Ranked #5676

Chico (One Shot)

[Story]
It doesn't have, or, it might be a day, and then weeks later. I didn't really saw the time line, or something it would guide me through. It just the little sudden events that are shown.

[Art]
Its not fine, the characters doesn't seem to have been drew with effort... Except for the little bird I guess...

[Character]
It's really short, and because of that they cant really show the true face of the characters, but they tried, and it sucked, they make you say:
"...o...ok? why is this here? this doesn't have anything to do with anything else"

[Enjoyment]
Its kind of okay at first, it goes really nice, until the middle. It really goes and goes more to:
"Huh?"
And then, what it makes it go to the drain its the end, I don't know why the ººº they did that. Horrible ending.

[Overall]
It might have been better, but like I said, the ending makes it really bad. But read it, so you can say: "Hey, I've read 'chico'" read more