| Can we possibly get an actual description of the hentai rather than just a google translate of the original Japanese that doesn't even make sense |
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| Lol, of course no -_- |
| Yes! PLEASE!!! Fix this. MAL has higher standards than that. |
| Heres my take: A young man from a somewhat noble household is attended by a beautiful young women at this academy. She is a traditionalist, and apparently was engaged to him from their youth. BUt right off the bat, though tsundere and seemingly cold, she is lusty, engaging, smart, and wants him. What follows are some good scenes of sexual engagements that , coupled with what seems like a deeper plot that could have been, make for a satisfying hentai. Happy endings all round." 6.5/10 lol |
AnchientProphet2 said: Heres my take: A young man from a somewhat noble household is attended by a beautiful young women at this academy. She is a traditionalist, and apparently was engaged to him from their youth. BUt right off the bat, though tsundere and seemingly cold, she is lusty, engaging, smart, and wants him. What follows are some good scenes of sexual engagements that , coupled with what seems like a deeper plot that could have been, make for a satisfying hentai. Happy endings all round." 6.5/10 lol Did you submit this? Sounds a million times better and is much more relevant than that google translated crap. |
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Ennetsu said: AnchientProphet2 said: Heres my take: A young man from a somewhat noble household is attended by a beautiful young women at this academy. She is a traditionalist, and apparently was engaged to him from their youth. BUt right off the bat, though tsundere and seemingly cold, she is lusty, engaging, smart, and wants him. What follows are some good scenes of sexual engagements that , coupled with what seems like a deeper plot that could have been, make for a satisfying hentai. Happy endings all round." 6.5/10 lol Did you submit this? Sounds a million times better and is much more relevant than that google translated crap. I stopped writing actual reviews or submitting things years ago...everyone would either accuse me of not writing well and force MAL to reject my stuff, or it would just get ignored. BUt by all means use what I got and submit it, maybe they will listen to you. I seem to have rubbed some people the wrong way in the community a long time ago lol. Luck to ya!! |
| I submitted my synopsis like suggessted to me. SO hopefully after the holidays MAL uses it instead of the crummy one they have for the show. We shall see lol |
elkensteyin said: I just submitted a better synopsis. See how you like this:Can we possibly get an actual description of the hentai rather than just a google translate of the original Japanese that doesn't even make sense "Miyako and Kabuto are both fencing prodigies. Miyako is also the fiancee of Kabuto, and she has a habit of going overboard and doing lewd things for him. However, Miyako is a very distant person and Kabuto wonders if she is really in love with him, or if she is just doing things for her family customs." |
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| 9 years have passed and the terrible description is still there, I tried to read it and it and i felt like I was having a stroke lol |
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