Just personal scratch.
Advised, possible spoilers.
Opinion & Informal
Art: 5/10 Minimal. More like doodles some student could draw in class while they were bored. Seki from My Neighbor Seki could totally have done this.
Animation: 5/10 Choppy. Didn't fit into the storytelling like Follow Me did.
Plot: 5/10 Not really much of a plot. More of an inspirational piece. Didn't inspire me personally though.
Development: 5/10 Standard inspirational piece development. Sad transitioning to happy ending with a short glimpse of it just being a never-ending cycle at the end. Unmoving.
Music: 6/10 Didn't like this song from MUSE as much as I did from Follow Me.
Overall: 5/10. It
was okay I guess. One thing to notice is that at the very end of the video you see a small glimpse of tanks still firing despite the happy ending just seconds before.