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| The ending felt really childish to me. The dude also had same disease which contradicts what was said initially "my story". How the hell does he know how she died and what became of her after he was 6 feet under or a fertilizer. Also one simply does not go "she became a star" after one dies. I really have a lot of criticism like one more, the swimsuit. But anyway, the story was still quite good. The exposure to each character on panel was really good, the convo, the art style was stellar. They made sure to emotionally connect the characters really well. As stupid the ending may be, it had an really good ending and execution for a one short. If the author make more of it, I'll be in the line to watch/read first. Overall 8/10 is really fitting for it. |
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| man if they would have kissed at the end it would have been perfect, i dont like how he regreted not kissing her in the end 😭😭😭😭 |
| This was truly an amazing one shot i loved it from start to finish. Will read again. |
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| So simple and cliched, but effective. Nice little twist, would have been even better if there was a bit of foreshadowing though (possible that I missed it). 7/10. |
| Don't know which twist got to me more: Takagi having the face of a kuudere but actually being a massive cinnamon roll, or pigeon boy having the lifespan of a pigoen too. Fr tho this was the definition of short and bittersweet. Wish there were more panels of the two of them just being adorable together |
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