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Jun 19, 2015 3:07 PM
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If I don't like an ending,, I try and change it. This was the idea of a story I had on how to conclude this hentai, I've know about the hentai it's based off, and even still the endings suck. So here is the outline for how I think this anime should have ended. Keep in mind I most likely will never write this cause I'm usually busy, but hey if you like this outline feel free to write a story, let me read it.

The Ep starts off in Ray's(the brown-skinned woman) office, enters a man in a smart suit accompanied by men in black suits. He's the head demon that runs the demonic city, under the guise of a CEO of a powerful corporation. (I'll call him Devil for now) He has a history with Ray, and was the one who entrusted the Philosopher's Stone to her. He finds the body of Miki and the plant creature that ate Ray's body. Using his powers he revives Ray, and crafts a new body for her from the plant monster; making her part plant in a way.

Devil questions her about what happened and she tells him everything. He apparently knows about what the main villain is preparing and in fact welcomes it. He has his men take Miki's body, he was able to read her last thoughts; she was aware of what she was doing, and she regrets and she is in love with Rikuro. He decides he has a use for her. While his men take Miki's body Devil stays with Ray to learn more about the imortal Rikuro and break in her new body.


insert various scenes of Annrose and Mitico being sexually assaulted (might as well stay somewhat true to the game). Cut to Rikuro who is searching for Annrose and Mitico; he runs in Devil they have a conversation about his immortality and what the main villain is planning. Devil explains that Rikuro must allow the gate to be open and let whatever comes through. Then enter Miki she's been resurrected as a machine gun totting succubus, she wants to help, and be by Rikuro's side.


more h-scenes of Annrose and Mitico, Annrose is on the breaking point and Mitico has just been sacrificed to open the portal. Devil with Ray's help fights the demons who come out from the portal, they are his siblings who want to turn Earth into hell and Devil doesn't want that he likes Earth the way it is. He kills off his brothers, and Rikuro frees Annrose and together they close the portal. and Kill the main villain.

After the battle, Devil makes comments about the main villain and his brothers, then telling Annerose to keep up the good work and mentions how lucky she is to have an immortal slave that loves her. Rikuro talks about Mitico and Devil, with Annerose's help are able to summon her back, using their magic along with Rikuro. Devil take the Philosopher's Stone stating it would be in his safer hands, and tasks Miki to keep an eye on Rikuro, saying that a pure soul immortal is very valuable.


Cut to some h-scenes. Rikuro has sex with Ray in her new body, and with Lee Mayfeng, who has become Ray's personal sex toy.

Miki having sex with Rikuro, but rougher than usually, she's a little more dominate, being now a succubus, she needs alot of energy, and him being an immortal he has more then enough.

next cut to him and Mitico going about their usually routine, he says something to make her mad, and when she is about to try and kill him, she can't turns out that while she still serves Annerose, Rikuro is now her master and she can't harm him any longer
h-scene she at first is reluctant to sleep with him but she does in the end.

and of course the last scene with him and Annerose, she berates him for sleep with the other women as he is still her slave, but they admit they care for each other.


Sounds like a nice outline for a story eh? Don't hold your breath on me writing it anytime soon, but I'm throwing it out there for someone to write one if you like the idea, do let me read it.

 
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Jun 20, 2015 12:46 PM
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4 espisodes base on the game , I hope there ll be game version 2, then they can make more espisode to finish the story, Main char have special power but showing too little. One vote for new game 2 ^^
 
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Jun 21, 2015 10:40 PM
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Lustdemon said:
If I don't like an ending,, I try and change it. This was the idea of a story I had on how to conclude this hentai, I've know about the hentai it's based off, and even still the endings suck. So here is the outline for how I think this anime should have ended. Keep in mind I most likely will never write this cause I'm usually busy, but hey if you like this outline feel free to write a story, let me read it.

The Ep starts off in Ray's(the brown-skinned woman) office, enters a man in a smart suit accompanied by men in black suits. He's the head demon that runs the demonic city, under the guise of a CEO of a powerful corporation. (I'll call him Devil for now) He has a history with Ray, and was the one who entrusted the Philosopher's Stone to her. He finds the body of Miki and the plant creature that ate Ray's body. Using his powers he revives Ray, and crafts a new body for her from the plant monster; making her part plant in a way.

Devil questions her about what happened and she tells him everything. He apparently knows about what the main villain is preparing and in fact welcomes it. He has his men take Miki's body, he was able to read her last thoughts; she was aware of what she was doing, and she regrets and she is in love with Rikuro. He decides he has a use for her. While his men take Miki's body Devil stays with Ray to learn more about the imortal Rikuro and break in her new body.


insert various scenes of Annrose and Mitico being sexually assaulted (might as well stay somewhat true to the game). Cut to Rikuro who is searching for Annrose and Mitico; he runs in Devil they have a conversation about his immortality and what the main villain is planning. Devil explains that Rikuro must allow the gate to be open and let whatever comes through. Then enter Miki she's been resurrected as a machine gun totting succubus, she wants to help, and be by Rikuro's side.


more h-scenes of Annrose and Mitico, Annrose is on the breaking point and Mitico has just been sacrificed to open the portal. Devil with Ray's help fights the demons who come out from the portal, they are his siblings who want to turn Earth into hell and Devil doesn't want that he likes Earth the way it is. He kills off his brothers, and Rikuro frees Annrose and together they close the portal. and Kill the main villain.

After the battle, Devil makes comments about the main villain and his brothers, then telling Annerose to keep up the good work and mentions how lucky she is to have an immortal slave that loves her. Rikuro talks about Mitico and Devil, with Annerose's help are able to summon her back, using their magic along with Rikuro. Devil take the Philosopher's Stone stating it would be in his safer hands, and tasks Miki to keep an eye on Rikuro, saying that a pure soul immortal is very valuable.


Cut to some h-scenes. Rikuro has sex with Ray in her new body, and with Lee Mayfeng, who has become Ray's personal sex toy.

Miki having sex with Rikuro, but rougher than usually, she's a little more dominate, being now a succubus, she needs alot of energy, and him being an immortal he has more then enough.

next cut to him and Mitico going about their usually routine, he says something to make her mad, and when she is about to try and kill him, she can't turns out that while she still serves Annerose, Rikuro is now her master and she can't harm him any longer
h-scene she at first is reluctant to sleep with him but she does in the end.

and of course the last scene with him and Annerose, she berates him for sleep with the other women as he is still her slave, but they admit they care for each other.


Sounds like a nice outline for a story eh? Don't hold your breath on me writing it anytime soon, but I'm throwing it out there for someone to write one if you like the idea, do let me read it.

now THIS is a god damn good ending! Glad someone dosnt have their head in their ass when it comes to this series. 😅
 
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Jun 30, 2015 4:50 PM
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Nice to see some people like it. I know I said most likely would not ever write a fan-fic about this, I"ve still jotted down a few more ideas here and there. hell I'll post them. My writing isn't what it used to be, and I do hope someone finds this and does make a manga out of it. Here are some notes:

Title Rename: Koutetsu no Majo Annerose-Vanilla Harem Ending.

The Character Devil: I'm thinking of a decent name for him. I'm thinking Azriel perhaps.
So I'm not fully aware of the universe this story is set in, I know it's in the same one as Hell Knight and Taimanin Asagi. I wanted him to be the head demon in charge of the city He's depicted as a young man in his early 30's but that's because every hundred years or so the demon incarnates himself in a host body(perhaps humans who have the potential to become immortal). He just did that and at the moment is in a somewhat weakened state, his memories are fragmented with his own and those of this host memories and personality. He's calm and savy, but a little aloof. He's is the own who gave Aishwarya Ray the Philosopher's Stone and made a pact with her.
Barde Barde used to work for him, but decided to instead help Azriel's brother another demon trapped in hell, come to Earth. Azriel doesn't want this, he likes the way things are, and decides to deal with his brother once and for all. I picture him dressed similar to Spike from Cowboy Bebop, but with dark grey shoulder-length hair, that comes straight down.


Aishwarya Ray: I'm still figuring out just how she is revived. I want it to be where she has a new body made from the plant creature that ate her. I'm leaning towards one of the conditions of the pact with Azriel, is that her spirit/soul belongs to her, and he won't allow anyone to kill her. Hence when she died, her spirit went to him; explaining when he is there in the first place. So he has his men take the plant creature to their labs to craft a new body for her. She's now part plant, and has some new features(I.E. one interested H-scene where she uses her tentacles on the main character and Azriel. kinky 3-way)

Miki Otonashi: The don't reveal too much about her being a puppet for Barde. How she was turned, etc. I'd like to think that she was betrayed by her brother, who sold or traded her soul away. When Barde takes control of her I picture that she was aware of her actions but couldn't do anything. She developed feelings for the MC. When Azriel comes to Ray's office he reads here last thoughts. Seeing such a waste he revives her, turning her into a demon, and hiring her in his employ. Now she's a machine-gun toting succubus. At the end of the series she's tasked with keeping an eye on the MC as a pure-soul immortal is very rare. This is somewhat of a problem, as since she's a succubus she ends up draining the MC's life energy each time he has sex with her.

Mitico Fleuretty: As a demon she wasn't truly kill, merely her soul was trapped in limbo, in between earth and the demon realm. Azriel, with the help of Annerose, the MC and the Philospher's Stone; are able to bring her back in a new body. She continues to serve Annerose, but the MC is actually her master now. She finds out of course when she attempts to kill him, but can't. I picture the MC apologizing for not being able to prevent what happened to her, and he vows to never let it happen again. She breaks down crying and gives herself to him.

Lee Mayfeng: I could go either way with her. Kill her off, or make her Aishwarya Ray's personal sex slave. And maybe turn that 3some into a foursome.
 
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Sep 23, 2015 8:11 PM
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Nah, killing Mayfeng would be a huge waste. I'd say she should get the troll ending instead; would make some nice irony into the story. Just as long as it has a really dark tone to her scene, it would be quite lovely.
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Nov 15, 2015 7:03 AM
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Are they coming out with an episode 5?
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Plss make ep5 i want the ending of this story better than been fucked by a monster..ewww it's gross and i hate it if that's the end of the story..i hope ep5 will be maded or make a this vid to Part2 and a better ending..thanks