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03-13-15, 6:41 AM

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The stones of day and night .... well ı have nothing better to do so ı may as well help you
Name: Kasai Sosul'ka
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Grade/Class: Freshmen
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03-13-15, 7:25 AM

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Hagane Misaka



“People say I have a shocking personality.”

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03-14-15, 7:17 AM

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03-14-15, 12:23 PM

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Yukio Kuuhaku
(幸雄・空白)


「Hello there! My name is, wait, who am I again?」

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03-14-15, 1:03 PM

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The student "Yukio Kuuhaku (幸雄・空白)" is hereby admitted as a "Freshman" of Shiroku Highschool.

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03-19-15, 8:53 AM

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(Previous Issues that were pointed out have been fixed
"The military considers me a threat to human society and wants me dead, the goverment believes i'm a monster of technology and has someone watching my every move. Now that you know that, what do you think I am and what will you do? "

Name: Akashi Arkhall

Gender: Male

Age: Sixteen

Grade: Sophmore
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03-21-15, 9:37 AM

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"I'll follow Akashi anywhere, even to hell itself."


Name: Clone Eight-Two-Six
Nickname: "Six" or "Jumpy"
Age:16
Grade:Sophomore
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03-21-15, 10:33 AM

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The student "Clone Eight-Two-Six" is hereby admitted as a "Sophomore" of Shiroku Highschool.

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03-30-15, 2:24 PM

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Natsumi Fujisaki



"This is it... I’m back to the place where I belong... Shiroku✰Highschool."


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03-30-15, 2:25 PM

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The student "Natsumi Fujisaki" is hereby admitted as a "Freshman" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-01-15, 3:00 PM

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"Why do I have to be here?"

Name:Selim Dokunur
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Grade/Class: Freshmen

Total Status Points: 10/10

Primary Power: The Tattoo Of The Ethereal One
With this tattoo he can become ethereal. Physical attacks from all weapons and non-organic materials cant touch him unless he wants them to this way he can wear clothes , holding a spoon ,write etc.This tattoo Works like a computer program.When Selim thinks something is dangerous it wont let it touch Selim untill he thinks it safe.Also when he thinks something is safe then the tattoo would let it touch him even if it is going to hurt Selim.What he decides safe and dangerous is recorded somewhere in his brain.So even if Selim doesnt see the attack coming if it is something he marked as dangerous his body will automatically evade it.Selim can change what is safe and dangerous whenever he wants.If he marks a sword as dangerous he cant touch it so he can change its mark to safe in order to touch it and if he doesnt mark it as dangerous again when a sword attacks him it will touch him.He cant Dodge attacks he hadnt seen before and marked as dangerous before.In order to mark something as dangerous Selim has to see it first and In his mind he has to say ".... is dangerous."This marks that object as dangerous and it can not touch Selim.In the same way in order to make something as safe Selim has to say ".... is not dangerous anymore.".His power will work automatically when he marked something as dangerous.Even if he doesnt see the attack coming it will work on its own.He can record something as dangerous immediately after just seeing it.He can only evade one thing in a post.If an openent attacks him with 2 differents at the same time he cant evade both of them with his ability.Buletts are exception he can evade as many bullets as fired but at the same post he cant evade any other attack wtih his ability.

Secondary Power: None

Attributes:
(x2) Exceptional Agility (Costs 4 Points)*


Weapon of Choice: 2 Claws made of steel.The claws are made for him by the head f his family when he left them and when he uses his ability they become untouchable too.There is a Picture of it in my appearance.

Biography:
Selim is coming from a long line of Turkish family.His family is believing the most ancient religion of the Turks the neoshamanizm.All of his family members are shamans.Shamans can talk with spirits and have special Powers according to their personalities.When he was a child Selim was an aggresive child because of his family.He was somewhat arrogant.He always picked on others and got into fights with them.As a result of this he never got anyy friends.It wasnt like he wasnt friendly or anything it is just that nobody was able to stand his personality and that left him alone for most of his childhood.As a result of this he became much more aggresive and got into more fights with others just for fun.He joined a Street fight tournament at the age of 12 and win it.He told about that his parents and his parents decided that it was his time for recieving his tatto.They decided that The tattoo of the ethereal one would be perfect for him.Selim did not know what his tattoo going to be.After the tattoo was made and told about its power Selim got frustrated.He told bad words to everyone at present.The Head of the Family was there at the time in order to supervise the ceremony.After seeing that insult he decided to exile Selim untill he becomes worthy of holding his power.Selim has been traveling around the World for 4 years now and Shiroku is his current stop.

Special room request:No

Personality:
He is an agresive person he can quickly get angry and start a fight.He is somewhat arrogant towards others.He is lazy doesnt like to work.He is shy around girls he cant talk to them easily.He respects powerful people.

Appearance:

"Do you really believe you can defeat me?"
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04-03-15, 1:29 AM

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Cheska Magaling Batac


Hmmm, how many points should I give a cutie such as you on my cute list?



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04-03-15, 2:12 AM

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Mary


No really, say Bloody Mary three times in the mirror, it'll be fun!
Hey, do you want to be my friend?



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04-03-15, 5:26 AM

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The students "Selim Dokunur", "Mary", and "Cheska Magaling Batac"are respectively, in the following order, hereby admitted as "Freshmen" and "Sophomore" of Shiroku Highschool.

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04-03-15, 2:35 PM

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Name: Kumiko Sayomi
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Grade/Class: Sophomore

Total Status Points: 10/10

Primary Power:
None

Secondary Power:
None

Attributes:
(x2) Exceptional Agility
(x3) Superior Instincts/Senses

Weapon of Choice:
A normal katana, around 65 cm in length.

Normal hunting knives.


Smoke bombs, that she possesses.

Biography:


Personality:
She is usually a fun person, who has a warming smile on her face. But when she starts fighting seriously or feels threatened her animal instincts take place and she can become hostile and cold too. She is very serious about what she does and doesn't understand jokes very well. She is never embarrassed and doesn't seem to be shy either.

Appearance:


Special Room Request: Yes
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04-04-15, 2:08 AM

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Name: Fosse Grim
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Grade/Class: Freshman



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04-04-15, 3:38 AM

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The student "Kumiko Sayumi" is hereby admitted as a "Sophomore" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-04-15, 1:38 PM

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Name: Ai Oak
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Grade/Class: Freshman

Total Status Points: 10/10

Primary Power:
None

Secondary Power:
None

Attributes:
(x2) Exceptional Strength
(x3) Superior Speed

Weapon of Choice:
None

Biography:
He grow up without his father, just mother. Because of this he hates his father. He always considered life pointless and still considers It that way, while just doing what's more "fun" until he dies. He mostly had a boring life, nothing special. Though he always kept his distance from everyone including his mother and his older cousin who kept pestering him for being so boring. He started to play computer games at one point and was just "absorbed" in them for years. He was addicted and still is to this day. Though he was a bit "gifted" in speed and strength as well as his mind. He could even skip a few grades. Which he refused at first, since he said that If he finished earlier, the real life would just annoy him faster. Though he was forced going to a high school on a condition that he would choose the school. He choose a school, It was Shiroku. The only reason he choose to skip grades was because his cousin moved in, though his cousin does feel irritated that he keeps brushing her off or ignoring her. A few months before his cousin arrived he dyed his hair dirty blond.

Personality:
On the outside when talking to people he doesn't want to talk with or isn't interested in he always has that bored look on his face and just ignores people. Though does get into fights from time to time. Though people know that he is kind at heart and is a nice person. Especially on the internet. For some reason he has a complete switch of personality when he chats with someone trough the internet.

Appearance:


Special Room Request: *Is the character okay with sharing a room with the opposite gender: yes
 
04-04-15, 1:47 PM

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The student "Ai Oak" is hereby admitted as a "Freshman" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-06-15, 1:55 AM

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"Ohana means family and family means nobody gets left behind or forgotten-but mess with my family and you will be forgotten"

Name:Kolohe "Punky" Kekai (Mischievous Ocean)
Age:17
Gender:Male
Grade/Class:Sophomore

Total Status Points:10/10

Primary Power: Weapon Birth
Punky can create any weapon that he has come in contact with or seen. However, copied weapons will never,ever be as strong as the original. The copied weapon will instead be 75% as strong as the copied weapon.

1)Each time weapons are consecutively created within a 5 post time frame each weapons quality is downgraded by 1 post to a maximum of 5 posts (i.e a created weapon would last 10 posts then consecutive weapons would last 9/8/7/6/5 posts long)

2)If the weapon created is not one of his weapons of choice then Punky will not be able to attack for 2 posts

3)Any special conditions that doesn't allow the weapon to be wielded will be negated (i.e only person A can use the weapon. If the weapon is recreated then just that effect is negated other weapon effects are not)

4)Created weapons may also be used by other people until they break

5) Only 3 re-created weapons may be active at one time

6)Inherent weapon abilities are kept but if the user lacks the proper conditions to use it then the weapon ability may not be used

7)Weapon creation takes one post; Also multiple weapons may be created in 1 post (Maximum of 3)

Secondary Power: None

Attributes
Strength-Above Average
Speed-Above Average

Weapon of Choice
1)Spear
2)Club
3)Sword

Biography
Born on them beautiful islands of Hawaii Sebastian was just a normal kid. Nothing seemed to be very special about him. He had a loving family and was happy with most of his life. When he was just two years old his family decided that learning other languages would benefit him in the future, so he was taught English, Hawaiian (His native language), and Japanese (cause a lot of tourists were from Japan). Punky was an angel through out most of his life never disobeying parents and doing well in school. Until his freshman year when he started to be able to create weapons. Not just some weapons but any weapon he managed to see or touch. Naturally he hid this power from his parents only using it to practice on coconut trees that were near the beach. One day though he happened to stumble upon Shiroku high school whilst researching for his Japanese social studies project and begged his parents to send him there. The parents almost immediately said yes because he had lacked the interest in almost anything but the beach and playing ukulele (an instrument) so they saw this as an opportunity to allow him to see the world. He only lets his friends call him Punky but doesnt care if others also call him by that name.

Personality
Punky loves to play the ukulele and go to the beach or anywhere that has water to swim in. He is a carefree spirit and is normally friends with everyone. The only thing that could possible make him angry is if someone hurt his family and to him friends are his family.

Appearance: Unless it is cold out in which case he'll use sweat pants and a hoodie or he has to use a uniform he likes to wear a lau hala hat (a hat made out of lau hala leaves from his grandmother), a tank top with some corny pun, and swim trunks. He has short black hair and his eyes are a very dark brown.

Special Room Request:
Yes

P.S I'm really new to this so if there is anything wrong with this character or anything I could change please feel free to tell me. Constructive criticism helps! Thank you :)
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The student "Kolohe "Punky" Kekai " is hereby admitted as a "Sophmore" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-06-15, 3:34 PM

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The student "Fosse Grim" is hereby admitted as a "Freshman" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-07-15, 3:49 PM

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"Insane world with no name i am living in but its worth trying"
Name: Clone 1-9-7 "Martin"

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Grade/Class: Senior

Total Status Points: 10/10

Attributes: Superior Endurance and Exceptional Speed

Weapon of choice: Katana and a concealed 38. Special Revolver.

Biography: Born in an unknown Military Base of Anti-magic Special Operations Unit. Gotten the same DNA as the famous Akashi. However his DNA was decoded by the wrong RNA which totally messed up its personality but the looks keeps constant to Akashi. Martin wasn't much into military and didn't like to follow
commands whatsoever. But sic gave him chills if he didn't. Martin pretended to listen orders until he reached the age 12 where Akashi became a monster with his fame of his blood bath missions. His hatred started to flow but wasn't a fan of magician either. He wanted to inform the government to stop making these weapons and missions since. All he wanted is to stop Akashi's Violent mind. But it was too late when the government announced of complete stop to the project and wanted the products to be wasted(killed) immediately. Martin escaped 2 years before the announcements. Where he founds himself in a strange neighborhood. Where the Buddhist monks were offering Martin to live with them since they knew he had no home. Martin still taught about stopping Akashi and become a hero but didn't know what to do after he would stop Akashi. Martin wasn't much skilled in military combat but he does know 1 vs 1 combat very well. Martin uses Katana that Six gave him and a hidden revolver which he had learned from Akashi. Excelled in martial arts (Jeet Kun do, Karate, Aikedo, Kendo, and Shaolin Kung Fu in the temple.He had no goal to stop Akashi or Six after he returned to the military camp to find Akashi and stop him from all cause. But all what he saw was clones being destroyed. He quickly realized that the government was behind this scene. And wondered if Akashi and Six are alive. But he returned to the temple and settled up on a new goal where he wanted a peaceful life. Martin was very educated so he skipped a grade and was offered to come to Shiroku High School. He quickly accepted and never those 2 never again. Even though they are roaming the same halls he doesn't look back.


Personality:
Very smart, charming. Doesn't care about himself as much others but in extreme point, VERY humorous, loves comedy anime, not shy but shy to girls if attracted, helpful and careful, not much of a pervert, if he sees a naked woman he is like mehh. VERY serious when necessary (can get violent), and creative.

Appearance:
Martin looks just like Akashi in every way. The same 5'9 height, 200 lb. body mass and semi muscular frame. His Hair is black as well. The only differences is that his hair is more stylish. He always carries his Katana in a kendo sheets. He has a hidden revolver behind his sleeves so he can quick save someone. He looks like more of a regular student Akashi than a violent all millitary stuff Akashi

Special Room Request: No, as longest there are 2 beds where he can sleep.

" Following an abomination to humanity in a human planet is unacceptable. I won't follow Akashi in fact, i will stop him no matter the cause.!"
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The student "Martin" is hereby admitted as a "Senior" of Shiroku Highschool.


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04-07-15, 4:48 PM

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Name: Amamiya Shiori

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Grade/Class: *Sophomore (2nd grade)*

Total Status Points: 10

Primary Power: Dreams do come true:


Attributes: (x1.5) Above-Average: Endurance, Recovery

Weapon of Choice: None

Biography:


Personality:
Shiori is a rather laid back character, capable of taking a joke, and knowing not to take even the harshest aspects of life too seriously. This also leads to a bit of unwillingness to take a risk and get involved with messy issues. often simply backing off or admitting defeat in the face of conflict, but he is assuredly committed when he does get involved.

That being said, he is also down to earth and while easygoing enough to to let most things slide, is strict about upholding his own personal morals, and maintining one within others, particularly due to being coscious about being around whom he considers "children".

Being older than the other students here does give Shiori a bit of a complex, and may lead him to having a "holier-than-thou" attitude, but he really does mean well and hope to both get along with his peers as well as successfully, and finally, graduate.

Appearance:


Special Room Request: *Yes* (Well, willing)


OOC note: I understand that this is a rather different character from most of the others here, and am plenty willing to change or create a new one if necessary. Thanks for looking through this and sorry if it doesn't meet the necessary standards.
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04-24-15, 8:29 AM

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Hagane Kurokage



"From the four corners ancient guardians wake."

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04-24-15, 9:21 AM

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Ace



"Our chance of survival? Fifty-fifty."

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04-25-15, 2:24 AM

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Name: Lieselotte Orouto
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Grade/Class: sophomore*Either freshman (1st grade), sophomore (2nd grade) or senior (3rd grade)*

Total Status Points: *count all points you have spend and list it here (ex. 7/10, 9/10...)*

Primary Power: Magus Mode: Power (Which will still be weak at the beginning, will not become OP): Magus Mode
Power Explanation: When used Lieselotte gets a crystal ball which allows her to use 3 magic spells;
Thema Verum no Shouei; She uses the crystal ball to refelct a spell of the opponent sending it back, in one battle she can use this 3 times only, and it can reflect most things. (dunno how to define it really), also the stronger spells are a lot weaker when cast reflected, and the weaker spells a bit stronger,
White Universe; Lieselotte creates a powerful wave of magic that causes destruction, it also damages the area around Lieselotte but it doesn't hurt her much, the spell itself can break a stone wall. Has a radius of 15 meters, (can be used every 2 posts), it moves 5 meters/second. The damage that is done to Lieselotte will be equal to getting a small accidental knife cut. The damage that is done is equal to a big bomb (Lets say a bomb that can blow up a small house)
White Castling: Creates a magic wall to defend her from punches, kicks, spellcasts. The wall equals the strength of stone and it lasts till Lieselotte makes it disappear or casts a new one, it also takes 3 posts to set up, and can't be used while she is asleep, can block a max of 3 attacks. Can be used at the same time as her other abilities as it just is a wall
In the orb is also a girl called Sylica who can talk with anyone and gives battle strategies,

*Reminder: Costs 6 Points*

Secondary Power: Shadow Daggers: She can make daggers out of shadows. The shadows need to be in hand reach and she can make 4 daggers at once. The daggers are as strong as steel nad at least strong enough to penetrate wood
*Reminder: Costs 4 Points*

Attributes:
(x1.5) Above-Average *enter attribute here (Costs 2 Points)*
(x2) Exceptional *enter attribute here (Costs 4 Points)*
(x3) Superior *enter attribute here (Costs 6 Points)*

Weapon of Choice: Has 2 daggers in each of her thigh boots
*Does not need to be as detailed as your power, but try to explain if it is a special weapon.
Also, any form of special weapons need to be related to the characters power.*

Biography: Lieselotte is a confident, seductive and playful young woman who is not above using her feminine charms to reach her goals. However, she can be a very kind and caring girl. During battles, she is very poised and capablem, being self-assured of her powers.
Bio: Lieselotte was born into a family of very strong mages who protected the world. Her sister was her best friend and also a mage, which Lieselotte wasn't. One day the home they lived in got attacked by evil mages who wanted their family dead. All people in the house they lived in were killed, her sister in front of her own eyes. They tried to kill Lieselotte but she survived. When she was older she started studying magic with books and old scripts made by her family. In one book she read about a secret room in their house which she went searching for. When she found it she found a magic crystal orb. There was a script with it saying what people were capable of using it. She learned about her Magus Mode when she read a book which learned her how to get her inner power out. When she touched the orb she felt a connection, in the orb there was a girl who now also guides her through her battles and helps her. When she was living alone she always helped people and animals. So she fed homeless people, strays cars and dogs. With the time being she got bored of living in the house so she decided to go on an adventure. She packed a bag full with stuff that would be needed and went to travel through Japan. Eventually she heard about a highschool called Shiruko Highschool, which was a place for special people who also had powers like her. She decided to enrol here and see if she can make new friends

*The biography should be the longest section. Unless you like your character to be boring
and uninteresting. (*egging you on to make a long bio*) *

Personality: Lieselotte is a confident, seductive and playful young woman who is not above using her feminine charms to reach her goals. However, she can be a very kind and caring girl. During battles, she is very poised and capable, being self-assured of her powers. She also carries a tablet with her to write her research of special things in, and make pictures of things she likes
*Should complement your biography. Let your character show his/her individuality.*

Appearance:


Special Room Request: Doesn't matter with which gender she shares a room, as long as the person is fun *Is the character okay with sharing a room with the opposite gender (Yes or No). The character can also request to be placed with someone specific. (Note: The other party must concede to the request)*
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04-27-15, 1:40 PM

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The student "Hagane Kurokage" is hereby admitted as a "Freshman" of Shiroku Highschool.

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Name: Lizzy LockHart
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Grade/Class: senior (3rd grade)

Total Status Points: 10/10

Primary Power:
*Reminder: Costs 6 Points*
Psychokinesis
Psychokinesis is an alleged psychic ability allowing a person to influence a physical system without physical interaction (source: Wikipedia). Lizzy often use its power to either use the power of gravity (like pushing the person to the corner of a room) or defying it (like floating an object in mid air). She can float an object until 5 minutes.

When she uses the magic limiter to nullify the other person's power, her power to move objects or psychokinesis will lessen. It will distract how efficiently she will use psychokinesis.

Secondary Power:
*Reminder: Costs 4 Points*
Magic Limiter
A power to limits an opponents magic or nullify it. It can only be use by the support of the Lizzy's limiter. Lizzy needs to modify her limiter's data to reverse mode for it to be activated. Like any other power with a great power, using this power will result in decreasing the wielder's Attack or magic. Continuous use of this power will result to the lost of the attack power.

*Lizzy's Limiter limits her power.

Attributes: none

Weapon of Choice:
Morgan's emerald sword
It is two swords made up of 70% morganite or also called as pink emerald and 30% diamond. Mizuki uses this to increase her attack in case her psychokinesis is already at the critical level because of overuse of magic limiter.

The sword came from the person who helped her, Morgan. She gave these swords to Lizzy as a gift before helping her. The sword is only compatible to Lizzy. Other people than her who will use it will get deterioted by the swords.

The sword have chains connected to Lizzy's body. It is like the chain and the swords themselves are part of her. She can control them at will without using her powers to move them. Sometimes Lizzy use her psychokinesis to gave power to the sword. Example of this is to add weight to it.

Biography:
There is nothing unique about Lizzy. She is just a member of a wealthy and happily family. Well, at least that's what she remembered.


Personality:
She is shy at the first. It is because she doesn't talk too much to other people. She spend most of her "life" at home. But when she gets comfortable with you, she will be a little talkative.

She wants to be a great leader. That's why she is trying to act like a leader.

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Special Room Request:
Is the character okay with sharing a room with the opposite gender?
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05-02-15, 9:36 AM

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All right a few issues here
first how long can you use pshycokinesis? If you were to indefinitely modify or influence a physical object, you could in theory, defy the laws of gravity indefinitely. Also, you say that your magic limiter reduces magic, but their is so many different types of magic, it would be hard to counter them all. (I.E. You use magic that works of your stamina, while someone else uses magic that runs off spirits.) Does your magic power work on those that use blood magic? If it truly does work on all kinds of magic, that needs a kind of limiter as well. Also what does "uses this to add attack points to her opponent in case she becomes weak" mean? Add some more desrciption on your weapon.
 
05-02-15, 9:40 AM

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Psychokinesis. You should write what is her limitations of the ability and the drawbacks.

Magic Limiter. The same case as with your primary, what's It's limits and drawbacks.

Morgan's emerald sword. Explain It a bit more, how does the sword work.
 
05-02-15, 10:30 AM

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All right a few issues here
first how long can you use pshycokinesis? If you were to indefinitely modify or influence a physical object, you could in theory, defy the laws of gravity indefinitely. Also, you say that your magic limiter reduces magic, but their is so many different types of magic, it would be hard to counter them all. (I.E. You use magic that works of your stamina, while someone else uses magic that runs off spirits.) Does your magic power work on those that use blood magic? If it truly does work on all kinds of magic, that needs a kind of limiter as well. Also what does "uses this to add attack points to her opponent in case she becomes weak" mean? Add some more desrciption on your weapon.


1. How long can you use psychokinesis? Maybe about 5 minutes.
2. Does your magic power work on those that uses blood magic? Yes, when he touch the person who is manipulated by the blood magic user.
Her power is similar to Touma Kamijou.
3. Add limiter?
Her somewhat limiter is when she uses that great amount of power to nullify the other person's power, her power to move objects or psychokinesis will lessen. It will distract how efficiently she will use psychokinesis. Besides of making an object float in the air for 5 minutes, it will only last a minute.
4. "Uses this to add attack points to her opponent in case she becomes weak"
I made an error about that. Sorry. It should be "uses this to increase her attack in case her psychokinesis is already at the critical level because of overuse of magic limiter.
 
05-02-15, 10:45 AM

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TheAnimeAdmiral said:
Psychokinesis. You should write what is her limitations of the ability and the drawbacks.

Magic Limiter. The same case as with your primary, what's It's limits and drawbacks.

Morgan's emerald sword. Explain It a bit more, how does the sword work.

1. What is the limitations of the ability and drawbacks?
She can float an objct in the air about 5 minutes. The time and how efficiently she will use it depends on how much she uses the magic limiter.
2. What is the limitation and the drawbacks of the magic limiter?
The more powerful the opponent's unleashed power is, the more power she will use to nullify it or to limit. The more power she use to nullify an opponent's power, the more weaker psychokinesis is.
3. Weapon work?
There is nothing really special in that weapon. She uses it to add attack to the enemy.
 
05-02-15, 12:14 PM

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Psychokinesis
What would be the maximum weight she could lift with It?
 
05-03-15, 3:24 AM

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Psychokinesis
What would be the maximum weight she could lift with It?

I am not that really good in math.

I hope you don't mind if I change the name and picture of my character.
 
05-03-15, 3:39 AM

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Lisette98 said:
I am not that really good in math.

I hope you don't mind if I change the name and picture of my character.


You can just compare It to an object.

It hasn't been approved yet, so you can.

Also; You should add all that stuff to your character profile too.(about the powers, like that she can use It for 5 minutes max.)
 
05-03-15, 3:44 AM

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TheAnimeAdmiral said:
Lisette98 said:
I am not that really good in math.

I hope you don't mind if I change the name and picture of my character.


You can just compare It to an object.

It hasn't been approved yet, so you can.

Also; You should add all that stuff to your character profile too.(about the powers, like that she can use It for 5 minutes max.)

Well, she cannot move a really big boulder. She cannot move a building.

I already edited my character's powers.
 
05-03-15, 3:57 AM

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Lisette

Hmmmmmmm..... Can't you just put the weight in kilo's or lbs, whichever you prefer?
 
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Hmmmmmmm..... Can't you just put the weight in kilo's or lbs, whichever you prefer?

That's quite hard. I googled how much a building weight and I receive information about the World trade center tower has a weight of 500,000,000 kg. So my character cannot lift an object that has a weight of 500,000,000 kg?
 
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I just realized..... Your ability is quite, very similar to Canaas's character Kaya Sato http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=365407

But, 500 million kg, is more than just OP. I in real life weigh 60 kg. So... You could pretty much blast people into space...
 
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TheAnimeAdmiral said:
I just realized..... Your ability is quite, very similar to Canaas's character Kaya Sato http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=365407

But, 500 million kg, is more than just OP. I in real life weigh 60 kg. So... You could pretty much blast people into space...

It is quite similar.

That will be a great idea. Unfortunately, it is somewhat godmodding if her power will be able to do that.

A boulder weight 4 644.785 kilograms. Is this enough to be a limit? It can be the estimated weight to lift and the 500 million kg is the original one. The limiter limits her power after all. It cannot be considered as godmodding.

I added somethings to my weapon.
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