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Hello!

I have always liked drawing and I really want to get better, so I would be really grateful if u could say that is there anything I should do better and stuff :)
You can see my drawings here http://azuzanyan.deviantart.com/ there isnt much drawings, but at least couple D: thank you!

They look awesome. I like your shading^^

They are really cute ^-^ Especially the Halloween Boy :)
Hmm...but maybe work more on your profiles/face side views ? Also, the anatomy is a bit off,but your shading is on top noch :D I suggest searching some tutorials and/or buying an anatomy book :3

thank you for the comments! =)

yeah, i kinda see that the anatomy is little weird, I draw pretty long arms and such for example >__> need to work on that, thnx for pointing that out!

:D I'm always happy to help a fellow artist ^^ If you need any other help, ask away :)
BTW, Welcome to MAL! ^^

I give you a lama:P and I like your drawings

You dont have to open a new thread, there is already one
http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=334


Nice coloring, and you can work on anatomy more and different poses.
People in the thread I linked can give you even more critique, as they all draw.

Eyes should be just a little closer to each other, and maybe a bit larger as well.

really good n nice..good job..

These drawings are amazingly good, I can't really tell you what you can improve on, but I'd recommend practising on shading more

They truly are good, much better than any of mine ^^''

from seeing those I would say just improve with side views and maybe blending. also what do you use to color them?

the Devil Girl picture, the torso is a bit long.
Sasunaru picture, sasukes' nose throws off the mouth and chin and his back is almost non-existant. narutos' right arm is un-naturally bent, and his collar bone is tweaked on the left.
Halloween boy, right hand has some gangly looking fingers, the space between the left shoulder and the neck is shorter than the opposite side. one eyebrow is shorter than the other. left ear is significantly larger even for a slightly angled face. nose is croooked given the angle.

lol sorry if it sounds harsh or mean. but i only did what you asked. ^_^
i'm too much of a perfectionist to not notice the tiniest details.

thank you ^_^ I use markers :)

its okay, i'm the one who asked critique, so thank you! xD it just helps me improve : D

Looks great to me :) Keep up the good work

your upper torso is too long and your hands appear flat. Try to lay simple box shapes so you know what lines leads. When asking for a critique. I believe its better to ask specific things on what you want to work improve on. Asking of a overall critique can be too overwhelming for some people and dont know where to start critiquing on. I recommend practicing boxing everything out before laying your final lines. The "Halloween Boy" does catches my eyes because of dark black lines so I recommend going that approach. Keep on drawing gal and dont give up.

Devil girl 2 = pretty hot.

Really nice ^-^

your work is actually pretty good.

Your anatomy is okay but i would strongly suggest continuing figure drawing as much as possible. The folds on the clothes are not that accurate and for anime drawing itself....i guess i would draw other peoples work to get a better feel. hear me out its great practice but do not consider it your own work.