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08-07-10, 7:02 AM
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Was made entirely out of boredom and for 'zeh lulz0rs
Chapter 1 – A Wonderful Night
-----JUST TO LET YOU KNOW-----
There happens to be many errors when I was writing this chapter. I apologised for the bad description and poor start to the storyline. This is my first time trying something out in my spare time. I sort of found out that my writing gets worse if I write some more. Sorry, if my writing is bad and the quotation system and the use of repetitive words and generic/typical stuff I put in. Best to imagine if this is an anime, since I pictured it like that.
I never bothered to correct...or take this story seriously no more. It's dead to me now.
In the grassy fields and windy weather, the full moon appeared in the starry sky. Out in the country side is a teenage boy that is lying on the ground like a star with it’s arms and legs spread out. The wind is like a powerful typhoon and is tearing the grass from the ground and into the air. The boy is wearing his standard high school uniform that has a black blazer, black pants, navy tie and black shoes. The breast pocket on the blazer has a gold logo of a love heart being pierced through a black and white sword. He is wearing his black leather fingerless gloves while holding onto his blue mobile phone.
He sighed deeply and got up slowly. The moment he stood up he saw a girl that is currently five metres away from him. His face shows no surprise or curiosity. He simply stared at her and walked away. The girl is wearing the same school uniform as him except, she is wearing a skirt and long socks. She is also wearing a pair of leather gloves and is also holding onto her mobile phone.
“What did you think of the covenant?” she asked while looking out into the wilderness. The boy stopped and tucked his hands into his pocket as he looked onto the sky. “Its bullshit, that’s all I could say” he answered. The girl continued looking out onto the winding wilderness while the guy continued looking up at the starry sky.
“Did you know…” she said shortly, breaking the awkward silence. She put the mobile phone into of her blazer pocket and then looked at her right hand. “…if you insult the covenant in front of another member…”. A blue barrier is glowing blue around her right hand. “…the sentence is death since it’s under the Mystical Acension League rule #36. ‘Never insult the covenant, break this rule is a huge offense and the punishment is death’ You know what this means right?”. The palm of her is glowing dark blue, while the outside of her hand is glowing blue. The dark blue glow is getting larger.
The boy smiled sadistically, “So you’re going to kill? That’s something I’d like to see”. The girl turned around with her arms outstretched towards the boy’s position. A huge barrier like beam of blue and white casted out from the palm of her hand is heading towards the boy. A thin circle layered the beam while a star shape layers her right hand. The beam is three times her height, the sound is like a single crack of thunder that goes for 10 seconds and the ground or grass is evaporated.
The boy quickly turned around and outstretched his left hand as if he was trying to grab something. The beam collided into his hand a second later. The connection of the beam to the girl disappeared. The area exploded like a missile. The sound of the explosion echoed throughout the wilderness, breaking the sound of the heavy wind. The rough wind blew the smoke away and the boy happened to stand there with his arm still stretched. Static electricity appeared for only a short moment.
The trench made by the beam is seven metres deep in a perfect semi-circle. “Your magic is still a piece of shit when you’re going easy. It’s going to take more than that to take me down. I presume you’re Monia? The Top ranked Magician that happens to use a large dose of magic for a small attack, am I right?” the boy said while putting his other hand into his pocket.
Monia is astonished, “Correct, you’re one of the few who manage to block that attack. By any chance, are you Kairen the Newbie that everyone is talking about?”. Kairen’s aura is rising and his whole body started spewing shadows, “Which one of those douche bags called me a newbie?”
“I can’t believe I’m partnering you for this” Monia suddenly spoke out. The shadows around Kairen disappeared and so does his aura. “Partner for what?” he asked as his expression changes to a state of confusion. Monia sighs and scratches her head. “It’s a mission where the best can only succeed. Just you and me. It was my choice to make this decision anyway, since you’re the only the only that doesn’t care about status or power”.
Kairen closed his eyes to give him self a clear thought. He reopened his eyes later on, he stretched out his hand,, “I guess it’ll take a lot more than words to trust each other. Once you’ve shaken my hand, it means I have complete faith in you as a partner, but I’ll give you a rare minimal l of my trust”. She gave him small smile. Monia walked up to Kairen and clasped his hand in agreement of their trust.
2 Years Later
A thug stumbled across a dead in the alleyway. He turned around and saw Kairen moving closer to him. The thug desperately charges forward aimlessly with a knife in hand. Kairen move slightly to the right and the thug missed him by an inch. Kairen’s arm blurred rapidly like a bullet and thrusts his hand onto the thugs face with the palm of his hand. A spiral of faded white appeared around his arms. The thug is making a small noise that a person with fear should always do, Kairen smiled and the faded white spiral disappeared with a force explosion. The force around the arm headed flowed along his flesh and out of the palm of the hand that is holding the thugs face.
The thug’s head exploded in half and the flesh and blood splattered against the wall and onto Kairen. Chunks of small pieces of meat made squishing noises as it hits the ground floor. Fragments of the thug’s skull that is covered in red scattered all over the alley. Kairen happened to catch to one of the small flesh. He opened his jaws and crunched on the soft the soft tendering meat while tearing it apart like a ravaging dog.
Monia walked into the alley as she is instructed to do. She comes a across a frightening scene and saw the bloody Kairen looking down on the corpse. The blood is gushing out the half headless body like a river. It flowed past Kairen’s feet and the dark red river has now become a huge puddle. It flowed in the cracks like a stream all the way to Monia’s feet. She quickly took several steps back before the red stream could touch her.
Kairen turned around as he heard the faint steps. “Hello, my beautiful princess Monia. Have you decided to come and see me again?” as he took a 4 steps forward. “I prepared you a nice meal that is lying right beside me, I don’t mind sharing it with you though” he offered while his hand is facing the direction of the dead body. “It may taste a bit raw and dirty, but you’ll get adjusted to it if you eat plenty of it, it taste’s exactly like you” Kairen said as he lick the blood from his bloody fingers.
Monia’s facial expression has a combination of fear, disgust and anger. “What in god’s name have you done…? I’ve been hearing that the greatest enemy of the pact has appeared but… I n-never expect it to be you. Just…why are you doing this?” she asked with a concerned voiced.
Kairen chuckled and said “Why? Why!?”. He walked back to the dead body and is standing beside it and is looking down at it again. “I’ll tell you why. The reason why I did this is because…”. He thrust his hand inside the abdomen of the dead corpse like a spear, while saying “…these humans are the cause of the pact!”. He is digging his hand further into the corpse, trying to find something. “Because of these petty humans, we are unable to make love for each other! This Pact! This so called ‘COVENANT’ Is just unfair! No Fun! No freedom! And No!-”
He dug his other hand in the flesh, and is holding something. “And No Fucking Love!”, he stood up as if he was trying to pull something. The sound of meat tearing a part is loud, it’s a sound of small squishing at the same time the sound of someone cutting fresh meat. Suddenly, the middle area of the abdomen burst open vertically, and a long red spinal cord dripping blood has risen. Kairen continued pulling the blood dripping spinal cord. Monia clasped her hands on her mouth in shock and distress. Kairen turned his around and stopped pulling.
He gave her a sadistic smile and his sadistic smiling face looks like a happy-go serial killer. Monia took several steps back. Kairen started laughing. His laugh is hysterical like a murderer that is enjoying on torturing their victims or playing with human lives. While laughing, he spins the red spinal cord like a propeller above him with the body attached. The area is so confined, that the body is hitting against the walls and it looks like a human sprinkler that is sprinkling out blood.
Monia took several paces back again and suddenly the tearing sound of the corpse is really loud, the body detached itself from the spinal cord. The body headed towards Monia but landed half way.
Kairen’s body is abdomen area is covered in so much blood and his face is covered in some portion while the lower area is covered a lot. His hand is fully coloured red and his hair I almost full of it.
He continued laughing like a mad man but slowly stopped. Kairen dropped the spinal cord and walked towards the dead body. He thrust his in it again and tore something out. He held a huge chunk of meat and shoved it in his mouth. He chewed it while putting his hand over his mouth so he doesn’t have to spit out. Monia slowly backed away, unable to handle the traumatized scene.
Kairen swallowed his food and looked at Monia with a huge smile on his face. She came to halt and slowly moved her hand into her blazer pocket. Kairen grabbed the corpse’s arm, opened his jaws and sunk his teeth into the essences of the human flesh. He ripped a large piece of meat off the body. The dead arm is bleeding rapidly like an overspilled cup. Kairen swallowed his food once again. He stared at the hole of the arm he just bitten off. “A BONE!” he said loudly also in a cheery tone as if he discovered some treasure.
He shoved his hand into the hole and grabbed onto the bone. He pulled the bone out the body with little effort. A massive splash of blood washed onto his head and body. He split the bone from the elbow by pulling it apart. More splashes of blood washed upon body. The bone is dripping red like a half closed tap. He looked at Monia’s direction while holding the bone that still has some meat attached to it while saying “Hey princess, want a kebab?”. The smile on his face has vanished. Monia is no where to be seen. He looked around the bloody environment he’s in. He let out a sigh and walked out the alley while eating the meat that is still attached to the bone.
Monia is running a long the side path, she kept running and running. Breathing heavily from exhaustion, she ran towards the park and continued onwards. She came a cross a fountain, surrounded by trees and benches. She came to a halt and put her hands on her knees, she is gasping for breathe from all the fatigue of running away. She walked to the bench while inhaling the air. She sat down and looked at the sky, the wind is blowing gently. The sweat from her face is sliding down along her cheek.
“I thought you’d be here, have you calmed down already?” Kairen said inside the shadows. Monia smiled while looking at the sky, “All that running is making me tired. Too tired to worry about anything, and too tired to know what you are doing. At least running calms me down, you should know that.”
Kairen walked out the shadows and onto the light, his appearance is bloody like almost every part of his body. “Not only does it calm you down. It takes away your worries right?” Kairen conversed. Kairen walked towards the bench and sat down next to her.
“Sorry about the back alley. My insanity is getting the better of me, I still got several minutes left before I get overwhelmed by it. I may not look like it, I may sound normal. But…ever since that incident, I have changed. I couldn’t stand drinking water or eating food other than blood or human flesh. The smell of human is very tempting, I couldn’t stop myself. I’ve been fighting this for over 2 years. Now…I’m losing myself…Monia.”
He grabbed her hand, Monia looked at him, staring down at his eyes. “Kill me! Before I get drawn by madness! I don’t want to hurt you or anyone! I don’t want to turn into something I’m not” Kairen pleaded. Monia looked at him shockingly. She looked closer into his eyes. She can see a brink of red in his brown eyes.
“Kairen…don’t tell me that you’re…” she said with a sympathetic face, her voice is distorted from pity. “Kairen looked down while holding her hand, “My father is a cannibal and my mother is a magician. Thanks to my mother’s magic, I couldn’t turn into a cannibal until I have an evil aura. I guess I’m considered an abomination.”
Kairen used his other hand and grabbed a short blade from inside Monia’s blazer pocket. He put the blade on her hand and pointed it onto his chest. With a clean smile he said “Do it.” Monia hesitated, her hands shaking while holding the blade. Kairen continued staring at her, “Even in this situation, you still show sympathy to a murderer” he said. “But Kairen…I don’t remember what happened 2 years ago” she said. “What…Never mind that. Dig this blade into my heart, Now!”
Monia closed her eyes, her face shows a sign of sympathetic distress. A single tear appeared from her left eye. “No…I can’t…” she said sharply. Suddenly…Kairen coughed a heap of blood in front of her face. Kairen released his grip from her hand. Monia slowly looked down on his chest. The short blade is dugged into his body. She pulled the blade out and quickly hugged him.
“Monia…it’s coming. Run…befor-” Kairen coughed a huge mass of blood over her shoulders. His brown eye is slowly getting redder. Monia still held him tightly, “I’m not going anywhere. There’s no way I can leave you alone in this state”.
“Moni…ah…you’ve broken…the pact. I don’t…want to k-“he coughed again, “Go to the bottom draw. Read diary…entry 23”. In a matter of seconds, Kairen’s body suddenly pushed her away and fell on the ground. He started vomiting out organs. He made an ear piercing scream, as he wriggles his body on the floor like a possessed human being. “Kairen!!!” she cried.
The wound on Kairen’s chest is getting larger. He vomited more organs from the victim’s he’s eaten. The full moon is slowly turning red. Kairen continued screaming in agony. Monia covered her face with her hands.
His skin is slowly deteriorating, “Monia………” he slowly gasped out “...don’t…die” Monia uncovered her face and saw his agonic smile. His red fill eyes suddenly burst out of it’s socket. Monia gave a high pitched scream. Kairen’s body grew holes and a mass heap of blood is seeping out of it. His ribcages fell out of place and his fingers are falling off. He wriggled his body like a possessed demon and his organs are squishy through the holes.
Trying to endure the pain, he slowly looked up at Monia, while outstretching his fingerless hand with his last remaining strength. “Moniaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!” he howled from the top of his lungs with his arm still outstretched.
Monia rushed to Kairen’s side and grabbed his fingerless hands. The full moon is completely red. Without warning, Kairen’s skull has appeared through his skin. His flesh is rotting away and his bones are piercing through the living tissue. His body exploded with blood and is pouring out like a heavy river. “Just how much blood do you have!?” Monia shrieked.
His intestines are spewing itself from the empty head. Even then, he is still alive. Unable to scream, his spinal cord has ripped itself open through his leg. His lip fell off and so does his nose and eyes. His appearance is like an abomination that is slowly melting away. A massive hole to his heart opened up and his lungs let’s itself out. With a traumatizing face, she looked in the hole. His heart is still beating, with all the arteries connected to it.
She notices that she can see the fountain through his heart. She gently hugged him. His whole back is missing. It’s like someone scooped it up. His head is very floppy since the skull is gone. The red liquid kept pouring itself out; covering half the area they’re in while overflowing a few places.
Kairen’s body is no longer in her grasp. The only Monia can hold onto is the remaining skin he has left. On the floor, lay a beating heart with arteries connected to it. The heart is beating slowly and more slowly every second.
With a few droplets of tears coming down her bloody face. She picked up the heart and puts it against her chest, on where her heart is. The heart finally stopped beating and she gave out a soft cry. Her surroundings are nothing but blood, torn flesh, skin, bones and several organs.
The ground started to shake and then a huge crack appeared in several places, Kairen’s heart is beating again, it flown out of her hand and back onto the ground. The organs, blood, skin and bones are being sucked into one area. Monia got up and took a couple steps back. “Kairen…?” she spoke anxiously.
“Holy Shit! Holy Fucking Shit! I just won! I just fucknig won $15,000! HaHaHa, suck on that SHOTACON!” someone yelled cheerfully disrupting the disturbing event near the fountain. Monia turned around to see the man in the shadows dancing around like a fool. Monia bit her lips and slowly said, “Meta…Nix?”
“Hey Monia! You just wouldn’t believe what actually happened. There’s this one time Shota and I happened
Monia is shocked, her rage slowly builds up and she clenches her fist. Her hand is glowing red and started casting out that glow. A large ring around the hand had formed and a large gust of thick wind headed towards Meta’s position.
The gust of wind sliced half his body horizontally making him fly in the air backwards. His intestines are wriggling and his blood is spurted like a fountain. When he hit solid ground, Meta’s lower body is twitching. “I’m immune to pain remember? Seriously, stop cutting up my fucking body!” Meta complained, his voice is full of rage and hatred.
Monia cast another gust of wind and Meta’s arm suddenly ripped open, revealing the red bone. “Meta Nix you son of a bitch! Aren’t you considerate of other people’s feelings?” Monia shrieked.
“Shit Nigga, you’re tripping! I ain’t the one that started this shit, Shota will probably knows what’s crackin’ than I do, na mean? So let’s head back to tha crib before some beef turns up because I need some parlay to run off with some shit. Kairen was off the chain to begin with, he had some dime and dope, instead of popping the cap of someone’s ass, he’s downright bites like it a crazy motherfucker. You go watch your back and I’ll watch yours. Thing’lls go straight, so be careful on what you saying, because these fools ain’t gonna be mad atcha but rather dis you and your crew. Stay Up and bail out of this shit. You and yo ace of street kings should chop down some wood” Meta warned and complained in a black like accent.
------In Translation to Ze Black Talk------
“You shit brain, you what’re you’re doing?. I’m not the one who did this, Shota might probably know something more than I, and you know what I mean right? Let’s head back to that place before some trouble shows up because I needed rest to get away from all this. Kairen is out of control, he started dealing some Cocaine and heroin, instead of shooting someone’s ass off, he just eats them like a cannibal. Watch yourself and I’ll give you a helping hand. Everything will be fine, just be careful of the dangers ahead since they wont get angry at you but will kill you and your team instead. Take care of yourself and relieve yourself from this investigation. You and your professional team members should just relax somewhere while chopping wood”
Monia clenched her fist, “Enough…with the…BLACK TALK!”. She casted another gust of wind, this time the wind is more powerful than before. The gust sweeps through the ground, slicing it to pieces. The gust of wind reached to Meta’s body. “Oh dear” she gasped.
“Are you trying to kill me you one crazy ugly son of a degenerate four-eyed bitch!” Meta insulted furiously. All of Meta’s upper body has almost disappeared; his limbs are currently lost inside a whole heap of flesh. His chest is severely ripped open, the bones of his ribs stuck out a like a sword that is stabbed on the ground. His left eye is partly gouged out. The lower part of the body is in a rather bad shape, a rod like figure is pointing up at the sky. It suddenly lops off. “Oh My God! Don’t tell me those are my penis! Please tell me it’s not my penis”.
“I’m afraid that penis of yours will be making kids in the next afterlife. I mean…it had an erection before it died. See that white glucose appearing from the tip. That must be your last and only child” she said with no pity in her voice.
Kairen appeared out of the bushes from the park. “Is that why you lodged his dick off? Because you simply screwed him once before and believed that dick is tainted to other women, correct? Or is it you want him to penniless dick and force himself to make a uterus for the sake of turning a man into a simple transvestite?”.
Modified by Winda, 04-29-12, 1:49 AM
08-08-10, 6:08 AM
Joined: Jan 2010
Its a good story for your first attempt. I started to laugh when you introduced me into this stage. A gambler who black talks, never expected that.
My dick fell off, lol.
08-14-10, 1:07 AM
Joined: Jul 2008
I'm ashamed I just found it now fffffffffu
You're good with details,man.I like how you write :3
The last part....I don't even.
That's so not Monia.ButIlikeit.
Keep it coming :3
12-26-10, 9:01 AM
Joined: Feb 2008
I Never Saw This Up Until Now... Keep It Coming.
Sig by HB/$híkäßánè Thanks, Mang.
09-18-12, 5:13 PM
Joined: Aug 2012
Lol, nice XD Ur much better than me at writing stories...My chapters are so short ;P