Ranked #4903

Apple (One Shot)

Komi Naoshi does it again--deep, comical, and thought-provoking all in one VERY prettily drawn package.

Story: Unique and interesting--Earth creating an ultimate being? and that being's destiny is to save the Earth from disaster? AND THAT BEING IS AN OTHERWISE FAIRLY AVERAGE TEENAGE BOY?! Quite interesting if I do say so myself. It had the potential to be drawn out a few more chapters, maybe 5 at most, but still a nice read. The ending is quite funny, too.

Art: What can I say? I love his art I love his art I love his art I love his art.

Character: Fairly good. Everyone can learn something from the main character. His friend could have been devloped a bit more, though.

Enjoyment: I really liked reading this! I liked it almost as much as Fruits Basket or Double Arts, even though it's very short.

Overall: 7.9/10

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Story:I have to say, the concept and all was very interesting and everything, but I found the story to be quite rushed. I seriously think that it could have been extended into a much longer story.

Art: The art was very nice, however... there were some scenes that I felt could have been drawn better, where the details were overdone and such.

Character:The character development is another thing that I felt could have been extended out more then what it had.

Enjoment: Mine was very low... end of story.

Overall: It may just be me... but I kind of felt that this was great and all, but it could have been a lot longer and more developed then what it was. read more