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Pokemon Diamond & Pearl
Pokemon Diamond & Pearl
Feb 18, 2012 11:10 PM
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Pokemon Movie 04: Celebi Toki wo Koeta Deai
Pokemon Movie 04: Celebi Toki wo Koeta Deai
Feb 18, 2012 11:09 PM
Completed 1/1 · Scored 6
Pokemon Movie 03: Kesshoutou no Teiou Entei
Pokemon Movie 03: Kesshoutou no Teiou Entei
Feb 18, 2012 11:09 PM
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Naruto
Naruto
Feb 20, 2012 9:59 AM
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Melty Blood X
Melty Blood X
Feb 20, 2012 9:59 AM
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Melty Blood
Melty Blood
Feb 20, 2012 9:59 AM
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Natodayo May 21, 2012 11:48 PM
Tohno_Takaki said:
I decided to join a community to save my life...

Man, that was beautiful :')
Welcome to MAL, we'd like to read something you've written!!

Karma to you!
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mayazansu Feb 26, 2012 6:22 PM
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DeathByHarmony Feb 26, 2012 2:59 AM
Ah, well, every writer does that. :P There's no way to escape, I suppose.
deactivated171112 Feb 23, 2012 8:47 PM
Well dont be lonely man you can talk to all us cool people on MAL anytime you want!!!
ヽ(^o^)ρ σ(^o^)/

What are you studying?
Aimao Feb 23, 2012 8:50 AM
I had alot today and this time I wrote them all lol xD Made 2 yaoi sex scenes for ma friends who are writing a yaoi story :D (proud of them) im like writing at school like crazy and write like 2 sentences from what the teacher writes on blackboard xDDD
For ya since teh girl is kinda weird should be something with her adapting at her life or something?
Aimao Feb 23, 2012 7:11 AM
Then at this sht im fked cuz I know nothing about family and wtf it is and I still see it incest xDD (pervy mind)
DeathByHarmony Feb 22, 2012 1:17 PM
Ah, sounds interesting. ^_^ Do you write a lot?
DeathByHarmony Feb 21, 2012 2:31 PM
Oh? What kind of novel? :o
rose93 Feb 21, 2012 11:59 AM
hmm maybe instead of the bad line something like they were close friends but ended up getting distant from each other. I like the lline "We will always be there for you," cuz that kinda reflects on how they really don't care for each other, even though they said that. And than there's another reason to why he's lonely.

I'm not sure where your going with the name calling a bit, but i guess it would still work out :) maybe instead of him just punching random ppl (lol) it could be more like since he's the new kid he gives off weird vibes and such. And he's a lot different than most of the ppl there, since he's more intelligent or high tech. I guess that might lead everyone to start hating him or picking on him for being different. Like you know in some anime, there is sometimes a lonely new kid that everybody makes rumors about and ignores.

haha and I think thats my comments so far lol? I still love your ideas the most though XD. I would love to read it even though it's not published or anything ^^ And glad you like some of the ideas that I gave out :)!~
Aimao Feb 21, 2012 10:01 AM
Wait so when he saw teh girl she was naked? :DD Will be like sees her,be like O_O, wondering if its a dream and tries to wake up and then when he made sure that its real what he sees he'll be like "who the fk are u? how did ya got here?" and the questions can continue.
I have a question now ish she just a normal girl or an angel,a devil,a robot?

Oh and ya welcome :D
Aimao Feb 21, 2012 7:20 AM
Hmm, from what ya wrote until now it makes me wonder what will he wish for,would it be going back to his parents or be able to make friends or start a new life etc...
The novel should be something written with all ya heart and soul thats what makes them unique.The words u chosse and how the things goes on makes it epic!
For the love thing I didnt watch toradora yet but it should be something like he meets a girl,at first he hates her and was trying to keep her away but she was always following him around then they start talking then became friends,did alot of shts togheter,saved her from something and then they realize they like each other and they dunno how to confess etc etc

Hope it helps u :)
DeathByHarmony Feb 20, 2012 11:31 AM
No problem. ^_^
How's it going?
rose93 Feb 20, 2012 11:21 AM
eh starting out with the protagonist's dream? I think that might be unique in some way, since I haven't read much books with that in the beginning? I would think you should start out with a flashback in some way, since you wanna write about family love :) Like start out with one of the best days of the boy's life spending his time with his family, like a picnic or a amusement park, and than use a translation like that was when it happen, or it all ended there. Than go back to present tense.

Maybe write about his life at the university that he's currently in. And like maybe include how he doesn't have many close friends and spends his time studying? Or since you said that the country is low-tech, maybe something with, he can't connect with anybody around him, since he's use to the high tech enivornment. Everybody might avoid him or think he's not one of them, so he starts to feel lonely, and on top of it, he's away from his family.

Ouch! but I like it so far :) Maybe he doesn't hate winter, it might be more like Winter is a depressing and agonizing season, that he can't handle, because of the situation he's in right now. I guess in a way it would be ironic, cause the season reflects his own feelings and emotions. For his anger and friendship problems, you could add more about how close he was with his family. And he starts to regret coming to the foreign country.

lol that was kinda random, with the dog, but I think its creative somewhat :3. I think there's two directions you can go with the dog scene. He could have walked away the first time he saw the dog being picked on and doesn't do anything. For a few days he continues to ignore the dog, but one day he gets really mad or something happened to him that he defends the dog by chasing the boys away and takes the dog home with him, where the dog dies. Than you can continue with the dream.

Or another way I was thinking was maybe, he saves the dog and does something >.< eck sorry I forgot what I was thinking for a sec....

Anyway.... instead of him just saying what he wants, he could be like "There is no such thing as a miracle" or "I have no wish" and than the dog can disappear, but leaving a girl in it's place. Since he saw how lonely he was.

I like how the girl's first words are "Onii-Chan" :) That's cute ^^, I really like it so far. It's pretty fun just reading it right now haha :) Well idk if I was any help or not, but I think reading it and giving my own comments on it was pretty fun. I like all of your ideas.
Aimao Feb 20, 2012 8:15 AM
Ya welcome :D
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