Oct 9, 2010
For the curious, this actually is a collection of two one-shots. And if you're going to read one of them, the second story is the better choice
The first story centers around a girl who transfers into a school and randomly knows about a rumor involving the student council. Many elements of the 'plot' (if one can call it that) seem to be thrown in for the sole sake forcing the story foward quickly and may seem to come out of nowhere. Many elements make suspension of disbelief difficult at best. There's not much fleshing out of the characters, but it is a short
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story so it's to be expected. The art is nothing to write home about, but its not absolutely horrid either. If you're not interested in depth of plot/character and looking for a random storyline that's a light read, the first story is for you.
The second story far surpasses the first in terms of plot elements and character. It one is more fleshed out for such a short story and the characters are enjoyable. The plot is understandable and more believable. The art seems to better in this story than the first. The storyline focuses on a girl who secretly has feelings for her best friend who's also her neighbor. If you're looking for a cute little romantic story- the second one is a nice light read.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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