Feb 17, 2024
DOESN’T MAKE ANY SENSE!!!! NONE!!!! I wanted to throw up blood reading this honestly I could even finish chapter 1
- Why would the hospital mortician know specific patients’ rooms? Not even the nurses memorize that stuff, they almost always use a chart or list or something
- WHY WOULD THIS GUY, A MORTICIAN, RAISED BY MORTICIANS, NOT UNDERSTAND HOW SURGEONS WORK. HE IS A GROWN MAN. IT WASN’T HIS DAD THAT DIED. WHY WOULD HE SAY THAT CRAP TO THE SURGEON?!? MAKES ZERO SENSE
- WHY WOULD THEY MAKE OUT AFTER THAT TYPE OF CONVERSATION?!? WTF?!?
Honestly please don't read this. Bad! Nonsensical in a non-fun way. I
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don't even know how it's possible to write stuff that makes as little sense as this does while passing it off as a story.
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