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Apr 16, 2013 8:35 AM
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I made this post in order to share my kekkei genkai. If admins approves it i'll be using it. So the idea of chronogan( eye of time) came to me because of the following:
1. it would be great if byakugan had a sub-kekkei genkai like sharingan
2. all hyouga has byakugan's so it should be a skill accesible to only few, in order to maintain balance.
3. i thinked of a great dojutsu and i want to share it.
So, shall we begin?
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
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Apr 16, 2013 8:49 AM
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Each chronogan is activated after the byakugan. There are two types of it: blue and red. each chronogan has 3 levels(4 including byakugan)


Red chronogan:
appearance: a byakugan with red filling on the edges. a simbol like a spiral ()
() appears above the eyes.
Pros:
can stop time for one post. when time is frozen, everyone (including the user)
cannot do anything. This gives a chance to the user to think what to do next. The user regains 3cp and heals a bit.
Cons:

Drains 8cp per post when activated. The user still has the same powers as with byakugan, minus the 360 degree vision.
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Blue chronogan
Appearance: same as the red one, but with blue filling.
Pros:
Makes the time 3 times slower. that affects everyone, including the user. The user still can think at normal speed, while others can't. That gives him a chance to dodge attacks easily.
Cons: drains 10cp per post. The user maintains the powers of byakugan, minus 360 degree vision.
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Well, that was the first levels, hope you like it. The next one will be added soon. (does anyone knows how to add a picture to the post? I could give you a look of chronogan.)
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
Apr 16, 2013 1:10 PM
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Surprisingly enough i really like it, and feel inspired to finally make a Byakugan system. Im eager to see the later stages, and if they follow the same recipe as the other ones. The balance between pros and cons are good, and with a little tweaking we might have managed to balance time-manipulation.. which is like, a huge thing! :D

To add an image to the post, you do this:



Without the spaces.

If you wanna hide the picture in a spoiler button, simply add a
after it, again without the spaces :)
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan
Apr 17, 2013 10:05 AM
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Wow, i never thought people that people actually read this. Well here is the next level of red chronogan.

Red chronogan II
Appearance:
the red fillings in the cornes are much bigger, leaving only a white circle in the middle.
the spiral markings are all around the eyes.
Pros:
has all previous powers + can go back in time for 1 post. The only person that retains memories is the user (sorta like Steins Reader).Everyone else must do what they did before. This gives a chance to user to avoid problems.
Cons:
Drains 20cp per post when activated. The user has no Byakugan abilities left( they come back when chronogan is turned off)
jokubasincApr 23, 2013 4:19 AM
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
Apr 23, 2013 4:23 AM
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Blue chronogan II
Appearance: same as red just the fillings are blue, duh.
Pros:
all previous powers + ability to see the past. The user can see or show others the past of anything.
Cons:
Drains 12cp per post. The only power left from byakugan is seeing chakra.
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
Apr 23, 2013 3:02 PM
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This is a great idea. There's always a big difference between the two clan but I never would have thought of giving Byakugan stages too. So I really this. Keep it up. If you need anything, you can ask me, as I am a Hyuga too.
Apr 25, 2013 9:25 AM
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As I read this the first time, I was a bit skeptical. However, my dislike of the sharingan due to it being god mod, just add eyeballs is enough for me to give it my approval.

That's not the only reason, mind you.
Although it drains 20cp per post, rewinding time is the one I am iffy on. Figure out what your opponent is doing, reverse time, auto-dodge and counter.
Apr 28, 2013 12:37 AM
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Nanananana here comes level3 of red chronogan :)
Red chronogan III
Appearance:
Purple eye with red ripples( like rinnengan with red instead of black)
the spiral markings cover all the user's body.
Pros:
All previous powers + moving objects in time. E.g. you have the red chronogan and you use his power on a tree. You can make the tree very old or dead, or you can make him a seed.
Cons:
The user has byakugan abilities left. Drains 30cp per post. The user cannot deactivate the chronogan, unless the user is sleeping.
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
Apr 29, 2013 10:56 AM
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is it a plane?is it a bird? No!Here comes the last level of blue chronogan!!
Blue chronogan III
Appearance:
same as red version but with blue ripples(as usual :))
Pros:
All previous powers+ ability to slow time x3, excluding the user!!! Yup, to you everyone is slow.to everyone, you are damn fast.
Cons:
no byakugan abilities.Drains 30cp per post. The user cannot deactivate the chronogan, unless by sleeping.

Wow, i wouldn't have come so far if not you, readers. I thought only Psy would read this( i hope he did). Also, i'm glad Syrai has a Hyouga and wants to use this kekkei genkai as well. If admins approve this, you can have it.
Bye ;)
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
Apr 29, 2013 11:25 AM
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Nice idea for a doujutsu, i think everyone forgets that my character has his own personal doujutsu as well, but its abilities are rarely used and at most are only useful in the sense that not everyone can figure them out.
stop lookin for a sign(ature) and move along
Apr 30, 2013 4:18 AM
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Some kind of water eyes,no?
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades,
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have whitstood pain to create many weapons,
Yet, these hands will never hold anything,
So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works
And though I had slain a thousand foes less one,
The thousandth knife found my liver;
The thousandth enemy said to me,
'Now you shall die,
Now none shall know.'
And the fool, looking down, believed this,
Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars,
Each one remembering.
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