A few helpful tips in writing a better anime review. This is not meant as criticisms but simply suggestions.
1. spacing
Leave a line of space between each section, and the review will look much more aesthetically pleasing.
2. I do realize that a good grammar is something that takes time to develop, so I won't comment on that. Instead, you should be careful in leaving a space after the period, as well as use capitalized "I" when referring to yourself.
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1. spacing
Leave a line of space between each section, and the review will look much more aesthetically pleasing.
2. I do realize that a good grammar is something that takes time to develop, so I won't comment on that. Instead, you should be careful in leaving a space after the period, as well as use capitalized "I" when referring to yourself.