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So in regards to Usagi Drop, what did you think about the way that the manga ended?

Feedback time!

Before I get into this, I'd just like to inform you that you do not need to take my advice into account if you don't want to! I'm doing this as a precaution for any future reviews you may type up.

Anyway, your review was awful needs some work. Where to begin? I'll begin with the introduction. Let's see what we have:

"This anime...what can I say? What can you say? We have the main protagonist Victorique who lives in Saubile (is that how it's spelled?) Void that, look it up before you post the review. which is your typical "awwwwwwwhhh" character Sounds childish, use a different adjective here, preferably an actual word., she uses her fountain of wisdom to solve mysteries along with her sidekick, which is really the main character, Kujo. Debatable. I believe both of them hold equal importance to the anime.
So the thing about this anime that I REALLY like has to be the way they manage to take small tidbits here and there from earlier mysteries and arcs and implement these in later ones."

- That last little bit was actual pretty good. You take a valid point from the show and... don't do anything with it. You should change that. Explain why you like these things, and why viewers will like it, too. Be sure to explain everything you like about the series and why!

"As far as music is concerned, it really put you in the right mood for the situation, sure, it's not extraordinary, but it does it's job, if the scene is comical, you will laugh, if it's sad, you will cry, and so on."

- This seems a little too wish-washy. Like you wanted to get through this paragraph as quickly as possible. If you have nothing to say about music, than don't say anything. I never include the sound in my reviews.

"The art style is pretty good, at least for this kind of show, since it's set in 1924 it reeally does a good job to illustrate accordingly."

- It's "really," and is this really all you have to say about the art? What about the character designs? What about the background? The setting? The way the emotions of certain scenes match the appearances of the characters and their reactions? C'mon, I know you're capable of talking like a maniac! Everyone is! You're no exception.

"The story? Well, without adding any spoilers i have to say that this anime made me laugh, it made me cry and most importantly, it made me really feel."

- Y'know, explaining the plot and how it progresses (to an extent) isn't technically a spoiler, and if it is, sometimes, depending on the content, the moderators will turn a blind eye to it. Don't be so scared of spoilers, but don't publicize them either. Going back to the story, what you've told us is equivalent to how many Super Bowls the Philadelphia Eagles have won: zero. You didn't tell us anything! Tell us something! Anything! The characters! The plot! How the characters interact!

"Overall, including my enjoyment, I will give this a 9/10 as this anime really touched me, even if it isn't the best anime ever, it is definetly one of the best in its genre.
If you like this kind of show that is both romance and a bit of mystery, then this is definetly for you."

- It's not the best anime, but you give it a nine? Interesting. It's "definitely," too. With the amount of information you gave the viewer, I suppose this is sufficient to wrapping up the review. Just be sure that in the future, explain to us what it is we're watching, and why we should care.

Until then!