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Aug 29, 2012 9:58 AM

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Holy shit that caught me off guard. Good thing later I found out it was just a fan-service H-Scene, and was a 0.5 of a chapter. I thought it was actually part of chapter 16, and part of the book when I read it. Though I feel better that this is just a extra bit, reading it just came to the first thoughts. "This scene answers all the unanswered questions when first reading the book and watching the anime". I never expected my questions to be answered, like if sex was possible. I guess it was. In the end I just thought it was weird, hilarious, out and place, out of character, informational, and fucked up if they were doing it for the first time. The things they "try" ... Everything contradicts itself to being a game too... I thought no "bodily fluids" existed apart from tears. I thought it even said "If this was real life, my palm would be covered in sweat", clearly it existed in the scene... along with some more.
 
Aug 30, 2012 5:02 PM

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It was "eh" at best.


We need to get all the WTFs we watched listed....please join and let the insanity reign!!!
WTF did I just watch? club

Join the Hibike! Euphonium Club.
 
Sep 3, 2012 3:24 AM

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I found the doujin for this lolololol XD
<img src="http://i41.servimg.com/u/f41/12/71/93/46/beats210.png" />
 
Sep 12, 2012 5:19 PM

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What an interesting chapter... -.-

Go Kirito?
 
Sep 14, 2012 5:14 PM
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*Mindblown*

Not sure how I should feel after reading this... but it was definitely both hilarious and interesting. Interesting in the fact that I haven't read something so intently in a long time. Maybe because I've never read a erotic novel before. Might have to check out some in the future lmao.
 
Sep 14, 2012 6:02 PM

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*Mindblown*

Not sure how I should feel after reading this... but it was definitely both hilarious and interesting. Interesting in the fact that I haven't read something so intently in a long time. Maybe because I've never read a erotic novel before. Might have to check out some in the future lmao.



Sounds like a tarp as was reading this chapter.

Damn Asuna and her six climax's........ trollface.jpg
 
Sep 20, 2012 8:07 AM

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.................... Dafuq did i just read -_-
 
Sep 30, 2012 12:21 PM

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Kinda disturbing picturing Asuna and Kirito doing this
*In Shock*
In a game?
[Input amazing signature]
Jelly?
 
Oct 5, 2012 9:17 AM

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FUCK YEA!!
see ya guys, I'm going to fakku right here right now...
 
Oct 24, 2012 12:40 AM

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The only thing I've read from SAO, and the only thing I don't regret witnessing in the universe of SAO.
I'm a douche. Deal with it.
 
Oct 28, 2012 1:19 PM

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"Yes... Make me...full...with your thing Kirito..."

dying.
 
Oct 28, 2012 1:51 PM

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I dare you to read this and not smile, cause it's impossible. Too funny, glopping just killed me.
 
Nov 24, 2012 9:49 PM

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need this in the anime
ITS TOO HILARIOUS XD

一瞬千撃



真・瞬獄殺
 
Dec 13, 2012 2:38 PM

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I hope they make ova of 16.5
 
Dec 21, 2012 8:59 AM

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Can someome give me a link that would work? For some reason, Minus bugs out when I click "download".
 
Mar 7, 2013 11:05 AM

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Man...
The imagination of Asuna and Kirito doing that....
Kind of hilarious, considering how old they are at that time xD
 
Mar 25, 2013 2:36 PM

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That was kinda intense though loved it at how they changed the pace of the story.
I am seriously hooked to this novel, beyond doubt, the best
 
Mar 25, 2013 2:53 PM

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It sounds exactly like every other hentai ever.

If it wasn't SAO, nobody would care or make a big deal out of it.
 
Mar 28, 2013 7:56 AM

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KuroDubZero said:


*Mindblown*

Not sure how I should feel after reading this... but it was definitely both hilarious and interesting. Interesting in the fact that I haven't read something so intently in a long time. Maybe because I've never read a erotic novel before. Might have to check out some in the future lmao.


:O ..
mind blown indeed...
THE OPPAI DRAGON SHALL SOON ARISE!
~Zoom Zoom Iyaan!
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Asuna Yuuki. she totally knows what love is.
Rias Gremory. She totally knows what love and tits are.
women. your doing it right.
 
Mar 28, 2013 8:03 AM

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ok now reading this chapter after reading the whole of the series. if i was to think back to the time when kirito and asuna were alone after the day when he "decided to spend the night" their relationship was super close. it all makes crystal clear sense.
i had always had the feeling that they totally had sex. but i never thought i would find actual proof they did it.
im so proud right now of the author. and of kirito.
kazuto is a legend. he shall go down in history as one of the best male protagonists ever.
THE OPPAI DRAGON SHALL SOON ARISE!
~Zoom Zoom Iyaan!
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Asuna Yuuki. she totally knows what love is.
Rias Gremory. She totally knows what love and tits are.
women. your doing it right.
 
Jul 18, 2013 7:29 AM

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ITT

Kids and Virgins find awesome sex "HILARIOUS ROFL DERP"

Like the poster above me said, Kirito is a legend. He, unlike 98% of manga/anime's male characters, takes no bullshit and lustfully fucks the brains out of his girl [and in the first fucking volume!] I was saturated of that typical "first kissu" after ~83 chapters (or ~45 anime episodes) in most series.

Kudos to Kawahara and also for not making this canon, otherwise there'd 4 times as many kids here yelling how "random and funny" that was.
 
Oct 26, 2013 3:57 AM

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Xandersson said:
projection


A few things: First, don't use terminology such as "ITT" outside *chan. Actually, never use such terminology unless you're doing so ironically.

Second, when you write so vociferously about what's essentially a throwaway discussion about an author's junk pile ero-fic, you make it widely known that you find the behavior (of the appropriately young demographic) distasteful because it reminds you so much of your own sexual uncomfortability and insecurity. Oops; if you hadn't made it entirely obvious with the overzealous, pseudo-alpha phraseology "takes no bullshit and lustfully fucks the brains out of his girl," you certainly did so by invoking "kids" as an epithet. 'Me thinks,' etc.

It's widely established that anime is created, by-and-large, as a compensatory wish fulfillment indulgence for socially insecure young adults (or, at best, as age-appropriate wish fulfillment for developing teens and pre-teens). Whatever one's stake in it might be, to cop an attitude and claim the source material is being bemired by juvenile humor and interpretation forgets who the hell these shows are made for in the first place.

Abridged version: When you try to strip adolescent sexuality from anime and manga—where it playfully belongs, no less—you do realize that your desperation to reference it "maturely" indicates an inability to do just that, don't you? If not, here's to your continuing endeavors.
 
Dec 4, 2013 7:01 AM

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Finally done reading this shit and... despite I've read lots of H-scenes from different eroge, I feel like I'm going to have nightmares even though the writing is nothing different from other eroge's H-scenes that I've read.
 
Jan 10, 2014 2:36 PM

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I laughed at this probably more than I should have. But still I'm happy that the author made this chapter. You don't see a H scene in one of your favorite manga/anime/light novel stories made by the author himself very often...or at all. At least I haven't head of anything like that before. Reading it made me kinda happy, because after re-watching one scene of the anime I figured out that Asuna and Kirito actually did it (I know, I was kinda slow) and I was wondering what it was like and...yeah, here's my answer. Thank you Reki-sama.
 
Feb 10, 2014 1:46 PM

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God damnit, so was 16.5 real or not? (As in made by the novels author and not fan made)
 
Feb 22, 2014 12:30 PM

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The best part SAO.
 
Feb 23, 2014 4:53 PM

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The guy is shit at writing porn too.
 
Mar 14, 2014 5:51 PM

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I apologise if this isn't allowed, and feel free to disregard this post if that is the case, but..

Where can I find this chapter? It's not included in any of the ones I've found.
 
May 19, 2014 10:23 AM

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Haha, this stuff is epic. That wasn't unnecessary actually. I really like this one. Thanks, Reki-sama.
 
Aug 3, 2014 12:35 AM

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God damnit, so was 16.5 real or not? (As in made by the novels author and not fan made)


The chapter was posted on Reki's website where he had posted all his SAO content before he had it published.

But there was a debate over whether he wrote it or not. To the point Baka Tsuki took it down long before they took down the entire series when it gained English publication. They had questioned it being canon or whether he wrote it.

But Reki admits to writing it as sort of an experimental thought. He doesn't like talking about it much. I can see why. It's rather embarrassing chapter. But he did say it officially wasn't canon.

Part of me thinks his stance on the chapter is to cover his work form excess criticism and scrutiny.

http://www.t-ono.net/sakura-con-2013/Reki-Kawahara-Panel-Sakura-Con-2013.html

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On a side thought.

I had a hilarious thought about the chapter as well. I was thinking "What if Sugaha was at the Hospital visiting when Kirito and Asuna consummated their virtual relationship?"

She would be moping around changing his flowers and just tidying up and taking turns just sitting by the bed holding his hand.

While sitting in the chair and looking across his bed, she would suddenly notice that there's a bulge under the sheets. At first she jumps up and says "what is that!?" Being curious she would awkwardly check it out. Obviously it would be with a few tsundere freak out moments of second guessing her actions. Then she finally gets the nerve to pull off the sheets and flips his gown to the side and there's his Penis poking out, throbbing away at full attention. She freaks out again. But then she notices it pulsating. She leans in to look at it closer. Just then, in the virtual world, Kirito is climaxing with Asuna. AND, in the real world, his penis suddenly explodes like Mount St Helen all over Suguha's face, hair, and chest, with some of it even going in her shocked mouth. She falls back into the chair beside the bed while being literally drenched in 2 years of built up seamen.

Then, a staff nurse would walk in briskly to check on the patient cause she noticed a strong change in Kirito bio signs, She finds Suguha covered in goo and Suguha's face turns beet red and she rushes out the room with her bag and runs home. The nurse giggles and turns around to notice the mess Kirito made and giggles some more. Then she says something cute and proceeds to clean up Kirito, change his bedding and gown. Then the nurse will tuck Kirito in, lean in and say "pleasant dreams", and walks out the room. The End.
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Cirris said:
Wardog442 said:
God damnit, so was 16.5 real or not? (As in made by the novels author and not fan made)


The chapter was posted on Reki's website where he had posted all his SAO content before he had it published.

But there was a debate over whether he wrote it or not. To the point Baka Tsuki took it down long before they took down the entire series when it gained English publication. They had questioned it being canon or whether he wrote it.

But Reki admits to writing it as sort of an experimental thought. He doesn't like talking about it much. I can see why. It's rather embarrassing chapter. But he did say it officially wasn't canon.

Part of me thinks his stance on the chapter is to cover his work form excess criticism and scrutiny.

http://www.t-ono.net/sakura-con-2013/Reki-Kawahara-Panel-Sakura-Con-2013.html

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On a side thought.

I had a hilarious thought about the chapter as well. I was thinking "What if Sugaha was at the Hospital visiting when Kirito and Asuna consummated their virtual relationship?"

She would be moping around changing his flowers and just tidying up and taking turns just sitting by the bed holding his hand.

While sitting in the chair and looking across his bed, she would suddenly notice that there's a bulge under the sheets. At first she jumps up and says "what is that!?" Being curious she would awkwardly check it out. Obviously it would be with a few tsundere freak out moments of second guessing her actions. Then she finally gets the nerve to pull off the sheets and flips his gown to the side and there's his Penis poking out, throbbing away at full attention. She freaks out again. But then she notices it pulsating. She leans in to look at it closer. Just then, in the virtual world, Kirito is climaxing with Asuna. AND, in the real world, his penis suddenly explodes like Mount St Helen all over Suguha's face, hair, and chest, with some of it even going in her shocked mouth. She falls back into the chair beside the bed while being literally drenched in 2 years of built up seamen.

Then, a staff nurse would walk in briskly to check on the patient cause she noticed a strong change in Kirito bio signs, She finds Suguha covered in goo and Suguha's face turns beet red and she rushes out the room with her bag and runs home. The nurse giggles and turns around to notice the mess Kirito made and giggles some more. Then she says something cute and proceeds to clean up Kirito, change his bedding and gown. Then the nurse will tuck Kirito in, lean in and say "pleasant dreams", and walks out the room. The End.

And that nurse was Aki and then´d grab the ass of Kirito :v

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I think in 16.6 and 16.7 16.5 it is kinda stablished as canon since it states it wasn´t their first time
And that they had more sex when married
 
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Cirris said:
On a side thought.

I had a hilarious thought about the chapter as well. I was thinking "What if Sugaha was at the Hospital visiting when Kirito and Asuna consummated their virtual relationship?"

She would be moping around changing his flowers and just tidying up and taking turns just sitting by the bed holding his hand.

While sitting in the chair and looking across his bed, she would suddenly notice that there's a bulge under the sheets. At first she jumps up and says "what is that!?" Being curious she would awkwardly check it out. Obviously it would be with a few tsundere freak out moments of second guessing her actions. Then she finally gets the nerve to pull off the sheets and flips his gown to the side and there's his Penis poking out, throbbing away at full attention. She freaks out again. But then she notices it pulsating. She leans in to look at it closer. Just then, in the virtual world, Kirito is climaxing with Asuna. AND, in the real world, his penis suddenly explodes like Mount St Helen all over Suguha's face, hair, and chest, with some of it even going in her shocked mouth. She falls back into the chair beside the bed while being literally drenched in 2 years of built up seamen.

Then, a staff nurse would walk in briskly to check on the patient cause she noticed a strong change in Kirito bio signs, She finds Suguha covered in goo and Suguha's face turns beet red and she rushes out the room with her bag and runs home. The nurse giggles and turns around to notice the mess Kirito made and giggles some more. Then she says something cute and proceeds to clean up Kirito, change his bedding and gown. Then the nurse will tuck Kirito in, lean in and say "pleasant dreams", and walks out the room. The End.


That was better than 16.5. :thumbsup:
 
Oct 14, 2014 6:31 AM

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I apologise if this isn't allowed, and feel free to disregard this post if that is the case, but..

Where can I find this chapter? It's not included in any of the ones I've found.


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8539671/1/Sword-Art-Online-Extra-Chapter-16-5

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Can someone tell me if this is actually canon? It just seems a bit out of context to have virtual game sex after they just moved in, at their age aswell.
 
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Two years worth of semen made a glopping noise as it flowed endlessly into Asuna.
 
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