Yeah, your review is so shitty that I want to subscribe to your channel. Good job, sir.  |
LordVitaly said: Yeah, your review is so shitty that I want to subscribe to your channel. Good job, sir. wow thanks <3 this has motivated me XD |
| You pause WAY too much when you're speaking. Have more long-formed sentences and coherent thoughts when speaking especially in a review. I have a car. The car is red. I like driving. That's how it sounds. it should be like this I enjoy driving my red car. It helps if you write the review out and then proofread it multiple times. |
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GaijinAnime said: Gabagool said: You pause WAY too much when you're speaking. Have more long-formed sentences and coherent thoughts when speaking especially in a review. I have a car. The car is red. I like driving. That's how it sounds. it should be like this I enjoy driving my red car. It helps if you write the review out and then proofread it multiple times. Yeah, my bad, I just now realized people like the super fast speech style, and I didn't think people liked long reviews, so I minimized the details, thanks for the advice. As someone who is still evolving with Anime Reviews himself, I can say that the length of the review is all based on how much information you want to talk about. But as the others had said, you need to flow a bit more smoothly between your points and your sentences, the pausing in between each thing said was incredibly distracting at times. Other then that, I think you did a good job :) |
GaijinAnime said: Gabagool said: You pause WAY too much when you're speaking. Have more long-formed sentences and coherent thoughts when speaking especially in a review. I have a car. The car is red. I like driving. That's how it sounds. it should be like this I enjoy driving my red car. It helps if you write the review out and then proofread it multiple times. Yeah, my bad, I just now realized people like the super fast speech style, and I didn't think people liked long reviews, so I minimized the details, thanks for the advice. It's not about being super fast or slow it's just about having a rhythm to your speech and expressing a complete thought when you open your mouth. Also a reviews length doesn't have much to do with it I like both short and long it's just about how much information you want to talk about. It's all a part of the process of anything my friend.. trial and error, trial and error. Just learn from your mistakes and get a little better every time you make a review and soon you'll be great at it. |
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