My light novel...(repost)

Jul 20, 2016 5:40 AM

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OK so first off, I know I will probably never get published in japan yada yada yada. I know my English sucks. I know I'm just a kid dreaming. Now that we got that out of the way, lets start.

So I began writing a light novel based off an idea my first year of high school. The first volume I wrote has atrocious grammar and super fast pacing. But volume by volume it gets better.

I'm currently working on the forth volume, but I really want to know others opinions on it. keep in mind I don't want to make any super big changed based on suggestions, but it would be awesome if you guys could give it a read (if you can get past the grammar, this is the rough rough draft.)

volume 1: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1x4xb9EkpSGts1jw7oI-4fValc2d0tzZjFs_Zrl2Kwww

volume 2: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1j9oz48pntEu8j5iJ1IJeLvyjnOCUix7c0Mpl8uzLrbg

volume 3: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1G1Or0tkIm4_N08-neH5Ra_AefN3ftcUNgePNN4sZHkU

volume 3 is the best so far, not counting volume 4 which is a wip.

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Jul 20, 2016 5:44 AM

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What about you actually put a link to the novel?

Jul 20, 2016 5:53 AM

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Kouun said:
What about you actually put a link to the novel?

ok, I added links to the first 3 volumes.

Jul 20, 2016 7:51 AM

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I am not going to read it but I'll say youre an honest cookie to frankly spit it out it's a repost but you know you could just bump the older thread instead? With increased posts count people would think you're some famous writer!

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Jul 20, 2016 7:55 AM

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Keep it up... but you could turn your story into a YA fiction which is the western counterpart of LNs... you could have more hopes in earning fame there.

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Jul 20, 2016 7:55 AM

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Iizbakaokay said:
I am not going to read it but I'll say youre an honest cookie to frankly spit it out it's a repost but you know you could just bump the older thread instead? With increased posts count people would think you're some famous writer!

it says repost because they accidentally posted it in other section, so they were told to move it to creative

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