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Mar 31, 2014 10:20 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
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NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy


I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;)
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Mar 31, 2014 10:22 AM

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lupadim said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:
lupadim said:
NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy


I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


you have to be happy that I gave you hot abs and cool scars though?
Mar 31, 2014 10:23 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
lupadim said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:
lupadim said:
NOw that you changed the name from Lupadim to Lupadin I am happy


I had your name saved on my spell check, for some reason its gone and reverted. I'll fix that don't you worry ;)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


you have to be happy that I gave you hot abs and cool scars though?
Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1
Mar 31, 2014 10:25 AM

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lupadim said:
Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1


Thats like complaining that Link doesn't have the master sword at the beginning of the game ;)
Mar 31, 2014 10:26 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
lupadim said:
Well, sure. But it seems I have no fedora in your story so that is a huge -1


Thats like complaining that Link doesn't have the master sword at the beginning of the game ;)
A valid complaint
Mar 31, 2014 1:52 PM

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Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out



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Mar 31, 2014 2:39 PM

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Lime_ said:
Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out
With 4 new characters being introduced, im expecting a massive plot-twist somehwere in betwen the climax.
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Mar 31, 2014 2:47 PM

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YEAH, PLOT TWIST PLEASE

Lupadim runs away, shit got too gay for him

And Lima comes in his place and goes all gay
Mar 31, 2014 3:57 PM

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That was cute, but where're the lemons?
Mar 31, 2014 4:03 PM

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Lime_ said:
Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out

yay~
http://i.imgur.com/tkTmCcV.jpg
One day, I'll get better, and I'll start drawing actual guy on guy...

Mar 31, 2014 4:07 PM

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kami_desu said:
Lime_ said:
Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out

yay~
http://i.imgur.com/tkTmCcV.jpg
One day, I'll get better, and I'll start drawing actual guy on guy...


KYAAAAA *fangirl squeee*
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Kellhus said:
GuusWayne said:
there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
Mar 31, 2014 4:11 PM

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kami_desu said:
Lime_ said:
Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out

yay~
http://i.imgur.com/tkTmCcV.jpg
One day, I'll get better, and I'll start drawing actual guy on guy...

Needed more skin
Mar 31, 2014 4:14 PM

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kami_desu said:
Lime_ said:
Kibura said:
and I'm stopping at yours tonight" Lime_ said


Hmmmmmm, wonder where this is going? :O



kami_desu said:
my fanart of lupa and JD
http://i.imgur.com/SNw31qJ.jpg
feel free to start fangirling


ooOo Do Jack x Lime!! Need something to visualize with ~^^


the suspense is, well, no, I think I know exactly how this is going to turn out

yay~
http://i.imgur.com/tkTmCcV.jpg
One day, I'll get better, and I'll start drawing actual guy on guy...



Hnnnggggg

UnoPuntoCinco said:

Needed more skin


Not yet, Lime and Jack is much more innocent a romance than say the more sweaty Lupa X JD romance. Thats what I love most, they are just so cute together where as lupa/jd are sexy.
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this is too gay for me
Mar 31, 2014 4:36 PM

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lupadim said:
this is too gay for me

Don't worry, soon it won't be enough
Mar 31, 2014 4:37 PM

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lupadim said:
this is too gay for me


This? is too gay for you...

Oh boy..
Mar 31, 2014 6:56 PM

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UnoPuntoCinco said:
That was cute, but where're the lemons?


don't be in a hurry, it will pay off but its gotta be real to the characters. After all Lupa would never jump straight into BL he has to be seduced by it, a touch here, a caress the loss of sense and eventually giving in to a most amazing BL scene so it has to at least start more as a Lime.

Same with Jack and Lime_ its going to take a little bit more.

Anyway next part sometime tomorrow morning, its late here. You will get your glimpse of the three new cast members incoming. Sorry Kousoku <3 but you will have to arrive in the story in the next part, I couldn't fit you in without it feeling forced.
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Anyway next part sometime tomorrow morning, its late here. You will get your glimpse of the three new cast members incoming. Sorry Kousoku <3 but you will have to arrive in the story in the next part, I couldn't fit you in without it feeling forced.

Well-made story comes before anything else. I'm a patient person. Even more so when there won't be OTP. Albeit for reasons that I can probably guess, being a writer myself
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Part fuuurrr (4)

The dawn was fast approaching, the sun was rising bathing MAL in a bright orange light and things were about to change. Strangers were arriving in town.

The light peered into the taverns room, upon the crumpled bed lay the two from the night before JD was now half slung over Lupas torso, he had been drooling in his sleep. Lupa was now upside down on the bed, it was a warm morning and both their body heat caused him to sweat; it glistened on his body.

Down the road in the blacksmiths house, the doors and boards were closed the stove cold. An old teapot rested next to two empty cups, the blacksmith had a guest. Regardless if he wanted that guest or not. Although Lime_ had been demanding and adamant in sharing a room, Jack had him sleep in the spare and although he made three unsuccessful attempts to infiltrate Jacks room they eventually both settled down.

The large wooden gates at the casual town entrance that were in much need of repair were cranked open by the morning MAL guard, the fresh air had kept him from falling back asleep at his post so he barely even looked at the newcomers but they were not newcomers, they had visited times before. They were bandits, of a certain kind.

"Another day another early start, why do we never sleep in anymore?" grumbled one, clad in military gear up to the neck and a crudely painted smiley face on the breast.
"because we always miss the good stuff, always happens early" The one on the left confirmed in a matter of fact way, this one was shorter; wearing stocky armour.
"Baka's" Said the one in the middle, tall and wearing rather odd and revealing clothing "It's at night when everything kicks off around here, how many times I gotta say" He scratched his head, yawning loudly "Where here for the job remember" he began to stretch as the others nodded in understanding "Alright into town layabouts"


Back at the blacksmiths Jack was awaking from a terrifying dream. He was been chased by a large silver haired rabbit intent on taking his most intimate possessions from him. He felt heavy for some reason, groggily rubbing his eyes he tried to focus on the strange blurry object resting upon his body.
"What the hell is hap- OH MY GOD WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY DOOR!!!?" he screamed peering over to the heavy wooden door that lay in splinters, now just a gaping hole in the wall. Gaping hole...he remembered how his dream ended and shuddered immensely.
"hmm...good morning" Lime_ purred laying his head back on Jacks chest, he was immediately launched into the air landing on his ass at the bottom of his bed.
Lime_ rubbed his eyes with his wrist, Jack automatically started blushing when he actually looked at him he was kinda cute in the morning..he thought to himself "Aw hell no!" he yelled to himself, shaking his head violently.
"whats wrong?" Lime_ spoke in a soft childish voice, it was a warm morning so even he had a blushing face. (that's so fucking Kawaii)

Down the road, the taverns folk began to rise out of bed. A commotion could be heard down the road coming from the blacksmiths house, sounded like a cat had gotten in or something the way he was yelling, chasing something around and apparently falling down two flights of stairs in the process.
Lupa's eyes shot open, he rose from his place of sleep like a vampire. Pulling an almighty displeased face when he noticed JD had slipped from his place on his chest so that his head was resting directly on his pants, the crotch to be precise. Grabbing JD by the ear with a tug he pulled him off of himself
"ow ow ow hey man what the hell!" JD protested as he was let go of
"No more sleeping in the same bed you hear me" Lupa crossed his arms in defiance "it's just un-natural" he nodded as if agreeing with himself.
"felt just fine to me...the sleep, I mean" JD responded he had begun to get dressed, so had Lupa, regardless of how the night went the two seemed pretty comfortable with each other during the day. They worked together to get ready as if it was a team getting ready for a sports match, each other throwing a certain item of clothing to the other "Hey what's that commotion?" Lupa looked out of the window, his eyes narrowed, he could see some commotion was occurring down the road towards the town square
"Looks like trouble."

Jack peered up from trying to chase down Lime_ who was now hiding under his table, suddenly Jack looked serious
"Jack..what is it?" Lime_ asked scooting out from under the table to his crouched side. Jack didn't looking back he had a sudden seriousness to his face, to his eyes that Lime_ had not seen the night before, his face was different, for some reason Lime_ was suddenly in awe of him, he felt his heart skip, enough to raise a hand and touch his own chest. Jack finally turned back to him, looking Lime_ directly in the eyes, enough to make him uncontrollably blush which surprised Lime_ himself, Jack spoke
"Trouble, I want you to stay here."


The bandit gang had arrived.


~~

im such a tease, I will say this in the next few chapters, there will be violations... before romance....
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Apr 1, 2014 9:22 AM

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that chapter wasn't so gay
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lupadim said:
that chapter wasn't so gay


Its coming, like a building volcanic eruption but first I have to bring you lot a lot...closer to each other and to do that they need risk they need peril they need sexual aggression!

Bring out the whips!
Apr 1, 2014 9:37 AM

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Kibura_Iburasa said:
lupadim said:
that chapter wasn't so gay


Its coming, like a building volcanic eruption but first I have to bring you lot a lot...closer to each other and to do that they need risk they need peril they need sexual aggression!

Bring out the whips!

For some reason I read erection instead of eruption... huhu

The focus on Jack and Lime_kun was pretty neat.
Wonder who bandits are esp. the small dude in revealing clothing, he totally caught my attention. I would place my bet on either Korrvo or UnoPunto being the little one, but I might be wrong.

Patiently waiting for the future lemon fest.
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Kellhus said:
GuusWayne said:
there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
Apr 1, 2014 9:42 AM

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Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM.
Apr 1, 2014 9:46 AM

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lupadim said:
Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM.
Tsundere much?
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NeoAnkara said:
lupadim said:
Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM.
Tsundere much?


Hes defiantly a Tsundere.
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
NeoAnkara said:
lupadim said:
Reading the history it seems JD is gay, not me. SO PLZ MAKE ME REJECT HIM.
Tsundere much?


Hes defiantly a Tsundere.
I AM NOT A TSUNDERE I HATE THEM

But some of them are cool

BUT STILL, I AM NOT ONE OF THEM.
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lupadim said:
I AM NOT A TSUNDERE I HATE THEM
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Now stamp your feet, blush and say BAKA!


You know how to make me happy Lupa <3
Apr 1, 2014 12:11 PM

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RRRRR

At least tsunderes aren't gay
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Kibura said:
spoke in a soft childish voice, it was a warm morning so even he had a blushing face.


mm I'm so cute -- I wanna go cosplay as myself now

:v



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And now we just wait and see whether the bandits are obnoxious, dangerous or both.

Also...
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im such a tease, I will say this in the next few chapters, there will be violations... before romance....

Is this supposed to hint that there's going to be... how do I say it, a "rough" situation?
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The focus on Jack and Lime_kun was pretty neat.
Wonder who bandits are esp. the small dude in revealing clothing, he totally caught my attention. I would place my bet on either Korrvo or UnoPunto being the little one, but I might be wrong.

Patiently waiting for the future lemon fest.

Yeah, that UnoPuntoCinco guy is pretty hot
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Same with Jack and Lime_ its going to take a little bit more.
Dear god it's all going downhill so fast... I'll sue! I'll sue I tell ya!
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
Same with Jack and Lime_ its going to take a little bit more.
Dear god it's all going downhill so fast... I'll sue! I'll sue I tell ya!


Come on you know you love been in this ;) Jack is such a genuine guy, handsome and honest and soon more a protector. What more can a manly man ask for? and Lime_ is kawaii nobody would blame Jack for falling for that ^_^

I'll admit Jack makes me swoon too ;)

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Is this supposed to hint that there's going to be... how do I say it, a "rough" situation?


I never said what they like to bandit on the side ;)
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gaping holes? i'm all hot and bothered now.
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no chapter today, I am happy
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lupadim said:
no chapter today, I am happy. I-It's not like I wanted a new chapter to come out or anything! Don't get any wrong ideas! Baka...


I'm going to like this thread.
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lupadim said:
no chapter today, I am happy


Yeah I know usually I write them the night before and upload in the morning but I was really tired last night but perhaps if I get time I'll write a double chapter to make up for it.
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Trying to find time to write up the next few chapters...


As a side note what is my avatar? is it my normal one? because on my browser its showing my old one :0
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Kibura_Iburasa said:
As a side note what is my avatar?

http://i1281.photobucket.com/albums/a518/Maor666/imagejpg1_zpsfa1d9f9d.jpg
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Pralando said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:
As a side note what is my avatar?

http://i1281.photobucket.com/albums/a518/Maor666/imagejpg1_zpsfa1d9f9d.jpg
My browser shows this one http://i.imgur.com/l4cM6aQ.jpg
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Ok so we got three different people on three different browsers...showing three different avatars.
Weird...

and now mine is showing that one too, wth MAL system.

Anyway still working on next chapter, its a difficult one to get right.
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Finally an update, check your characters.




The crowd had kept their distance, the bandits stood centre square. Everyone knew something was going to go down, never do such users gather without some shitstorm happening or discussion heating up to flame war levels.
The tall one stood in the middle, leaping up to the fountains side to get a higher elevation. He was clad in a rather revealing outfit, it looked military what was actually there, which wasn't much.
"Alright so you know why we are here, we are on a mission of mercy. We are here to take away some trouble makers from this overcrowded casual section and take them away for a while"
"Hey Heredity do we even know what they look like?" grumbled the one with the smiley symbol on their breast pocket
"We don't need to, Korrvo" He nodded to him "Drawn them out for us will you, I'm already bored"
"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
The shorter one was sat, dipping their toe into the cold water "and what am I supposed to be doing"
"watching our backs, don't want the attention of any mods now" UnoPuntoCinco sighed, pulling a frowned face "We paid them off didn't we, we have our 15 minutes" he replied.
" Never trust a mod" He replied, nodding to the blacksmiths, he had noticed Jack leaving his house and walking slowly towards the town square.

"On it!" UnoPuntoCinco yelled, leaping up with inhuman speed, he had already cleared the crowds and with a low knee had dropped Jack to the floor before he could even figure out what had happened, he was grabbed from behind and held in place. "What the fuck is this all about?!" Jack yelled through gripped teeth as an arm hung around his neck. "yum yum" UnoPuntoCinco spoke softly, licking the side of Jacks neck "This one, I want this one for my own"
"Maybe, it would be fun to watch" Heredity quipped as he sat crossed legs on the fountain as if watching a play. Meanwhile in the blacksmiths house Lime_ was trying to peer out the window and see what was happening, more importantly where was Jack? he began to slowly creep out the house
He was small so he crawled along the ground, hoping to make it past the crowds and get into a good vantage spot to see what was happening. Unaware somebody had already seen him, a shadow from behind grinning with menace and venom "Swell...aren't you just adorable." Korrvo was upon him before he had turned, gripping his face in his hands, he pulled up Lime_ holding his face how an aggressive lover would "I like adorable things" Lime_ struggled to escape, this was not his idea of a good Yaoi fiction.
"got another one!" Yelled Korrvo pushing Lime_ out into the open and down onto his face next to Jack "Hey leave him alone, whatever it is you want you leave him alone!" he yelled angry, staring down the two before him
"Do you love him?" replied Heredity bringing his face directly in front of his.
This took Jack by surprise "what no! why the hell would I ever long a guy?! especially not this one!" he turned to look at Lime_, his face was not easily disguising the look of hurt he felt in his chest after hearing that "Hey, I didn't mean it like that I-" Jack tried to say but Lime_ wasn't listening anymore.

"We got two more gentlemen!" Heredity stood up from the fountain, stretching his long slender legs
"Two more!" laughed Korrvo, "I'm sure we can sniff out a few lost lambs"
"Come out, come out where ever you are. We are here to take you into custody"
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Things just got dramatic. I feel bad for lime, having to deal with such a dense guy.

I hate to admit it but I'm interested in seeing what happens next.
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Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it !
One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em.

We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me.
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GuusWayne said:
there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief

And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat.
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NarTaco said:

I hate to admit it but I'm interested in seeing what happens next.


YAY!

Sapewloth said:
Someone better pick up that phone, 'cause I freaking called it !
One of the bandits was bound to be either Korrvo or UnoPunto, and we got the two of 'em.

We didn't see much of those three yet, but compared with their respective users, their characters seem pretty spot on to me.


Glad you like it :)
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Kibura_Iburasa said:

"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
Relatable.

*will comment further after I'm done with my game*

Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.
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Korrvo said:


Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.


Anything is possible, perhaps Jack hurt his feeling enough to push him into the arms of another...

Ive updated the first page with a character list so people can see if you are currently in the story.
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oh shiiiiiit nigga. my precum is unmatched in the world of yaoi.
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Korrvo said:
Kibura_Iburasa said:

"Quicker we get them, quicker I can have some fun too" Replied Korrvo licking his lips with greed.
Relatable.

*will comment further after I'm done with my game*

Tsundere Jack is Tsundere.

10 bucks Lime falls for me before Jack has time to confess.

Why do I have a feeling that's going to happen?
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Part 6 is up and the stakes are raised. Why does it keep getting darker...Gotta try to lighten the story.




"Who are they?" JD whispered sat down below the window.
"I'm not sure, looks like some hired thugs" Lupa replied he was standing to the side of the window peering out a crack in the curtains. "Looks like they are distracted at the moment, we can sneak out the back and out of casual. Perhaps make it as far as Forum games, they will never find us in there. Place is a mess" he left the window and began packing up their gear.
JD slinked out from the ground and made his way to Lupa's side "We can't just run away and let them walk on over this town, they have hostages"
"Developing a conscious? could have used that back then huh" Lupa said, still packing not looking up
"That's not fair and you know it" JD replied
"All I do know is that this may be our only chance to get out of here" he turned grabbing JD by the arm
"You willing to get perma'd or worse for some random users?" he was serious and cold.
JD just returned his stare...

Outside the bandits had grown impatient, Korrvo was tapping his foot with increased speed. Heredity was eyeing up Jack like a hungry dog, he was returning an angry stare but would glance over to Lime_ now and again, who was still just looking at the floor. Jack could feel that he has said something wrong because he could feel the pain of causing him hurt. Funny that just the night before he didn't even know this person now here he was risking his neck for him.
"I'm done waiting" Stepping up the tall Heredity began to walk towards the two by was quickly stopped by a flying bottle to the face, he was a tough cookie because it only left a small scratch on his forehead. He had a crazed look in his eyes "What the fuck was that supposed to be!" he yelled giving the random user a really fucked up stare "you wanna play little man" he walked over pushing the few users before him trying lightly to guard the one behind away. Grabbing this user by the neck Heredity pushed him up against the wall.

"gotta a name boy?" Heredity said through his teeth, the user a youngish male squirmed in his grip
"You have no right to mess with these people, leave them alone" he said through choked voice
"I said your name not your opinions"
The user looked Heredity in the eyes "Kousoku11" he replied more clearly as Heredity released his grip letting him drop to the ground "Here" crouching down to his side "Let me return the favour" Heredity pulled his finger along the side of Kousoku's face, turning it so the nail began to cut into the skin causing a little cut "Guess we have something in common now" Heredity whispered to him.
He stood up, turning back to Korrvo and UnoPuntoCinco who both looked a little worried
"They will come to us, even if we have to mess with the new play things to do it, take the small one!" he yelled, giving a look to the crowd as a don't even try to fuck with us, making them all take a step back.

Korrvo piped up first "I get the small one remember" he quickly made his way over to Lime_ who peered up, korrvo had crouched to his level, holding his face in his delicate hands, slowly drawing it across his chin "I think I've fallen for you...Lime_" this surprised him, Jack piped up "you know him?!"
"No! I don't I've never seen these people before" Lime_ responded with a panicked voice
"he is right you know, we have never met before" he reached down slowly moving his cold hand down from Limes neck, slowly descending Lime_ began to uncontrollably blush as his body reacted to the cold touch, slowly Korrvo with a most wicked smile reached further down his stomach "I will love you like you have never known" Korrvo managed with a trembled voice. suddenly whilst his hand was cutting through the shirt buttons opening Limes chest up to the world to see Korrvo felt a large object plough into his side, knocking him to the floor. It was Jack who had managed to pull himself to his feet, he looked pissed "Jack...." Lime said, with tears in his eyes
"You think you can fuck with anyone you want, you think I'm going to sit and watch this. You're not going to touch him ever again you get me fucker!" he yelled at him kicking out his foot and planting it into Korrvo's face, knocking him to his side. UnoPuntoCinco was about to jump up and stop him when he too was stopped by Heredity with a waved hand, he wanted to watch it unfold.

"You think you can hurt me psh!" Korrvo spat, getting up onto his feet, Jack stood trying to be ready for a counter even with his hands tied behind his back but with a swift forward kick from Korrvo he was on his back unable to get up, like a turtle stranded. He let out a huff as Korrvo landed on his lap, both legs to either side as if riding him. "Then I'll have you" he half laughed, letting out a sigh of excitement and licking the side of Jacks face "What how about no you fucking lunatic! I-" he paused, looking back over at Lime_ he was covering himself best he could but his chest was still showing through the damaged shirt he wore and he had the widest eyes he had ever seen, suddenly it didn't matter. The only thing that mattered was keeping Lime_ safe but even Jack didn't want to admit that deep down the idea of someone else not himself getting to touch him like that made him angry, deep down he felt something that he had to make sure he never admitted to himself.
"Yeah..." Jack said returning his focused gaze to Korrvo "You can have me instead."
SpooksApr 4, 2014 3:46 PM
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