Ranked #8261

My Wonderful Sweets (One Shot)

Well, this would’ve have been a lot more interesting if maybe it wasn’t a oneshot. It felt incredibly rushed and was rather irritating.

So the story had potential… but ended up being just annoying. Since it was only one chapter, it seems as if the girl falls for the guy way too quickly and felt very unrealistic and false the whole time I was reading. And it wasn’t even cute! You can’t really get to know the characters enough to like them. There is basically no emotional development at all. You don’t want to relate to any of the characters, and you can’t really care about them either.

The art is rather well done, I suppose. It’s not bad, but it’s not amazing either. I can’t write too much about this one because there isn’t much to say…it could have been a sweet read, but it really wasn’t. Take a look if you have nothing better to do.
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The story moved amazingly fast. But it was a feel good make you smile kind of story.

I know things happened at a accelerated pace but it was a sweet short one shot. Not supposed to be dragged out and angsted for the next ten chapters. ♥