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Apr 3, 2014 3:20 PM

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Ok so we got three different people on three different browsers...showing three different avatars.
Weird...

and now mine is showing that one too, wth MAL system.

Anyway still working on next chapter, its a difficult one to get right.
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Finally an update, check your characters.




The crowd had kept their distance, the bandits stood centre square. Everyone knew something was going to go down, never do such users gather without some shitstorm happening or discussion heating up to flame war levels.
The tall one stood in the middle, leaping up to the fountains side to get a higher elevation. He was clad in a rather revealing outfit, it looked military what was actually there, which wasn't much.
"Alright so you know why we are here, we are on a mission of mercy. We are here to take away some trouble makers from this overcrowded casual section and take them away for a while"
"Hey Heredity do we even know what they look like?" grumbled the one with the smiley symbol on their breast pocket
"We don't need to, Korrvo" He nodded to him "Drawn them out for us will you, I'm already bored"
"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
The shorter one was sat, dipping their toe into the cold water "and what am I supposed to be doing"
"watching our backs, don't want the attention of any mods now" UnoPuntoCinco sighed, pulling a frowned face "We paid them off didn't we, we have our 15 minutes" he replied.
" Never trust a mod" He replied, nodding to the blacksmiths, he had noticed Jack leaving his house and walking slowly towards the town square.

"On it!" UnoPuntoCinco yelled, leaping up with inhuman speed, he had already cleared the crowds and with a low knee had dropped Jack to the floor before he could even figure out what had happened, he was grabbed from behind and held in place. "What the fuck is this all about?!" Jack yelled through gripped teeth as an arm hung around his neck. "yum yum" UnoPuntoCinco spoke softly, licking the side of Jacks neck "This one, I want this one for my own"
"Maybe, it would be fun to watch" Heredity quipped as he sat crossed legs on the fountain as if watching a play. Meanwhile in the blacksmiths house Lime_ was trying to peer out the window and see what was happening, more importantly where was Jack? he began to slowly creep out the house
He was small so he crawled along the ground, hoping to make it past the crowds and get into a good vantage spot to see what was happening. Unaware somebody had already seen him, a shadow from behind grinning with menace and venom "Swell...aren't you just adorable." Korrvo was upon him before he had turned, gripping his face in his hands, he pulled up Lime_ holding his face how an aggressive lover would "I like adorable things" Lime_ struggled to escape, this was not his idea of a good Yaoi fiction.
"got another one!" Yelled Korrvo pushing Lime_ out into the open and down onto his face next to Jack "Hey leave him alone, whatever it is you want you leave him alone!" he yelled angry, staring down the two before him
"Do you love him?" replied Heredity bringing his face directly in front of his.
This took Jack by surprise "what no! why the hell would I ever long a guy?! especially not this one!" he turned to look at Lime_, his face was not easily disguising the look of hurt he felt in his chest after hearing that "Hey, I didn't mean it like that I-" Jack tried to say but Lime_ wasn't listening anymore.

"We got two more gentlemen!" Heredity stood up from the fountain, stretching his long slender legs
"Two more!" laughed Korrvo, "I'm sure we can sniff out a few lost lambs"
"Come out, come out where ever you are. We are here to take you into custody"
Apr 3, 2014 5:21 PM
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Things just got dramatic. I feel bad for lime, having to deal with such a dense guy.

I hate to admit it but I'm interested in seeing what happens next.
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Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it !
One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em.

We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me.
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there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
Apr 4, 2014 8:15 AM

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NarTaco said:

I hate to admit it but I'm interested in seeing what happens next.


YAY!

Sapewloth said:
Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it !
One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em.

We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me.


Glad you like it :)
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Kibura_Iburasa said:

"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
Relatable.

*will comment further after I'm done with my game*

Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.
KorrvoApr 4, 2014 9:44 AM
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Apr 4, 2014 10:06 AM

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Korrvo said:


Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.


Anything is possible, perhaps Jack hurt his feeling enough to push him into the arms of another...

Ive updated the first page with a character list so people can see if you are currently in the story.
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oh shiiiiiit nigga. my precum is unmatched in the world of yaoi.
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Korrvo said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:

"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
Relatable.

*will comment further after I'm done with my game*

Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.

Why do I have a feeling that's going to happen?
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Part 6 is up and the stakes are raised. Why does it keep getting darker...Gotta try to lighten the story.




"Who are they?" JD whispered sat down below the window.
"I'm not sure, looks like some hired thugs" Lupa replied he was standing to the side of the window peering out a crack in the curtains. "Looks like they are distracted at the moment, we can sneak out the back and out of casual. Perhaps make it as far as Forum games, they will never find us in there. Place is a mess" he left the window and began packing up their gear.
JD slinked out from the ground and made his way to Lupa's side "We can't just run away and let them walk on over this town, they have hostages"
"Developing a conscious? could have used that back then huh" Lupa said, still packing not looking up
"That's not fair and you know it" JD replied
"All I do know is that this may be our only chance to get out of here" he turned grabbing JD by the arm
"You willing to get perma'd or worse for some random users?" he was serious and cold.
JD just returned his stare...

Outside the bandits had grown impatient, Korrvo was tapping his foot with increased speed. Heredity was eyeing up Jack like a hungry dog, he was returning an angry stare but would glance over to Lime_ now and again, who was still just looking at the floor. Jack could feel that he has said something wrong because he could feel the pain of causing him hurt. Funny that just the night before he didn't even know this person now here he was risking his neck for him.
"I'm done waiting" Stepping up the tall Heredity began to walk towards the two by was quickly stopped by a flying bottle to the face, he was a tough cookie because it only left a small scratch on his forehead. He had a crazed look in his eyes "What the fuck was that supposed to be!" he yelled giving the random user a really fucked up stare "you wanna play little man" he walked over pushing the few users before him trying lightly to guard the one behind away. Grabbing this user by the neck Heredity pushed him up against the wall.

"gotta a name boy?" Heredity said through his teeth, the user a youngish male squirmed in his grip
"You have no right to mess with these people, leave them alone" he said through choked voice
"I said your name not your opinions"
The user looked Heredity in the eyes "Kousoku11" he replied more clearly as Heredity released his grip letting him drop to the ground "Here" crouching down to his side "Let me return the favour" Heredity pulled his finger along the side of Kousoku's face, turning it so the nail began to cut into the skin causing a little cut "Guess we have something in common now" Heredity whispered to him.
He stood up, turning back to Korrvo and UnoPuntoCinco who both looked a little worried
"They will come to us, even if we have to mess with the new play things to do it, take the small one!" he yelled, giving a look to the crowd as a don't even try to fuck with us, making them all take a step back.

Korrvo piped up first "I get the small one remember" he quickly made his way over to Lime_ who peered up, korrvo had crouched to his level, holding his face in his delicate hands, slowly drawing it across his chin "I think I've fallen for you...Lime_" this surprised him, Jack piped up "you know him?!"
"No! I don't I've never seen these people before" Lime_ responded with a panicked voice
"he is right you know, we have never met before" he reached down slowly moving his cold hand down from Limes neck, slowly descending Lime_ began to uncontrollably blush as his body reacted to the cold touch, slowly Korrvo with a most wicked smile reached further down his stomach "I will love you like you have never known" Korrvo managed with a trembled voice. suddenly whilst his hand was cutting through the shirt buttons opening Limes chest up to the world to see Korrvo felt a large object plough into his side, knocking him to the floor. It was Jack who had managed to pull himself to his feet, he looked pissed "Jack...." Lime said, with tears in his eyes
"You think you can fuck with anyone you want, you think I'm going to sit and watch this. You're not going to touch him ever again you get me fucker!" he yelled at him kicking out his foot and planting it into Korrvo's face, knocking him to his side. UnoPuntoCinco was about to jump up and stop him when he too was stopped by Heredity with a waved hand, he wanted to watch it unfold.

"You think you can hurt me psh!" Korrvo spat, getting up onto his feet, Jack stood trying to be ready for a counter even with his hands tied behind his back but with a swift forward kick from Korrvo he was on his back unable to get up, like a turtle stranded. He let out a huff as Korrvo landed on his lap, both legs to either side as if riding him. "Then I'll have you" he half laughed, letting out a sigh of excitement and licking the side of Jacks face "What how about no you fucking lunatic! I-" he paused, looking back over at Lime_ he was covering himself best he could but his chest was still showing through the damaged shirt he wore and he had the widest eyes he had ever seen, suddenly it didn't matter. The only thing that mattered was keeping Lime_ safe but even Jack didn't want to admit that deep down the idea of someone else not himself getting to touch him like that made him angry, deep down he felt something that he had to make sure he never admitted to himself.
"Yeah..." Jack said returning his focused gaze to Korrvo "You can have me instead."
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Apr 4, 2014 3:58 PM

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Started the fight, most likely on the spur of the moment? Check.
Preferably with a sucker punch? Check.
Opponent can fight back so you immediately lost? Check.

All in all, that's a surprisingly accurate description on how most of my fights have gone down.

Also: Aww, Jack finally realized his feelings towards Lime_ (although I'm not sure if it was being implied at the second to last sentence that he himself would like to go... "rough" on him. Not essentially to the same extend, but in some way regardless)

Now we just gotta hope that he stalled them long enough for the protagonists to arrive. Otherwise this might turn into something that Jack can't simply walk out of unharmed. I'd imagine even the "walk" -part might be a challenge in and of itself. Am I being subtle enough?
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Kousoku11 said:

Also: Aww, Jack finally realized his feelings towards Lime_ (although I'm not sure if it was being implied at the second to last sentence that he himself would like to go... "rough" on him. Not essentially to the same extend, but in some way regardless)


I think even though he is telling himself he only wants to protect him I think really really deep down a part of him is actually jealous of Korrvo for getting to be so intimate with Lime_ and thats probably part of the reason hes actually double pissed off because not only did Korrvo try to violate him but he did something Jack would never let himself do even though a part of him really wants to. Even though his manly side would never let him admit it.


I'm also thinking of shipping you with Heredity, hes rather dominant and you seem like a good nice guy he would probably go for the good of heart wannabe hero types.
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It's here!!!!

My Hero said:

You're not going to touch him ever again you get me!

My Hero said:

"Yeah..." Jack said returning his focused gaze to Korrvo "You can have me instead."


/Swoon



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Kibura_Iburasa said:
I think even though he is telling himself he only wants to protect him I think really really deep down a part of him is actually jealous of Korrvo for getting to be so intimate with Lime_ and thats probably part of the reason hes actually double pissed off because not only did Korrvo try to violate him but he did something Jack would never let himself do even though a part of him really wants to. Even though his manly side would never let him admit it.

Or that. Which would be the less disturbing interpretation out of the two.

Kibura_Iburasa said:
I'm also thinking of shipping you with Heredity, hes rather dominant and you seem like a good nice guy he would probably go for the good of heart wannabe hero types.

Interesting choice, gotta admit that. Especially so considering how their first meeting went...
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Kousoku11 said:

Or that. Which would be the less disturbing interpretation out of the two.


What can I say I love romance, I still smile like an idiot and squee when characters in anime are having a moment.

Two guys have their faces close in a scene
*me sitting forward, smiling wildly, eyes wide" "No kiss!"
Something interrupts the moment, usually a bossy female character
*flips table*
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I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist.

Talk about aggressive love thou.
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Korrvo said:
I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist.

Talk about aggressive love thou.


Yes your character ended up basically writing himself, is he...too aggressive?
I kinda like him, whilst the others are threats in their own rights I felt your character is more the wild cat let off a leash a much more immediate threat to the characters.
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Korrvo said:
I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist.

Talk about aggressive love thou.


Yes your character ended up writing himself apparently, is he...too aggressive?
I wouldn't say too aggressive

I like him. I always pictured my rapist self as someone who is easily love struck at first sight, and then can't help his impulses for his prey victims lovers.

Basically I'm French as fuck.

Does that help?

EDIT: A better explanation would be someone that is aggressive, yet caring for the people he has his eyes on, but is helpless to his impulses.
KorrvoApr 4, 2014 5:06 PM
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Korrvo said:


Basically I'm French as fuck.

Does that help?

EDIT: A better explanation would be someone that is aggressive, yet caring, but is helpless to his impulses.


haha XD also thats good, good that exactly where im taking the character anyway, glad to see we are on the same page. Just wait till you get Jack back to your room, funny enough its all decorated in french art nouveau and you offer him tea.
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Coffee > Tea dammit
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Korrvo said:
Coffee > Tea dammit


Nope -___- gotta be tea.

"Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-"
"your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair
Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, its far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?"
".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped.


;)
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LOL

That scene in a nutshell

And then I realize I've ran out of tea and I pull out the coffee.

Right?

Riiiiiiiight?
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Korrvo said:
Coffee > Tea dammit


Nope -___- gotta be tea.

"Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-"
"your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair
Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, its far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?"
".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped.


;)

Glad you put in some nice humor. This was hilarious.
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can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though
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Korrvo said:
I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist.

Korrvo said:
Basically I'm French as fuck.


LOOL So that really is how the world sees our men, huh ? Seems legit x).

Anyway, this one chapter is so choke-full of fan-art material (approx. 70% of which including Korrvo, lol), I can't even begin to count.
I'll definitely have to move my lazy bum and do something nice before we get to things get 'serious'.

Keep up the good work, Kibura.
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there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
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sorry for the delays Ive not quit its just trying to find the time to write up the next few chapters.
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Well-made story comes before anything else. I'm a patient person.
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;o;
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I like it, update now!
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can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though
an egomaniac and a fool

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I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me.

you flirt
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Korrvo said:
I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me.

you flirt
s-stop...
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Korrvo said:
I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me.

you flirt


you know it ;) but yeah its been a little delayed but not forgotten. I don't stay awake through the night much lately and during the day I can't seem to write Yaoi right, needs the night. Also my flatmate is around and he can't know I write dirty Yaoi fiction. I got an image to maintain.

I'll try to get a good few chapters in one go.
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So this is really happening
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yes if you read the whole thing...robots will only kill the people you put in-front of them so yeah.

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u were that homie in the thong werent u
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So this is really happening
Has been happening for some time. You're late to the party.

Better late than never, I guess.
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Ok here it is, another part!



The bandits had moved out of town the way they came in, the only way in or out of casual town.
Their camp sat upon the hillside overlooking the town and the lands beyond. A small collection of caravans sat with gear bursting from the seams. "come on love, I want to show you my place" Korrvo dragged the tied Jack away from the camp fire and towards one of the caravans, leaving Lime_ kneeled next to one of the far vans alone. He managed one last glimpse as their eyes met, he knew what he had to do to keep him safe. Even if it hurt him doing it.

Meanwhile back in town the crowds had begun to disperse, a lone character stood against the sunlight of the day. Kousoku looked around, he couldn't believe the people of this section would just let a group like that come in and take people away to do such nefarious things to. "Wait now" he tried to pipe up, trying to find the courage to stand up "W-we can't just let them get away"
"sure we can" came a voice from the dispersing crowds who were already going about their normal business. "wait, just wait come on guys we need to stand up for our fellow users!" he had already lost the crowd and was left standing alone and defeated. He looked down at the dirt, "Damn it!" kicking up a cloud of dust.
"We can help you out" came a voice from behind him.

Back at the bandit camp Heredity had kicked off his knee high boots and was wiggling his toes close to the fire "oh sweet jesus so much better" UnoPuntoCinco has laying upside down looking at the sky chewing on a blade of grass "Somedays it's good to do nothing at all" he murmured to himself, he glanced over back at Heredity "You know we have some spare hours, why don't we?"
Heredity shot him a glance of murderous intent "What did I tell you, that was a mistake" he crushed a pair of nuts in one hand to demonstrate his point harder.
"Sorry I asked" Uno huffed and went back to looking at the sky.
Behind the camp in the nearby forest clearing, a pair of eyes watched the camp.

Back in the wooden caravan, the lights inside had dimmed. Jack was tied to a large chair in the back, the whole place was decorated in French art nouveau with well decorated tea set at the centre. Korrvo had kicked off most items of clothing and now wore even more revealing clothing. He picked up the tea set
"Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-"
"your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair
Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, it's far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?"
".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped.
"no no not now" Korrvo had slowly sat down on Jacks lap and rested his head on his shoulder, looking up like a pet "tell me what you like about me" he cooed, twirling his finger on Jacks chest
"Ha you!" Jack sniffed, suddenly the finger touching him began to dig into flesh and started clawing its way down his chest "You know..." Korrvo spoke through gritted teeth trying to keep a level voice
"I can be just as much!" pulling his fingers through jacks flesh and causing cuts "An aggressive lover" His demeanour turned back again "As much as a gentle one" he went back to stroking the new wounds.

"I don't need your consent but I welcome it" he lowered his head to the chest wound he had just caused, kissing it gently, his lips were ice cold like his hands, just what was he? the shirt was slowly coming off as Korrvo explored every inch of Jacks upper body with his lips and tongue. As Jack sat there tied up, the two of them alone. He knew what was coming and somewhere in his head, his brain was telling him the only thing he could do was try to enjoy it, imagine it was a woman's touch to get through this. He closed his eyes and tried to visualise a woman's touch, a woman's kiss but it was hard to focus, the image kept changing, there was a familiar voice in his head. "I can make everything better" it was limes voice, he could see him in place of Korrvo, the image clear he couldn't shake it "why you?" he spoke "I said I can make everything better" replied Korrvo again, looking up from untying jacks lower clothing. Jack has his eyes shut "lime_" he mumbled quietly, nearly defeated, holding onto the one hope he had left.
Korrvo's face turned repulsed, he quickly got off of Jack's lap, growling he slapped Jack hard across the face "You bastard" he growled turning away from him "Still can't get that little shit out of your head even when you have me" He punched the wall, grinning like a psychopath "fine you want him, you want him I'll take him from you. All you will have is me" Korrvo quickly grabbed a large knife from the desk "right in front of you!" he yelled charging out of the room. Jack was regaining his senses "no stop!" he yelled struggling as hard as he could, rocking the chair he fell to the floor still trapped "No!" he yelled after Korrvo.
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That was.......interesting. I'm guessing Korrvo is ok with being portrayed like a sadistic bastard.
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That was.......interesting. I'm guessing Korrvo is ok with being portrayed like a sadistic bastard.


you know how sometimes characters end up writing themselves, he's one of those. I have absolutely no control of him, I merely write and he does what he wants.

Anyway hes...misunderstood and finds it hard to deal with his emotions in a stable way, he really does like Jack he just can't show those feelings normally, no matter how much he would want to. The more Jack resists the more he feels unwanted, not knowing how to deal with those feelings he attempts to destroy.

But if you think HE is sadistic just wait...
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
NarTaco said:
That was.......interesting. I'm guessing Korrvo is ok with being portrayed like a sadistic bastard.


But if you think HE is sadistic just wait...

Oh god, I was expecting you to say that. I guess I'll just wait and see how sadistic he can get~
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Rofl

I can't stop laughing

I'm like some kind of male yuno

We need more interesting characters like this in anime imo
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Korrvo said:
Rofl

I can't stop laughing

I'm like some kind of male yuno

We need more interesting characters like this in anime imo


Ive always wanted them to make a genderbend mirai nikki series, it would be amazun.

http://31.media.tumblr.com/a89405231a2c920d2fb883a3e7f3bafc/tumblr_mra8e0pM611sna2nso1_500.jpg
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Feel sorry for UnoPuntoCinco
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Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack.

Nevertheless, it's always lovely to see a yandere in action. Although it did hurt my immersion when I realized that when Jack mumbled Lime_'s name out loud, it would have come out as "Lime Underscore".

The drama is certainly intensifying. Not to mention the fact that I think I can see a H-scene coming. (Assuming that you're going to include them, that is. If not, then I just sense incoming implications of something happening).
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Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in:

"There's nothing sweeter than the pure romance that blossoms between high school boys--except for confectioneries based on the flavor of their kisses."


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I don't feel this will turn out well for mine hero



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Apr 11, 2014 4:34 PM

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UnoPuntoCinco said:
Feel sorry for UnoPuntoCinco


Y U so laid back

Kousoku11 said:
Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack.

Nevertheless, it's always lovely to see a yandere in action. Although it did hurt my immersion when I realized that when Jack mumbled Lime_'s name out loud, it would have come out as "Lime Underscore".


Remember i have the names saved so there's bound to be some discrepenses now and again. Everyone seems to think what Korrvo is doing is pretty extreme, I must write some dark stuff then because that scene is nothing compared to some of the ideas Ive had/may implement.
Apr 11, 2014 4:39 PM

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Lime_ said:
Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in:
Aww, don't blame him. All the poor guy wanted was some love.
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Apr 11, 2014 4:50 PM

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Korrvo said:
Lime_ said:
Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in:
Aww, don't blame him. All the poor guy wanted was some love.


I would give Korrvo some love but we are just too similar, it would be uninteresting for the both of us and Kousoku has already been claimed by Heredity and UPC is still trying to get it on with Heredity since their last....incident that one time. JD is for Lupa onry.

Can anyone love such a crazy guy as Korrvo? my answer is always yes, because its sexy as fucking hell to have a hot crazy guy in your story get it on with someone.

Korrvo u so crazeh hawt.
Apr 12, 2014 2:52 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Kousoku11 said:
Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack.
Everyone seems to think what Korrvo is doing is pretty extreme, I must write some dark stuff then because that scene is nothing compared to some of the ideas Ive had/may implement.
I wouldn't say "extreme", but it's still rather painful. As of now, it would take a lot for me to describe something as "extreme" (like that one painful scene from Higurashi involving Shion, for example (speaking of which, y u no watch 2nd season?)), which is partly why I'm now curious to see what exactly is going to happen in the future chapters that you keep hinting at.
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i'm such a playah.
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What's with all the malfic lately?

And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them?
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