| Hey everyone I have written chapter 5 sorry.it took so long to get out :/ here it is |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| We've missed you, 30 year old virgin posing as a little girl. |
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| LUL |
| Oh boy here we go. I thought you weren't serious about continuing the fanfic. |
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| This is quite possibly the greatest thing I've ever read. |
| Casual Discussion =/= Creative Corner |
| Losing an Argument online? Simply post a webpage full of links, and refuse to continue until your opponents have read every last one of them! WORKS EVERY TIME! "I was debating with someone who believed in climate change, when he linked me to a graph showing evidence to that effect. So I sent him a 10k word essay on the origins of Conservatism, and escaped with my dignity intact." "THANK YOU VERBOSE WEBPAGES OF QUESTIONABLE RELEVANCE!" |
| Oh! And can everyone tell me there fav person in super junior (or alexi or YURI) so I can do fan art for the story? Thanks |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| Best chapter yet. My sides xD |
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| Yay Im so happy! Your story is great! keep it up Kyandi! |
كنت تهدر وقتك عن طريق ترجمة هذه. mattbenz99 said: Christians and Satanists are technically the same thing |
| you have a future in this business |
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| This is a literary masterpiece on the level of Sword Art Online. |
| As a child, I was told that society is a melting pot of talents; knowledge and experience combined to form important alloys that will contribute to mankind. When I got to highschool, however, I thought that it's more like a river in which the water represents our peers while we ourselves are the stones in the river. Constant erosion by mindless majority sheeping has made us lose our unique edge. After I hit the age of 18, I realized that I've been wrong all along. Society is no melting pot. Society is no river. Society is a person, a very skilled rapist, and he has fucked us all. |
| Hey sword art online is really cool dont mock it! Why does no one have a favorite character yet??? |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| My favourite part was the blood being used as lubrication. I eagerly await the next chapter. |
KyandiKun said: Hey sword art online is really cool dont mock it! Why does no one have a favorite character yet??? I just said it's on the same level as SAO, does that equate to mocking?. Does that mean you admit that your own fanfic is crap? Because I never said that. For all you know I might like SAO. Shin Angyo Onshi that is. |
BloodRequiemNov 20, 2012 10:23 AM
| As a child, I was told that society is a melting pot of talents; knowledge and experience combined to form important alloys that will contribute to mankind. When I got to highschool, however, I thought that it's more like a river in which the water represents our peers while we ourselves are the stones in the river. Constant erosion by mindless majority sheeping has made us lose our unique edge. After I hit the age of 18, I realized that I've been wrong all along. Society is no melting pot. Society is no river. Society is a person, a very skilled rapist, and he has fucked us all. |
BloodRequiem said: KyandiKun said: Hey sword art online is really cool dont mock it! Why does no one have a favorite character yet??? I just said it's on the same level as SAO, does that equate to mocking?. Does that mean you admit that your own fanfic is crap? Because I never said that. For all you know I might like SAO. Shin Angyo Onshi that is. Well I think it is obvious that you don't like Sao or why would you mention I mean you can just tell.me what you think of my story |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| Happy Birthday. |
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| I skimmed it. I saw all caps and drawn out words. I saw the usage of onomatopoeia. I saw a completely random kidnapping and rape of some guy. Police came out of nowhere. I closed it and rolled my eyes. I want my 3 minutes back. |
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| Not this shit again. |
Hitchens said: We've missed you, 30 year old virgin posing as a little girl. Dafuq? or is it true, in which case is.... well...... Dafuq? Well then I guess we found a new use for blood. eh not bad. |
Kira-oniisan said: Hitchens said: We've missed you, 30 year old virgin posing as a little girl. Dafuq? or is it true, in which case is.... well...... Dafuq? Well then I guess we found a new use for blood. eh not bad. I'm 14 you weirdo |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| Oh, good. I was getting worried that we might miss the next chapter of this masterpiece. Don't make me wait so long next time. ;_; |
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| It wasn't funny the first time and it's not funny now. |
LoneWolf said: @Josh makes me sad to call myself Canadian. |
| I feel special, (s)he linked it to me personally. It's still terrible. Negative-Travis said: Well then. Against my better judgement, I gave your latest chapter a read. After three beers and a conversation with a shrink I have come to the conclusion that you still haven't improved at all. Once again, all you've done is made the story longer. At the very least, have you even had anyone proofread to check for spelling mistakes? Grammar? What about capitalization and punctuation? Didn't think so. |
| I'm dead. Don't come looking for me. |
AnnoKano said: It's creative alright.Casual Discussion =/= Creative Corner |
| I definitely have superpowers. I can feel it in my balls. |
| "ohohohohohohohoo hohoh hoooooo I think your lying right up the butt right now you dirty ass hoe." |
| LOLOLOL, the comments on here are much more amusing than the OP's story. |
| i skimmed this, at frist i was like, "okay, just your typical fucked up shit, no big deal". but then once i was at the end this phrase stuck out to me "butthole in little circles", so i read back a little, and holy shit! there's a rather graphic rape scene! to the OP: you should visit a euthanasia clinic, they may be able to help you |
| "Reality can really bum you out" - Ash Ketchum |
| I think I lost a couple of brain cells. |
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| Oh the comedy-genre thread is back. |
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w7y7a7t7t said: i skimmed this, at frist i was like, "okay, just your typical fucked up shit, no big deal". but then once i was at the end this phrase stuck out to me "butthole in little circles", so i read back a little, and holy shit! there's a rather graphic rape scene! to the OP: you should visit a euthanasia clinic, they may be able to help you Holy shit, I'm dying. |
| I'm dead. Don't come looking for me. |
| What? There's rape in my vanilla Bigbang yaoi fanfic? Who is the bad guy that taught you this? I must spank him. No homo. |
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Negative-Travis said: Rofl I got curious when I read this, too.w7y7a7t7t said: i skimmed this, at frist i was like, "okay, just your typical fucked up shit, no big deal". but then once i was at the end this phrase stuck out to me "butthole in little circles", so i read back a little, and holy shit! there's a rather graphic rape scene! to the OP: you should visit a euthanasia clinic, they may be able to help you Holy shit, I'm dying. Curiousity killed the cat on that one. ffs. |
JustALEX said: LOLOLOL, the comments on here are much more amusing than the OP's story. That's not really saying much. xD |
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 "Oh my, what have I read! B- Blood lubricant!" |
| The most important things in life is the people that you care about |
KyandiKun said: Kira-oniisan said: Hitchens said: We've missed you, 30 year old virgin posing as a little girl. Dafuq? or is it true, in which case is.... well...... Dafuq? Well then I guess we found a new use for blood. eh not bad. I'm 14 you weirdo Wait... me or Hitchens is the wirdo, he just got me thinking. |
| What... did I just read...? |
Kira-oniisan said: KyandiKun said: Kira-oniisan said: Hitchens said: We've missed you, 30 year old virgin posing as a little girl. Dafuq? or is it true, in which case is.... well...... Dafuq? Well then I guess we found a new use for blood. eh not bad. I'm 14 you weirdo Wait... me or Hitchens is the wirdo, he just got me thinking. da dude who said i was a 30 old virgin he is half write i am a virgin but i am a 14 old girl so he is weird for thinking that |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
| Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? |
And what if all love is an act of bravery? Could you look me in the eye and say that you are not afraid?  |
Reaper71 said: Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? i am good, really happy! :D I have just been busy because of high school and my love life! |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
KyandiKun said: Reaper71 said: Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? i am good, really happy! :D I have just been busy because of high school and my love life! Awesome. |
And what if all love is an act of bravery? Could you look me in the eye and say that you are not afraid? |
KyandiKun said: Reaper71 said: Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? i am good, really happy! :D I have just been busy because of high school and my love life! I wish you good luck with your partner and may your blood also serve as a lubricant. |
| As a child, I was told that society is a melting pot of talents; knowledge and experience combined to form important alloys that will contribute to mankind. When I got to highschool, however, I thought that it's more like a river in which the water represents our peers while we ourselves are the stones in the river. Constant erosion by mindless majority sheeping has made us lose our unique edge. After I hit the age of 18, I realized that I've been wrong all along. Society is no melting pot. Society is no river. Society is a person, a very skilled rapist, and he has fucked us all. |
BloodRequiem said: KyandiKun said: Reaper71 said: Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? i am good, really happy! :D I have just been busy because of high school and my love life! I wish you good luck with your partner and may your blood also serve as a lubricant. okay seriously i would not do that in real life I only wrote that because Eunhyuk was raped and people who raped are pretty screwed up and are in to dat weird stuff so thats why he is being nasty. me and my bf are not doing that stuff |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
JavierR said: KyandiKun said: BloodRequiem said: KyandiKun said: Reaper71 said: Hey, you're back! The limitless fountain of literary genius. How have you been? i am good, really happy! :D I have just been busy because of high school and my love life! I wish you good luck with your partner and may your blood also serve as a lubricant. okay seriously i would not do that in real life I only wrote that because Eunhyuk was raped and people who raped are pretty screwed up and are in to dat weird stuff so thats why he is being nasty. me and my bf are not doing that stuff so your hymen is already broken then. NOOO I SAID NO ALREADY I said i was a virgin i am onnly 14 geez but that does not mean i don't know about stuff like that |
| :3 KYANDI- KUN |
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