So, the storyline is very cute and fun - no problems there. The length of it made it a little unrealistic because of the quick falling in love part, but then again it's tough for me to grasp when tons of time has passed by when it's not specified ^_^'
Personally, even though Suguru is supposed to be the bishounen, I found Hiroto more attractive overall. The theme is mostly funny, but I found myself "aww"ing...a LOT. Yaoi is yaoi, afterall, and two guys being so intimate is just too much for me! I can't seem to be able to write a decent review right now, so I'll just end with a: OMG YOU HAVE TO READ THIS!!!
