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Hey, buddy.

I really enjoyed your review. There were only two minor things:

Grammar. Saw some mistakes in there.

Comparisons. According to the Review Guidelines of this site, you can't compare a topic to its original source, as the site would prefer you review the topic as is. Y'know, kind of like when you review Sword Art Online and half of your review consists of "THE LIGHT NOVEL WAS SO MUCH BETTER. LOLKILLMYSELF#######"

Of course, you didn't do any of that, but hopefully my exaggerated example gets it across as to why the site doesn't want you doing that. It just wants you to review The Sacred Blacksmith THE ANIME and not THE MANGA, so comparisons are looked down upon.

Either way, I enjoyed it. But because of that second issue, I couldn't give ya a Helpful. Keep doing what you're doing, though. Just revise your review, buddy. Those grammar errors are a tad distracting.

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Alright, here's the thing; there wasn't a lot wrong with your review. Really. There just wasn't enough there to allow me to give you a helpful. Why? Here's why:

It's too personal. So many personal statements, statements that don't ultimately contribute to the point of your review. There are plenty within your review, and it made me feel like this review was more of a parody than a recommendation device.

Here's another thing; you basically described the first five minutes of the first episode. Why? Are you just trying to make that reference joke out of it? All of those words used up just to support a single claim? That's a lot of words just to say that it's cliche.

That's all, folks. Seriously, that's all I have to say about the "flaws" of your review. It was nice, like, Yuru Yuri nice. I liked it. I enjoyed it. It just had those things that made me go "Why?" Keep it up, buddy. Your reviews are fun. Make more. Seriously. Mmm.

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