| Actually I've already got an storyline --a but, I'm not so confident about my story.. Actually from that settings we could fuse it with eternal_shield's story settings.. With Sonia as High school student, and Nagi as monster.. (I think soon they'll meet again at internet chatting community gathering, and realized if they're know each other..) But, this is my version, story still goes : [coming soon] What about your opinion guys? |
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nekoyaki said: Actually I've already got an storyline --a but, I'm not so confident about my story.. Actually from that settings we could fuse it with eternal_shield's story settings.. With Sonia as High school student, and Nagi as monster.. (I think soon they'll meet again at internet chatting community gathering, and realized if they're know each other..) But, this is my version, story still goes : [coming soon] What about your opinion guys? fine by me , but avoiding direct sunlight makes the girl not monster , it makes her a vampire for my first impression . and for the Guy , the meeting was like stalker caught stalking on her xD [joking] well we can add some more it kinda reminded me a vampire anime , that vampire not really avoids sun , i cant remember . my other story line xD It may be common to some anime/manga you have read |
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| this is my idea.... sorry for late coming.... ~w~ first... the timeline we use is a rumor about doomsday at year 2012 you all know about that right...? the world going messy cuz of some ancient creature named MOA is released from his long slumber..... the ancient guardian of VALKS(a human race who can fight moa) cant do their job anymore that because they were vanished... so the last 4 VALKS member(they r already become a soul) searchin for a new hero who have a great living will... unfortunately..... the main character CHIARU FERDIANSYAH have been choosen to be the one who belong to LIGHT ELEMENTS must fight for the world... after that.... the second main character appear...YUTOMO WINDRADI who belong to DARKNESS ELEMENTS(we call it DEMONS) have a job to help chiaru finish his job.... that two bishounen(kicked) have a fight with MOA.... and kill many of them...(MOA is invisible for normal human) after see his army defeated.... the king of chaos ANGOL MOA.... make his move.... he create and awaken the 4 CHAOS KNIGHT....(with their original soul combined with dead body).... the 4 chaos knight is really powerfull... and then.... reinforcement coming.... ILHAM LAZUARDI(FLAME USER) and AREZ ZAKARYA(MIND USER not elements) came for help and fulfil their task together.... o yea right... they r also students from an high school at bandung city(i choose my hometown for the background time) and hide their identity from other.... this is just the storyline.... i've already make one chapter with kami_sama for the drawing.... 0w0v |
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| actually i have some question for you all..... 1. why the background is always take place in japan? 2. if you want it then we must have a reference about japan... who want to take that responsibility? 3. why must a love story? sorry for asking.... but please... think about the first and second question..... the third is just my personal question... ~w~ |
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| 1. I made my story in a fiction world that when someone going to said its country name, I'll always block it with something.. like : "hey, where are you going for holiday?" "Ah, I'm going to south africa" (in comic we can block it with big noises from a truck) 2. If that was a fiction world, so nobody knows inside that world :p I'll take full responsibility of my story xDD 3. love story, because it's really booming in anime production nowadays.. and I don't too like fantasy, too monotonous.. fighting and fighting, why does boys heart always like that? C'mon, you're a MAN now, not BOY anymore! You should get "Selling Point" from it's.. |
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| well i can accept that... good thinkin nekonyan~ 0w0b well i dont like too much love story... you know... kami_sama himself dont want that.... cuz we doesnt have a real LOVE STORY for the refference... have you?? and im also put a tragic love story to my original manga... as you can see... its not always fighting with Moa.... but a daily school life which is ruined by their duty as a DOOMSLAYER..... and im put the comedy too.... im not make a simple story just like love story... action... magic.... etc... BUT.... I COMBINE THEM ALL IN ONE MANGA.... thats my line with kami_sama... 0w0v |
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nekoyaki said: Is that "No Bra" in adult character version ? Maybe , and i thought you would say that xD [cos after i posted it , it felt like no bra] yuto_daikirai said: 1. why the background is always take place in japan? 2. if you want it then we must have a reference about japan... who want to take that responsibility? 3. why must a love story? 1st - Any thing can happen in Japan xD , simply anything . Even some outer monsters comes to japan xD 2nd - NO ONE 3rd - So you like gore and fighting [kinda reminded me the "Hell girl"] |
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| I have.. Don't you guys have a girlfriend? Don't you love her? |
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| i have too... but you know... reality is really different than you think on manga.... the problem is.... i didnt do something like walk home together.... go to amusement park... etc.... i just like to the point.... love her.... want to marry her.... thats all..... different than you thinkin right.... thats why its harder to make a manga like that... we must have a lot of experience.... do you have experience like that... i think its a big NO.... you r just go date with M++U not so long ago.... you havent reach the SERIOUS RELATIONSHIP here..... sorry.... i didnt mean to lecture you at all.... just telling the truth.... im so sorry again.... |
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| Walk home together? I've done that with motorcycle :D Btw u just use your imagination here, not experience it.. soshite, omae.. Have you been a doomslayer? even doomsday haven't occured in this real world.. takes back your word >:D |
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| ohoho... thats even not walking home together.... ~w~ hey... its a fiction... and fantasy.... thats the different thing than other genre... we can make anything possible right.... 0w0v beat that...... XDD btw... if you use imagination for a love story... its gonna be a big mistake.... that will make the reader heart hurt.... understand that one? if u still not understand... just SMS to my cellphone... i'll tell u everything.... |
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| When you wan't to make a Love Story, you should understand Girl's heart first.. Ofc I'll ask our club godmother (pandamiruku) Nyahahahahah.. |
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| well do anything you want... i just get this line on my mind... "doing what you like is the best than other opinion" 0w0 so i wont hold you with your project.... everyone has their own story.... no matter what will happen next... its depend on that person will..... 0w0v am i right? |
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rikaga said: true! this is so rare that Yuto's being genius (lol) is he THAT dumb ? yuto said: so i wont hold you with your project.... everyone has their own story.... no matter what will happen next... its depend on that person will..... you are right there !~ i agree !~ |
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rikaga said: Sounds like the book "Romiet and Julio"how about making a solid-made character, and as a special club we should make a special story too eh? how about this? a girl met a boy in the internet chatroom, first of all they only said default stuff like "lol" brb, hb, or stuff. realizing that they live in the same town, they decided to met on the amusement park on Sunday. after a while, the girl has finally came and they both are impressed with each other. (girl: you're hot.) (boy: you're hot.) but sth happened at the park, a black suited people are chasing the guy, and the girl had no idea, while he was running here and there the girl is also gettin dragged (lol), and he had to tell the truth, like it or not. the truth is... he's a secret agent from SBI!? (parody to FBI lol.) |
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| Ive got an idea for the main Character's name, if its a Girl as the main Character how about calling her "Lorren"? |
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mattskell said: Ive got an idea for the main Character's name, if its a Girl as the main Character how about calling her "Lorren"? for the following story of rikaga ? |
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| rikanyan~ im not that genius.... im just an otaku who want to conquer the world with my original manga.... XP so.... how about try making that one first.... who will take the character design rule here? 0w0 first we need to create the character..... |
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| Whose story should we use? I agree with eter-san's story (eternal_shield) |
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| ~w~a which one is it?? |
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nekoyaki said: Whose story should we use? I agree with eter-san's story (eternal_shield) anyways @"yuto_ hatred" you should choose yourself cos you got more experience =D |
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| IDK I'll pretty much just go with whatever gets picked |
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| Umm, is this still going on? I mean, besides my own proposal, I have a few original manga ideas too *shrugs* |
| @Eter : Not that fusion -_- @starfleet : O.O Wakatta.. plz wait till someone helps you out.. |
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| uhm.. what r u guys talkin about here? |
| hmm.. I agree ^^ but even though I'm 14 I have a huge imagination, I already have 4 stories for me to make into a manga :) |
| Back to the topic, so we'll create a story that based on Eternal-san's original story.. Do you agree? |
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rikaga said: @valkyrie: only 4? i had 87! XD XD you're gonna make 87 mangas? haha wow cool |
| This thread goint went off topics.. Okay, I'll work @ first chapter soon.. |
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| Done a few minutes ago this far.. nekoyaki said: I'm planning to make the main prontagonist meet with female heroine.. Any idea? |
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| hmm... not bad.... i'll try making the draft with kami_sama...even he's bcome so busy.... ~w~ give me week for the draft..... wish me luck all..... |
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| I need more ideeaaaa... tasukete kudasai T-T |
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| dont worry... i'll help you.. even it cost my right hand for the sacrifice.... 0w0b |
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nekoyaki said: Done a few minutes ago this far.. nekoyaki said: I'm planning to make the main prontagonist meet with female heroine.. Any idea? This character reminds me of Holden from Catcher in the Rye however Holden isn't nerdy nor he likes anime lol |
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| closer to Nishijou Takumi from Chaos Head.. But, this story more closer to school-life, not sci-fi.. |
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| have you read catcher before? I'm pretty sure it isn't sci-fi 0.o Holden has a dormate similar to that and he's not that good to deal with women either This quote here I read, seriously sounds like Holden to me when I read the book except Holden would swear within these sentences instead lol that's my opinion "I think my life couldn’t be better nor worsened. Even I don’t think about my life. What crossed in my mind was only for my own life pleasure. But, I even don’t know what meaning of life pleasure I just continue to do what I’ve been doing this time. What I’ve done all this time? Even I don’t understand." But Holden has a different ending instead of meeting a girl and be together, Holden gets rejected. He realizes that all adults live a lie while children are innocent. Which is why he wants to be a catcher in the rye on a hill where he will catch the children from falling off into the lies of reality. Which gives it the book's its title and it's the book that caused John Lennon to be killed. |
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| I know the threads closed but I gotta ask "the book that caused John Lennon to be killed."? |
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