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Sep 13, 2016 12:00 AM
#51
@Otonashi Lianna Reidhart is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. He will be assigned to House A-2. @Nice I'm afraid you'll have to write something there. You can flesh it out and edit it later. @SorryMorco3131 Right out of the gate, projectile nullification is OP, let alone for a minor power. Also, please use numerical values for mana costs. +3 STR*Lv is pretty weak at lv. 1, but potentially super OP at just a few more levels. Please reduce this, don't tie it to lv. maybe. your CF is too vague. If it just knocks opponents away, that's pretty underpowered. If it stuns i.e. not letting opponents move at all, that can be OP. Please elaborate further. Also, perhaps add mana costs to your FF and CF |
Sep 13, 2016 1:00 AM
#52
@Nice Buster Highman is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. He will be assigned to House A-2. |
Sep 13, 2016 1:53 AM
#53
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LeCroweSep 15, 2016 6:28 PM
Sep 13, 2016 8:48 PM
#54
@Blairisbest7 Camsen Amarette is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. She will be assigned to House A-3. |
Sep 13, 2016 9:29 PM
#55
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NajikamSep 13, 2016 11:11 PM
Sep 13, 2016 10:19 PM
#56
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MontyMarsSep 13, 2016 10:56 PM
Sep 13, 2016 11:03 PM
#57
@Najikam Your mana usage in your main power makes the character underpowered. Maybe you could lower the mana usage? Also, your FF is really underpowered. You should probably strengthen it a bit. After that, I'll approve you and put you in house A-3. @MontyMars Approved! You'll be in house B-1 @Byakugaran Approved! You'll be in house A-3. |
Sep 13, 2016 11:14 PM
#58
Najikam Approved! You'll be in house A-3. |
Sep 13, 2016 11:28 PM
#59
@SoulXTreme Masuku Hige is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. She will be assigned to House B-1. |
HarukaSep 13, 2016 11:51 PM
Sep 14, 2016 12:28 AM
#60
Jakob Price “...”
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WymsicalSep 16, 2016 3:26 PM
Sep 14, 2016 8:49 AM
#61
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PliniusSep 15, 2016 7:09 AM
Sep 14, 2016 5:21 PM
#63
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TubaSep 16, 2016 7:27 PM
Sep 15, 2016 3:40 AM
#64
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WhoremoansSep 16, 2016 6:09 AM
There's a lady who's sure All that glitters is gold And she's buying a stairway to heaven When she gets there she knows If the stores are all closed With a word she can get what she came for Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven |
Sep 15, 2016 5:54 AM
#65
@Byakugaran Byakugaran said:
Atalanta Artemis is approved to enter in Olimpia. Please add your character at Character Profile. Keep in mind that other admins can disagree with this decision. Happy RP at Legion City Plinius Since you asked to be "Kiyomi Nakamura" housing, she will be in a "only female" housing. Resulting at you being place on HOUSE - B-2 |
Sep 15, 2016 7:12 AM
#66
@Plinius Kiyomi Nakamura is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. She will be assigned to House B-2. |
Sep 15, 2016 9:12 AM
#67
@Whoremoans Whoremoans said:
Ashton Ramsay is approved to enter in Olimpia. Please add your character at Character Profile. Keep in mind that other admins can disagree with this decision. Happy RP at Legion City Plinius You have been assigned to the House A-4 (Note: I know its your freedom and right to use the stats however you want. But do please don't abuse the capability of dodging (aka Agility). (No speedblitzing or unreasonable curbstomping.) |
Sep 15, 2016 6:41 PM
#68
@SorryMorco3131 Emma Rose is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. She will be assigned to House B-1. |
Sep 15, 2016 11:54 PM
#70
The Guy "I have awakened, and the Battle-Tide calls to me again..."
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Darth_LewdiousSep 17, 2016 7:51 PM
Sep 16, 2016 12:54 AM
#71
Name: Raum Kaourig Morvannou Alias/Stage Name/Nickname: Beakface, Bird-brain, He-Who-Touches-Birds Age: 28 Gender: Male Level: 1 Class: Sharpshooter Appearance: Total Power Points: 12/12 Main Power: Agent of Simurgh Raum Kaourig Morvannou is an Agent of Simurgh, who excels at long-range attacks. He commands any and all birds present in the area and ones he has tamed so far to follow and attack enemies, dealing damage or inflicting hindering effects even from extreme ranges. The birds are treated as projectiles, making the birds untargetable by attacks, though when blocked, the birds simply rise up into the air once again, ready for another attack.
Stats Total Stat Points Boosters: 3 (+1 Agility, +1 Perception, +1 Mana)
Final Force: The Vulture Waits The Vulture, an omen of death to many, lies in wait just as Raum commanded. The vulture stays in the area and is considered as a counter, patiently waiting for an enemy to approach a near-death state. Though certain conditions should be met before the skill’s use:
Once the target’s health reaches a certain level, the vulture automatically executes the target. The health percentage requirement for the kill is affected by the target’s endurance.
The damage taken by the target can be reduced by 5% if the target manages to attack the vulture first. Raum then loses HP equivalent to the damage dealt by the vulture, but is reduced by 5% if the enemy attacks the vulture. The vulture then retreats back to Raum, circling above his head, and rests for the rest of the match. Counter Force: False Brood Requisites: 50% HP or below All birds within the area and Raum’s cage flock together to heal a targeted enemy by shredding and transferring large amounts of health from another targeted enemy. The amount of health that will be transferred is equivalent to the heal target’s missing Total HP% (Maximum of 40% HP). The drain and heal targets also depends on the number of enemies and allies on the field.
Equipment and Weaponry: Raum carries a short sword he uses for defending himself in melee combat. He commands birds by whistling and imitating the sounds they make. Skills: After having to live with birds all his life, Raum has developed quite a number of skills:
Personality: Raum, despite his inert ability to get flocked on by birds, is actually quite the gentleman. He eats, fights, gets mobbed by birds, sleeps, and does other stuff a normal person would do, however. Despite his quirk, Raum can hold a normal conversation with people. He says ‘good morning’, while being mobbed by birds, to people he meets at the start of the day. Due to his noble upbringing, Raum knows the basics of preparing tea, proper etiquette, and grooming. Raum is always accompanied by birds of any kind that is present at any area he is in, which is also quite a nuisance for himself and others. He always keeps birds inside houses too. Residential Preferences: Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: Yes. Do you have a preference for which existing characters you want your characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No. Additional Information:Raum always has birds around him, so striking up a conversation with him will earn you favor with him. Raum smokes too, so pardon him for unintentionally blowing smoke into your character. Theme (Optional): Biography: Born into a great house of noble falconers under the banner of Simurgh, Raum is tasked with protecting his family’s lands and servants. That was his task nine years ago. For the next seven years after his house has fallen into ruin and bankruptcy due to incompetent leadership by his Father, Raum has been travelling all across the land with a caravan of adventurers and merchants. His purpose was still the same yet it has a different master. Word soon spread among the common populace about ‘The Bird-flocked Circus.’ They were bird-flocked, but not a circus. All they did was sell beast horns, rare plants, and strike deals; no glory, no fame, no heroes. All was well-off, but the thoughts of having a quiet and normal life will always occur to any adventurer’s mind. Soon enough the adventurers in the group, who were tasked with protecting the caravan with Raum, began leaving one by one. They wanted a life of solace with their loved ones and to die old and happy. With the adventurers gone and with only Raum to protect them, the merchants figured that they should just settle down. Travelling had numerous risks too; bandits, wild beasts, and dragons were the least of their problems so settling down was surely the best option. Seven years of adventure all came down to an end, merchants, adventurers, treasures, gold, and friends, all disappeared. Raum, alone once again, gathered his birds and went off on his own. Driven by his determination and memories of friends of the past, he ventures into Legion City, for a goal he had never laid his eyes upon: Glory, Fame, and Heroism. Recommended by:@Nice |
FistingSep 17, 2016 11:53 PM
Sep 16, 2016 2:24 AM
#72
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DemonIncarnateSep 16, 2016 8:08 AM
Sep 16, 2016 3:42 PM
#73
Wymsical said: Jakob Price “...”
Sorry "we" skipped you. It should be fine for now. Jakob Price is approved to enter in Olimpia. Please add your character at Character Profile. Keep in mind that other admins can disagree with this decision. Happy RP at Legion City Plinius You have been assigned to the House A-4 |
Sep 17, 2016 6:27 AM
#74
@Krop-Tor The Guy is approved. Please post in the Character Profiles thread. She will be assigned to House A-4. |
Sep 17, 2016 7:23 PM
#75
@DemonIncarnate Your character is simply not approvable in any of the powers, sorry. First of all, stats progress by levels not points this means that any increase like 0.5, 0.2 etc. is not possible at all, which renders your main power and your FF not valid. The CF is way too powerful, and the Minor power is not allowed period due to level scaling and free stats. If you want more stats, buy them. Sorry but you will have to redo most of your character |
Sep 18, 2016 6:56 PM
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TubaSep 28, 2016 6:19 AM
Sep 18, 2016 9:48 PM
#78
Jonathan Nelson
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Sho_the_MageSep 19, 2016 3:05 PM
Sep 19, 2016 3:23 PM
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Sep 20, 2016 12:52 AM
#80
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johanex28Sep 22, 2016 3:00 AM
Sep 20, 2016 2:49 PM
#81
Name: Auto Gambino Level: 1 Age:18 Gender:Male Class: Duelist Appearance: Total Power Points:12/12 Main Power: Molten Blade, this power raise the temperature of the twin blades to red hot allowing him to cut through almost anything that is natural. It only last a few minutes before it effects Auto's hands (becoming to hot to hold) and can only be preformed when Auto has a minute of "peace" (immobile, untouched, and able to concentrate) to let the blades heat. Minor Power: Slash Dash (Dope Title I know lol) with a single straight dash in a single direction my character slices the enemy if he can. Limitation he has to be able to move so he cant do the power stand still and he has to have stamina to do it. [*]Stats [*] Total Stat Points Boosters: Costs 2 power points, increases stat level by one each
Final Force & Counter Force (Only used once) : GodSpeed Final Form: He has a borderline precognition to allow him to react faster but not move faster, in order to release this form he has to be low health. Once the form is over he will become immobile for an hour. Equipment and Weaponry: He uses light weight armor consisting of mostly leather and bronze with his one of a kind katana's that a purposely broken in half to be shorter Skills: Charming, Cunning Biography: Auto comes from a common wealth family with linage of family members serving in the military like his older sister (lol yeah sister), He was always against wars and fighting- this makes him an outcast to the family and the wimp even thought they know his skills even for their family are quite impressive. This uneasiness with his families ways allowed him to open up to other people trying to spread love and not violence- and become a wildflower going where he pleased at a young age. Personality: Laid back, calm and collective, optimistic, charming, cunning, hippie, playboy, and a joker. [Additional Information: the scar from his right eye/eyebrow came from bulling while his was in school and is a turning point for him to stick up for himself and others, ands a Hippie. He named both short blades, ones Karma and the others Jinx. Residential Preferences: Nomad -Is your character okay sharing a roof with people of different genders: Yes -Do you have a preference for which existing characters you want your characters to live with? If not then your character will be assigned randomly: No Recommended by: Goliath zP |
thegoliathSep 20, 2016 10:43 PM
Sep 21, 2016 1:42 PM
#82
@thegoliath Aight, sorry for taking so long (but I am the only admin still alive ^^) First of all, I will ask you to remake your char into the sheet, with the code correctly. Main Power: I will ask you to use Posts as Time not Minutes. And you can add some more detail to it, because having the ability to simply be "hot" seems a bit underpowerd for a main power, to me, it sounds more like a Minor atm. Minor Power: Your minor power, like simplyknight said, can be done by simply Rping, like a normal dodge/attack, I suggest adding an actual power if you want to have a minor power. 6+4 = 10 points used from your powers wich means you have +1 stat lvl to use and the Class stat to add to your character, which in your case (Duelist) is +1 Strength +2 Agility +1 Speed So correct that part too. CF & FF I'll ask you to separate both your powers, since one will work to make heavy damage/attack and the other game changing/defence. |
Sep 21, 2016 2:42 PM
#83
@johanex28 Main Power: It looks good and balanced, but if you feel like you are underpowered, I will give you permission to reduce the cooldown to 8, if not you can leave it to 10. And I think you should add how fast these arrows will travel, and what amount of time will they have between each other (in seconds) Minor Power: Perfect, I like it how you instead of mana cost you added the post cost. Very nice. Demolition Arrows: -2 to Speed and Agility to Narok, enables destroying parts of the environment (limited to 3 per fight/event/adventure). I think you can add to this line "Affects the enemy with heavy damage and knock backs" since it has such an high cost to your stats FF: Looks fine to me, but you mention "his arrows unavoidable", so I will ask you to add an precise amount of arrows. And also when you mean "unavoidable" please detail that they will hit the target 100% but they can be blocked, and if blocked they will suffer "reduced" damage. CF: I will ask you to detail this shield a bit more, before we can move to the limitations. Like how much can it block, or how much 1 perception lvl equals in damage blocked/absorved. |
Sep 21, 2016 3:19 PM
#84
@Plinius Yeah all good man I was told that you were the only one holding down the fort for the time being which is a real shame, but thnx |
thegoliathSep 21, 2016 3:37 PM
Sep 21, 2016 3:21 PM
#85
Sep 21, 2016 3:59 PM
#86
@johanex28 Demolition Arrows: -2 to Speed and Agility to Narok, enables destroying parts of the environment. If used against enemies, causes huge damage on area and knocks back the enemies for one post (this makes them unable to do anything during their following post; limited to 3 per fight/event/adventure). I wouldn't say "knocks back the enemies for one post" but do simply a knockback if the hit is direct on his body, dazzling them or something, not adding the 1 post incapacity. And also had an explosion radius like 2m. Let me know what you think about this valeus. Every lvl of perception will equal 10% absorption of damage. Where the base will be 30%, so atm you are at 30% (base) + 20% (stats) making it like a shield that will Absorve 50% of the total damage made to you in that space of time. And making this shield to be up during 2 posts. and you can remove the 5 posts and make it only 1 post to "recover". |
Sep 21, 2016 4:14 PM
#87
@thegoliath Main Power: Please explain what happens when they become too hot, "effects Auto's hands (becoming to hot to hold)", will he have to drop them at some point? Also add mana costs to it. Minor Power: you still didnt change the this power x) And your stat list is still wrong. This is how it should like with only the Duelist buff. Now to this list you can add one more lvl to any stat you want. Strength: Lv. 2 Endurance: Lv. 1 Stamina: Lv. 1 Mana: Lv. 1 Speed: Lv. 2 Agility: Lv. 3 Mana Regeneration: Lv. 1 Perception: Lv. 1 Okay so the Final Force needs - Duration (posts) - Costs (mana) - And that one hour, yet again translate it to posts - and the health, give me % CF: You need to explain what "Susanoo" is and what does he do. |
Sep 21, 2016 6:20 PM
#88
Nevermind cancel my character I no longer will be participating, Thank you |
Sep 22, 2016 3:03 AM
#89
@Plinius I have just changed the things that you asked me for, but I still think that a knockback on the explosive arrows seems nice to me, at least when the arrows hit the enemy directly, but if hit by the area of effect that the explosion creates, you will not be affected by the knockback. Is it fine for you as well? |
Sep 22, 2016 3:07 AM
#90
johanex28 said: @Plinius I have just changed the things that you asked me for, but I still think that a knockback on the explosive arrows seems nice to me, at least when the arrows hit the enemy directly, but if hit by the area of effect that the explosion creates, you will not be affected by the knockback. Is it fine for you as well? Ye that looks fine |
Sep 22, 2016 4:39 AM
#91
Plinius said: johanex28 said: @Plinius I have just changed the things that you asked me for, but I still think that a knockback on the explosive arrows seems nice to me, at least when the arrows hit the enemy directly, but if hit by the area of effect that the explosion creates, you will not be affected by the knockback. Is it fine for you as well? Ye that looks fine So, @Plinius Is my character approved? |
Sep 22, 2016 4:53 AM
#92
@johanex28 Just add this and I'll approve it. You special arrows need to have 1 post in between them once shot once. (the explosive arrows) because I think it wouldn't be enjoyable to the other to get spammed every post with explosive arrows to the face ^^ Meaning that you need to wait one post to shoot another Explosive Arrow. Oh and about the shield, let us know, if you can attack with it up or not And with this it should be good to go |
Sep 22, 2016 6:47 AM
#93
@Plinius Here it is, the final version of it. Hope that it is all balanced.
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Sep 22, 2016 6:58 AM
#94
johanex28 said:
Ragnarok Nexian is approved to enter in Olimpia. Please add your character at Character Profile. Keep in mind that other admins (or players) can disagree with this decision, which can result with some changes. Happy RP at Legion City Plinius House - A-6 |
Sep 22, 2016 1:43 PM
#95
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AllSep 25, 2016 1:49 PM
Sep 23, 2016 10:43 AM
#96
W.I.P.
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Discount66Sep 24, 2016 2:20 PM
Sep 23, 2016 6:17 PM
#97
@Byakugaran Since Im terrible at approving characters, im not gonna. But what Ill do is point out some things that look wrong. 1) Your Minor Power is Incredibly OP. Even if it were a main power it would be OP. 1st off. The mana to speed relation is not expensive enough. Second off, add a serious cooldown to that. Like 4-5 post. Then finally, reduce the time he can use it to one post before cooldown, 2) Your Final Force seems a bit much. I cant tell if its OP or not, so I wont judge that. 3) So a single hit can destroy your Healing Exoskeleton? Because I'd imagine thats what 5% would be most of the time. |
Sep 24, 2016 9:45 AM
#98
@Plinius i have updated my character to be less powerful, could you check if my character is ready for approval. |
Sep 24, 2016 9:57 AM
#99
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WhoremoansSep 28, 2016 12:18 PM
There's a lady who's sure All that glitters is gold And she's buying a stairway to heaven When she gets there she knows If the stores are all closed With a word she can get what she came for Oh oh oh oh and she's buying a stairway to heaven |
Sep 24, 2016 10:15 AM
#100
@Byakugaran AIGHT. Minor power: This is quite a good minor power you have here. Make that you can't regen mana while you have this skill active, meaning you wont have mana regeneration for 3 posts or when it gets interrupted. They can't stack. Which means only one curse per person. As whoremoans said, having a way to dispel it would be good. Since you can simply attack -> curse -> wait for cooldown -> repeat. So adding for example: you get attacked, the curse dispels. The cool-down and duration seems fine. FF: I am not really sure about this skill. Something that will follow you in a battle field sounds pretty strong. Add this cost: You cant get your spear back unless you pick it up by yourself. I think its fair, since a strong skill (as yours) requires a high cost. You know that mages and sharpshooters don't have ways of blocking it. So this might have to have a look from other admin. But for now add that cost. CF: I think you should nerf a bit this heal, since you become a some sort of tank assasin, I will follow whores suggestion on making it 5% each turn until 20%. And this 15%HP you are talking about. Is it the armor HP? |
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