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May 3, 2015 6:09 PM

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7starkiller99 said:
After a week of stalling - Almost finished. Gimme a day more.

"Do not ask for whom the bell tolls for it tolls for thee"
May 14, 2015 6:35 AM

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Can I join? If it is full, then it's ok. It's been awhile since I'm active. If it's good...

Name: Ichi-0900, Shadow-Hunter
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Personality: Not much known about him. Known to take any bounty without fail, no questions ask.
Faction: Independent, but known to take jobs from the Government
Weapons: A katana made from a special material that makes it so sharp it can cut through diamonds, and an arm-guard that emits a beam shield when prompt.
Abilties: Never seen, but rumors have been around that he can meld with shadows and move around them silently, creating a gravity well to stop his targets, using lightning and moves as fast as light.
Appearance:Wears a black cloak on top of his crimson jacket and a dark-blue jeans with a dragon symbol at each side. Brown hair with a dash of topaz at the right, hetero-chrome eyes with yellow at the right and black at the left. Wears an eye-patch at the left.

Hope I can get in...
May 15, 2015 4:03 PM

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I need to read this entire thing again, lost from being away from it.
Jun 2, 2015 11:32 AM

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Is this fan-fic still alive? It's almost 3 weeks up...
Jun 11, 2015 2:57 PM

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They're probably finishing up with their exams and studies, have faith.
Jul 15, 2015 11:57 AM

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Lol, many days later I finally return. Yes I have written more, but no I don't have it with me. My other notepad got moved to storage and I have to find it.
A great protagonist once said, "It's only overpowered if you can't return the favor!"


Jul 15, 2015 12:01 PM

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7starkiller99 said:
Lol, many days later I finally return. Yes I have written more, but no I don't have it with me. My other notepad got moved to storage and I have to find it.

Lol, it's ok. Just take your time man.
Dec 15, 2015 11:47 PM

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I-9029 said:
7starkiller99 said:
Lol, many days later I finally return. Yes I have written more, but no I don't have it with me. My other notepad got moved to storage and I have to find it.

Lol, it's ok. Just take your time man.


Welp, finally back on MAL.

Writing out the next chapter, and trying to figure out who survived this long lol.

WAIT OH DANG, you're new.

There we go - now to add you in as that extra pirate whatever person!

Wonderful.

NEVERMIND.

Here's the next part. I decided to just get it done right now >_>
7starkiller99Dec 16, 2015 12:17 AM
A great protagonist once said, "It's only overpowered if you can't return the favor!"


Dec 16, 2015 12:13 AM

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Chapter 9: Part 5: How Things Fell Apart

7starkiller99Dec 16, 2015 12:17 AM
A great protagonist once said, "It's only overpowered if you can't return the favor!"


Dec 16, 2015 12:40 AM

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Chapter 9: Part 6: White Knight Left Alone

7starkiller99Dec 16, 2015 12:59 AM
A great protagonist once said, "It's only overpowered if you can't return the favor!"


Dec 16, 2015 6:01 AM

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Woo! Glad you didn't give up on this. =)
Dec 16, 2015 9:12 AM

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The Legend returns, I realllllyy gotta reread this so I'm up to date, for some reason all I can remember is Daniel Craig and stormtroopers...I think my memories are getting mixed up with something else.
I've been here way too long...
Dec 16, 2015 4:14 PM

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Astros said:
Woo! Glad you didn't give up on this. =)
TheConquerer said:
The Legend returns, I realllllyy gotta reread this so I'm up to date, for some reason all I can remember is Daniel Craig and stormtroopers...I think my memories are getting mixed up with something else.


Don't worry, although I wrote several other stories the real reason I couldn't continue this was because it was a bit too complicated.

My cheat sheet is right now 90 more pages than the actual story >_>

Going to add in the new person and mop up the mutant portion before i return to plotting out the first real battle between Dissonance vs Enforcers vs Independent vs Pirates.
A great protagonist once said, "It's only overpowered if you can't return the favor!"


Dec 16, 2015 4:41 PM

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Chapter 9: Part 6: Pawn Reaches End Square

7starkiller99Dec 16, 2015 4:52 PM
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Dec 16, 2015 5:28 PM

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Chapter 9: Part 7: Rook Vs Enemy Pawn

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Dec 16, 2015 5:56 PM

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Chapter 9: Part 8: Thoughts of The Rooks

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Dec 16, 2015 6:02 PM

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Seeing someone else described as stoic in the presence of Herlock is a tad irksome, like, talk about being upstaged.
Herlock x Yore need to bond more.
Dec 18, 2015 12:56 AM

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Chapter 9: Part 9: The Queen Awakens

7starkiller99Dec 18, 2015 1:00 AM
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Dec 18, 2015 1:27 AM

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Chapter 9: Part 10: Expendable Pawns Removed, On with the Game

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Dec 18, 2015 1:44 AM

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TIMELINE CHECK

Previous days:

Everyone is separated

THEN!!!!

Walker is taken to Enforcer HQ, Enforcers plot

Day begins sometime around Chapter 7: Part 1

Dissonance begins plotting

7star awakens and moves out

Coalition heads to Canicus

Early Morning: (7AM ish)

Mikhail Herlock runs into mutations but figures can still head to intel if enemies are around

Conq and Peace head out to survey location and examine details of the planet

7star discovers Protaku still alive, heads to pocket dimension to recover and plan


Zenith and Apex break into Apollo research facility to kill Ai, while Carna reports to Apollo


Starting of the Day x out of ???: Somewhere around noon

Rest of Coalition decides to head to battlefield

7star and Protaku prepare to gate intervene and retrieve Ai from facility by using gate to pocket dimension

Enforcers decide on simple plan



MID-Day X out of ???: (Around 9 to 10 AM morning)

Protaku and 7star fight Zenith and Apex to save Ai in alternate dimension

Conq and Peace try to reach roof of building to escape Mutations

Walker is stuck at Starship watching monitors over battlefield

Members of Enforcers and Dissonance Sounds are engaged on battlefield

Other members of the Coalition head to battlefield in original spaceship

Mikhail Herlock attempts to steal intel, but is stopped by mutations

Daniel revealed to be part of Shades, Status Unknown


CURRENT Resolutions: (Chapter 9 Part 10) (Noon-ish)

7star and Protaku fend off Apex and Zenith

Conq reaches roof alone, saved by Ichi Bounty Hunter. Peace, Status Unknown.

Emory deals with fodder, takes out elite dissonance squads

#1 and #2 Enforcers head towards believed main Dissonance encampment

Dissonance #1 Emi Kills Selhání' #6 enforcer and destroys Enforcer Communication Station

Crank retreats to main starship, meets Walker once more.

Other members of the Coalition head to battlefield in original spaceship (No change)

Mikhail Herlock accepts deal with Null to bring mutations to battle in order to requisition new battleship


CONCLUSION: THIS IS ONE SUPER ULTRA MEGA LONG DAY THAT SOMEHOW TAKES FOREVER?!!!!





So I wonder if I should say that everything happened really compact like or if I should just break this up into a number of days. Oh well, you know.


My Sense of Time! :)
7starkiller99Dec 18, 2015 1:51 AM
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Dec 18, 2015 3:02 AM

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And I thought the previous day was really long.
I'm in the middle of rereading at the moment so I can't comment on that. I guess in times like these things happen really fast so it really could be just one long day or several restless ones.

On a side note I appreciate the story more through the reread, some things are making a bit more sense now that I know what happens down the track. Or maybe I'm just not up to the confusing parts yet.
Jan 6, 2016 7:48 AM

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Heya still reading this! I'm super slow on things when I really should be faster but I find I need to be in a certain mood to read these.

I'm on chap 9 ish and things are looking very interesting!
I hope I can finish it soon!

edit; got it all read finally, can't wait to see how this all concludes!
TheConquererJan 6, 2016 8:18 AM
I've been here way too long...
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