 
Jul 7, 2015 12:51 AM

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I updated my layout so opinions please~
 
Jul 7, 2015 4:50 AM

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the "tiny" text on your profile should have more space between each letter. Aside from that it looks good!
 
Jul 7, 2015 8:59 AM

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soaru said:
busydude said:
Update my profile with a new layout, feedback?


NAISUUUU.
Just the text about Takumi Aldini is somehow hard to read imo.


Yeah, the text got blurry when I slanted the picture D:

Xenocrisi said:
busydude said:
Update my profile with a new layout, feedback?

I can't read Takumi Aldini. Except it, the layout is great! Good job


Thanks! ^^
 
Jul 7, 2015 10:37 AM

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Not my latest but I kinda like how these turned out:




Criticism appreciated :)
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Jul 7, 2015 2:16 PM
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@Wadefan1 Abstract looks quite nice.
First signature's I don't like text ant colors. It looks very monotonous.

mine newest.
 
Jul 8, 2015 2:05 PM

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Wadefan1 said:
Not my latest but I kinda like how these turned out:




Criticism appreciated :)

The second one is pretty good, the first one... i don't like a lot the text but i think it's okay.

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@Wadefan1 Abstract looks quite nice.
First signature's I don't like text ant colors. It looks very monotonous.

mine newest.


Why the black around? i think that it'd be better without it, but just my opinion
 
Jul 9, 2015 3:28 AM

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Still new at this <.<
Especially since I use paint :L

I got other forum sets.


 
Jul 17, 2015 12:33 PM
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meh

 
Jul 17, 2015 1:01 PM

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That looks pretty cool Ryoukii. The effects seem a bit too over sharpened in my opinion. :) The text is decent but the black part behind it should be a bit less visible, yet still there.









This is my latest o/
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Jul 17, 2015 7:22 PM

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Nymil said:
The effects seem a bit too over sharpened in my opinion.

The same goes to your current sig. The idea is good, but the lighting could use some work.
And those bubbles/metaballs on the corners bugs me.
 
Jul 17, 2015 11:29 PM

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ryoukii said:
meh


I think more colors would be awesome. And you should work a little bit on your Typo~ I would use smaller text.
 
Jul 18, 2015 12:27 AM

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made two signatures. any advice would be great. i've made graphics on and off since i was about 10 but i have a lot to learn.
 
Jul 18, 2015 2:29 AM

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Envy said:
Nymil said:
The effects seem a bit too over sharpened in my opinion.

The same goes to your current sig. The idea is good, but the lighting could use some work.
And those bubbles/metaballs on the corners bugs me.



Aah, I'll try to fix it. The meatballs in the corner, I forgot to remove those.
 
Jul 18, 2015 2:31 AM

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Envy said:
Nymil said:
The effects seem a bit too over sharpened in my opinion.

The same goes to your current sig. The idea is good, but the lighting could use some work.
And those bubbles/metaballs on the corners bugs me.

Also, it's kind of messy and has no flow at all.
 
Jul 18, 2015 2:43 AM

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Isa__ said:
Envy said:

The same goes to your current sig. The idea is good, but the lighting could use some work.
And those bubbles/metaballs on the corners bugs me.

Also, it's kind of messy and has no flow at all.


Hmm yeah, I have a problem creating flow with fractals. ;-;
The bad part is, that the render is standing upright and it's tough to create a flow on it.
I'll try to recreate it. Thanks. :D
 
Jul 18, 2015 2:50 AM

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I guess this render's more suited for big signatures.. You're right, it's hard to create flow in this little space, but it's still possible. You'll learn that too, don't worry.
 
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Hopefully so. Someone told me to use burn tool on the fractals, since it would help. Going to try fixing that and the lighting in a bit.
 
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my tip for you is that you should begin with creating simpler sigs and learn about lighting first of all, forget about C4D and fractals.
 
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When I make signatures that fairly use fractals, my first thought is which direction does the render flow and do I have fractals that support this flow or can I make the fractals fit. After giving it some thought I realized that I had a lot of renders which weren't dynamic to have fractals as a main focal point.
 
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Sylinchen said:
my tip for you is that you should begin with creating simpler sigs and learn about lighting first of all, forget about C4D and fractals.


Mmm, my problem with lighting is the fact that if I do it in a different style from my original style, it ends up being uneven and quite un-fitting, hence the whole fractal job. I'll try it out, though.


Would this be any better?

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Jul 18, 2015 11:46 AM

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Would this be any better?



Too blured imo. The previous one was better yet too sharp. I would make the mage stand out a bit more again. It somehow loses its beauty and the skull on right is still more sharp and stands out more than the entire image. It often seems that you rush your graphics, no offense.

 
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Nymil said:
Sylinchen said:
my tip for you is that you should begin with creating simpler sigs and learn about lighting first of all, forget about C4D and fractals.


Mmm, my problem with lighting is the fact that if I do it in a different style from my original style, it ends up being uneven and quite un-fitting, hence the whole fractal job. I'll try it out, though.


Would this be any better?


yo
 
Jul 18, 2015 12:03 PM

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Sylinchen said:

yo


Eh?




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Would this be any better?



Too blured imo. The previous one was better yet too sharp. I would make the mage stand out a bit more again. It somehow loses its beauty and the skull on right is still more sharp and stands out more than the entire image. It often seems that you rush your graphics, no offense.


Ah, I see. So make it stand out more, fix the quality. I'll give it a shot.

As for the last thing, none taken. You're right, I think. I took about 10 minutes for the signature, and my graphics usually take that much of time.. so.. I guess I should take some time with it first?
 
Jul 18, 2015 12:42 PM

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Nymil said:
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Eh?

She answering your question, whether it is any better, with yes. lol
And holy cow. 10 minutes. I have to admit, the result is better than anything I could do in 10 minutes, but you still see that it was rushed. I can't leave out the buts, can I..? orz
 
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