Can someone tell me what they think of my essay?

Nov 11, 2009 6:40 PM

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The topic was to say how Wilfred uses imagery in his to advance his theme.

Horrors of War Exposed in Dulce et Decorum Est is very much seen in this poem In war stories we mostly hear about exciting and adventurous people and there fantastic life's.But we rarely hear about the horror and the pain of real war.He helps us understand war's brutality.I don't think he attempts to push all this horror on to our eyes;but to us a look into the real horror of war. Using images of pain and sorrow he makes it very clear.In this poem he totally crush any romantic,heroic ideas of war.When Owen describes the men as, "Bent double, like old beggars under sacks." Intend of the old cliché when the young men proudly bearing any pain and singing the national anthem.Owen's men of war are tired from battle and the weight of the doom that lies.

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Nov 11, 2009 6:41 PM

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Why does this topic appear twice?

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Perhaps it is a magic topic?

Where there is no imagination there is no horror. || Arthur Conan Doyle || Happy Halloween!

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can someone actually help me out here?

Nov 11, 2009 6:42 PM

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lol xD...

Nov 11, 2009 6:45 PM

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aspiringwriter said:
can someone actually help me out here?

Really this is not the best place to ask

Where there is no imagination there is no horror. || Arthur Conan Doyle || Happy Halloween!

Nov 11, 2009 6:47 PM

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Can someone actually critique my essay?

Nov 11, 2009 6:49 PM

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where should I ask then?

Nov 11, 2009 6:51 PM

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aspiringwriter said:
where should I ask then?

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Nov 11, 2009 7:05 PM

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I went to this general discussion place and they are less helpful then you guys

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