lolifreak000f's Profile


Anime Stats
Days: 125.5
Mean Score: 8.72
  • Total Entries542
  • Rewatched22
  • Episodes7,623
Anime History Last Anime Updates
Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei
Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei
Feb 3, 7:29 PM
Watching -/26 · Scored -
Cross Ange: Tenshi to Ryuu no Rondo
Cross Ange: Tenshi to Ryuu no Rondo
Nov 9, 2014 8:12 AM
Watching -/25 · Scored -
Manga Stats
Days: 15.8
Mean Score: 8.76
  • Total Entries140
  • Reread0
  • Chapters2,852
  • Volumes168
Manga History Last Manga Updates
Blade Play
Blade Play
Dec 1, 2014 8:08 PM
Reading 54/- · Scored -
Ore to Kawazu-san no Isekai Hourouki
Ore to Kawazu-san no Isekai Hourouki
Oct 25, 2014 7:43 AM
Reading -/- · Scored -
Oct 24, 2014 5:22 PM
Reading 8/- · Scored -


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Cyanwasserstoff May 26, 3:25 AM
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Sou Apr 17, 11:33 PM
the disappearance of lolifreak000f-sama
mlcdl Feb 21, 7:08 AM
Sorry, I almost forgot about your story.

Anyway, my comment before seems to be for ch0 and ch1, now this time I have seen up to ch.4. Though before I comment a thing, I would like to ask you whether if you prefer me to comment after I finish your work(considering its already done) or I give my reaction to you from what I finished so far?
imperlast Feb 18, 2:41 PM
how you doing man?
The_Pyromaani Feb 11, 5:47 PM

Soukan Feb 4, 12:42 AM
First semester finished. Essay scores turned out well.

Working on MA research proposal, got rly depressed since last Thursday due to difficulty of Journal Articles & fear of not completing research and waste of grades.

Actually considered withdrawing/going home but was talked out of it by faculty members & told to seek student counselling.

What bout you?
Soukan Feb 3, 2:03 PM
One and a half months late, BA-KA!
mlcdl Feb 3, 7:24 AM
Okay managed to read ch0 and 1 and here's some reaction.

In putting the details, you already doing good. Just be consistent with that. Also, this time feels more easy to read unlike to your work before. Their's no such thing as missing details as of putting the setting.

As from what I noticed from your previous draft and this one, well damn your taste for psychological story appeared at ch0. And this time, it is more reasonable that any possible characterization to happen if anything "crazy" happen on this plot. But then again, this is a psychological/fantasy so that "crazy" thing is bound to happen.

Well, I will comment again once I made progress on your work.
The_Goodsman Feb 2, 6:45 AM
Thank you very much for telling me about this site, very pretty. Why does the status of my first chapter say "waiting"? Also, how do I add more chapters to my story?
mlcdl Feb 2, 2:39 AM
Just finishing my OJT since its all that left before I do some paperwork on school.

Sweet! I'll surely try that but I can't promise any fast response.
imperlast Dec 24, 2014 11:09 AM
Soukan Dec 14, 2014 1:49 AM
Happy Birthday ~♪

ftFate Dec 13, 2014 7:02 PM
Happy birthday!
mlcdl Nov 27, 2014 9:00 AM
Have you decided how to fix this? If you haven't don't go redo everything. Pick where to start on where to fix. If anything else, I think the part where Reimuz decided to hunt for Goblins would be a good part for you to edit and change the plot. You could still use the same event that happened in your story but make it happen after your new story and if possible, make some sort of traumatic experience he have to encounter to make the independent Reimuz accepted by the plot. If you need example, try the ongoing anime Parasyte.
mlcdl Nov 24, 2014 6:11 PM
Okay now I read up to the latest. What the heck happened? The way the plot of your story now contradict with your romance story at your draft. That itself is fine if you want to change your plot but the issue is Reimuz characterization. From someone suppose to be a nobody, his characterization is not of a nobody anymore but someone who suddenly turned into a character who can deal things with ease which contradict his personality. The idea of curse aside, his action on the latest chapter made me question where he got all this big change that he can decide things at ease despite he just done something outside his expectation that he is aware of.