oh yeah one more thing i gonna ask ya to grade created jutsu in the week so hope i do not take too much time and thanks as always for approving and going over stuff for me
Oh ,ok i see that you got bored at looking at all the ants from Olympia’s ,and decide it was no fun and return as mostly mortal hahah:) .
NO nono facebook why, really though this take place on there as well? Thanks for that ,common sense i know stiil I tend to get carried away on the power power more power band wagon though and end up redoing them again and again ,know that you mention it i might need to bring it down a notice,
ok could i post it here and you give me your opinion or quick review just asking?
which of the admins online the most so i can ask!!!!!!!! Questions?
Do you play pc games at all? what music do you listen too, im still impressed that it says 80.1 Anime compatibility
Jo so i didnt release you were an admin wonders,in reagrds to the posting of Bleach RP Chrt should i post on a admin page like your so you can check it or straight on the getting started ,What are the limits on power in reagards to Zanpakuto & Weapons, cause the reason iv taken so long is im busy with that aswhile as my bio could i post it your and have you check it over .Sorry for the long post?
Her hair is as a river, flowing down to her mid back. On the left side, it is black, on the right it is white. Her bangs fall in to her eyes; but, not prohibbiting her sight. she has no standard head band, instead waring a forehead protecter upon her brow. The forehead protecter has an image of a star, with waves of heat blossoming from the center of the celestial figure, rithing outwards. Her eyes are a dull black, emotionless and as threatening as a sharks. Her tunic, is a vibrent yellow, her leggings a deep purple. She wares a belt, that is a reflective silver with red pouches hanging at both hips. She caries a strange instrament that resembles wings of a sort upon her back, made of a polished ivory color, strapped to her shoulders by a clear band. She is about four feet and three inches.
Kekigenkai: Astral release:
This genkai, is spasific to the branch of the Suta clan in which okibi belongs. It alows her to take in energy from the sun, and expend it in bursts of varius types. Do to the taking of solar energy, in a five feet diamiter (using okibi as the epicenter) it is usually darker. Almost as if there is a shadow serounding her, however this is not a shadow just appearing to be one The constant energy drawn changes the darkness. if she is lightly drawing on it (active effect) then it is a light shadow like light, if she puts full efert she can change it to pitch blackness. She can redistribute the energy in eather fire, lightning, or wind I.e. Fire: plasma style jutsu, Lightning: the magnetic field, or ability to give something a magnetic pull and wind: her burst of solar wind..
Specialty: ninjutsu, chakra, and intelect
Equipment: 1. Left pouch containing a flask of brandy, a peace of flint, a dull knife, and one shurican
2. The pouch on her right side, contains A flask of saki, a protine pill, a document (currently blank) containing information on enamy shinobi faught, but not destroyed, and usuallya coppy of her mission details
3. A acrodomiter
The machine on her back, it has several blades intermengalled together. With a small running start, and a leap the blads will spin, givving her a little more hovering time in the air when needed. Each "wing" contains 30 shurican, and fourty kunai.
Elimental afinity: Fire, lightning, and wind (astral release)
Biography:
things began long ago, nearally fifty years ago. A group of roague shinobi from ever villidge: Iwa, kiri, konoha, suna, and kumo got together in the middle of no-ware, the land of mist.
The Misukage new nothing about this small villidge growing up next to his. each of the rogue shinobi had one similar idea: "We will up hold piece, no matter what. vilence is of our past, of the miss dirrection of the kages." that was their nindo, their ninja way.
With in this villidge, five clans were most promenint: the uchiha from konoha, the kibusaki from iwa, the venchè from suna, suta from Kiri, and the Mèltu from kumo. Each was strongly hunted by their respective villidges, because their genkai's were not only important, but strictly belonging to their respective villidges.
They mannaged to stay under cover for fifty years roughly, plus or minus a few. The uchiha became the sharifs, the Venchè became farmers, the suta became demalition, etc.
One after noon, ten years after the villidge had sprung up a group of tracker ninja from kiri had appeared. at first, they just seemed to exammen the villidge, making no move on it. Until they saw a little boy, about the age of five cloaked in darkness. They made their move immidiately.
The two male hunter nin lept down off the side of the hill making a beline for the boy. Just before they got to the kid, an uchiha sprung up, seemingly out of no ware.
"Hunter ninja, if vilence is your way depart now." his voice was strong. His blue eyes set him appart from uchiha everyware, but he was obviusly an uchiha. He frowned giving him a stern look. He, elku uchiha was the only ninja their unhunted, being exiled from konoha for disagreeing with the hokage (the one before bill)
Both hunter ninja reached for kunai at the same time. A look of sadness crossed the uchiha's eyes, as he bowed his head.
"I did not wish this... but if you must then... I see no choice in this matter..."
He blirred from where he stood, a strike from his foot conecting with the left mans temple dropping him, the others throat clasped in one hand. That hand, reathed in lightning was like an iron vice around his neck.
"As the out cast kage, I will not let you harm my villidgers!"
Not seen by the inraged uchiha, a small figure detached itself from the trees above. it was a young girl, with silver hair. she was about the age of thirteen. Her voice held command, tenged with an icey over tone.
"UCHIHA! Drop my man, this instant!" Her eyes spat daggers.
The uchiha wipped around, his gaze locking on the target. he had done as the voice wished, nothing less would havwe been exeptible; from the tone of command, the uchiha was forced to obey.
"Who---"
"I am tinida mamochi, lead hunter ninja of kiri." Her voice was filled with scorn. "I have heard of you uchiha, disobeying your kage like that... if you were Kiri, you would be de---"
"Shut your filthey mouth. If i was kiri, then I would be dead from my own hand. you are nothing but filt---"
"How dare you interup---"
Back and forth, like children they argued. The first tracker was coming back around, the seccond was standing there dumb struck. he new not what to do. The child, long gone had ran back to the villidge and huts to alleart all of the kiri ninja to the pressence of Kiri trackers in the area.
Finally the girl had stopped trying to over ride the uchiha, and vice versa. The uchiha was laughing, great belly laughs that doubled him over, a smile even creased the trackers face.
"How about you three" the uchiha waved to the trackers "Come and eat with us tonight. we will show you we mean no harm. if you decide other wise, then you can take us to your kage, and if you decide we are harmless, then you let us walk. does that sound like a deal?"
The look on the females face was halarius. the uchiha was smiling largely, the other two ninja looked between the two. a group of ninja, from the villidge of piece stood and looked between everyone. They stood backing the kage of their pieceful comunity. they all nodded to the tracker, showing her that they concented to the rule.
"Fine, under one condition. All men, woman, and child will come with out a struggle. They will come in front and exept their fate no matter what."
The kage nodded, and then becconed the trackers forword.
The tracker ninja were there in the villidge for three hours, observing the "pieceful" shinobi before dinner was served.
Dinner ran smoothly, food was served and no vilence what so ever was shown. The tracker ninja questioned the kage about his teaching of the next generations of ninja.
"We teach them reading, writing, arithmatic, genjutsu, simple ty-jutsu, how to control their blood line limmits, and how to use farming tools."
"What about ninjutsu, weaponry, and the such?" the female was sitting on the front of her seet. her eyes were sharp, interest and disaprovement written on her face. "What if they needed to defen---"
The uchiha was shaking his head. "No. We preach, and go to the point of piece, no vilence. If we become under attack, the elder members such as myself, will step up and use our jutsu to protect ourselves. for the most part, genjutsu to hide ones self is key to servival for us. it is all we need to servive."
The tracker ninja finished eating and prepared to leave. just before exiting the villidge the female turned. She faced the pieceful kage, and extended her hand to him. "I have given my word that if I was satisfied to no threat from you and your villidgers, I would not pass on the word to misukage-sama. I will keep to that word, no matter what. fair well, and may our paths cross only in piece."
A smile crossed the kages face once again. he bowed over her hand, and kissed the top of her fingers. "Fair well, may the sun and wind be for ever at your back, and may your life last for decades if not at least a century."
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twenty two years later:
With in twenty two years later, a young girl was nearally to her teenage years. She had grown up, learning piece and nothing but piece. she was belonging to the suta clan, and their for helped in demolition. She showed no adept for genjutsu, none for tyjutsu, none for farming, ... really she showed no adeptness for anything but ninjutsu and chakra control.
Her blood line limit was much more finely tooned then anyone elses in her clan, her ability to gather in more solar energy out standing. she could make the five feet around her in every direction faid to night. Her smile was out standing, and she was always nice and out going.
She wasn't near the top of her class, but she was able to handle herself easally enough. Do to her inability to do anything useful for the villidge however, the kage took her under his wing. he began to teach her fire techniques under one condition. She would not, under any surcomstance ever use the jutsu for cruel, or combative ways unless forced. if possible, spare the life of her opponents.
Being of the pieceful villidge, she agreed with out a sweat. she worked hard, learning everything he was able to teach her, in half the time in which he himself had larned it. Being a suta, with the astral releace, might have helped alittle. Soon, she was so adept at the fire ninjutsu that she had nothing more to learn. She was only fourteen.
The pieceful kage made her a deputy, to scout the out scurts and pertect them from hunter ninja of the violent villidges. She agreed, and spent one year keeping her eye out. She figured that nothing would happen, as far as she new they had never been bothered for the entiree time they had been in this villidge.
The misukage, sat at his desk, reading over the new rookie tracker ninjas report. a frown split his face, at what he read.
{What seems to be a villidge lays in the middle of the river valley to the north, seven kelometers to the north of kiris out scurts. It seems as if they have been there for a long wile, from what I could see they range from every villidge. at least three homes had the stare of suta upon their doors, but the rest was unknown. they looked well defended, but also pieceful. Kekosaru awaiting fearther orders on what to do about the villidge.}
The misukage tapped his face, his eyes squented. he rose his voice, just below a bellow. "Kuri! get the head of the tracker shinobi in here now! tell her I want her ass in here double time!"
The tacker ninja arived shortly, "Yes misu---"
"What in the fuck is this?" the misukage glared at the elderly woman. The years had not been exactly kind to her, and the misukage had never been "nice."
"I wouldn't know, unless you show me misu-sama..."
His fist clenched. "Do not pretend that you do not prescreen your tracker ninja's reports. EXPLAIN!" his voice rose to a shreak. "You said that their were no living suta of the astral release left, you promised me that all enamy were cleared out, you personally..." he took a deep breath, before letting his voice drop to a his; "that all enamy were elimenated in a fifty kelometer radius from the edge of the land of mist."
He did not let her speak, "You will personally lead a force of two hundred tracker shinobi to this "villidge" he sneared letting comtempt enter his voice "And wipe them out. is that understood?"
Her eyes dropped, filling with tears, but her voice was strong. "Yes sir..." She turned on her heals and stepped out. The attack would begin the next day, at about three P.m.
Okibi stood in the shadow of a tree, the darkness around her just enough to shield her from site. the kage was thirty feet over, also keeping out of site. The one remaining scout had returned that morning, with a report that devistated the kage: Kiri, was on the march with a force of more then a hundred shinobi... right for the villidge.
It would be okibi and the uchiha's job to stand at atension, and defend against the brutal wave of shinobi and try to turn them back. she nelt, looking out though not down the road, but toards the villidge. She had no entension of succeeding. She new, deep down inside that it was impossible and would never be able to be done. She looked back down the roadway, and saw the people.
At the front walked an old lady, with a staff in hand. She was almost as cripled as okibi's father, who had gotten in an accident and had fallen off a roof shortly after okibi was born.
The old lady stopped, her voice filled with command. "I know you are around here someware." her voice shook with old age, and wearyness. "Last time I was here... you approached me one step from this spot... uchiha... Now, step out and face me."
The kage slowly dropped out of the tree. His age was there, but less obvius then the old ladies. his voice held gentalness, and a tenge of sadness. "Why mamochi? why did you do it..." he beccond Okibi forwards. She stepped out of the shadows, her eyes filled with hatred. mamochi was a feared name, the most famous of them being zabuza the butcher. The kage spoke quietly stopping Okibi in her tracks.
"Okibi Suta, meet a long time friend Mamochi... well... long time til now... it seems she is our enamy now..."
As the kage finished, his head departed from his shoulders and hit the ground. Blood foutaned upwards, splattering all over okibi. Horor spread threw her intire body. she glanced at each of the people standing around her, all of the enamy and did the only thing she could think of, well... not think it was all instinked. A giant wave of fire sprung up around her, blidning. it was colorless, having no but all colors. her eyes were wide, and everyone was forced back from the heat.
"Forget the girl, we can colect her head later. on to the villidge! slaughter everyone, leave none living!"
Okibi watched in horor as her friends, family, and even her most hated, but loved neihbors were slaughtered. she colapsed her fire shield falling. she was devistated and crying, when something from behind her yanked her up by her hair. pulling her in to the shadows, it disappeared never to be seen in that area again.
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When okibi finally awoke, things were pitch black. she felt weak, unable to move what so ever. she struggled, freaking out. she had never been with out the star light, with out the sun... she had never felt such empty ness ever.
Things hit her in a flash, everything coming back to her. The devistation, the slaughter, and then the figure who spaired and saved her life. she wondered who that strange person might have been. her eyes focused, a small light could be seen not far away. she zero in'ed upon it, her gaze slightly flicking to the side. next to the fire, or what ever the light may be a figure that was huge sat.
Okibi wimpered, and in a flash the figure stood next to her. it seemed to tower up, seven feet high with eyes the color of coles. it reached down, yanking her up by her hair. she screamed, and was back handed across the face. she shut up immidiately, shock setting in. she had never been struck, when living among the pieceful villidgers.
Dragging her toards the light, his voice rumbled powerfully. "You are from that stupid villidge. I will teach you hate, how to kill, and violence! if you refuse to learn, I will break you mentally and rebuild you to my own design."
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Over the next few years, okibi went threw incredibly difficult training. She was first asked to kill a cat, then a dog, and then a bird; all who were first givin to her as a pet. She slowly began to lose her sanity, or what had origenally had been called her sanity. A new her was slowly coming out, at least on the out side. she had lost hope of ever being able to call herself a shinobi from the villidge of piece.
One day, on okibi's twentyth birthday, her master took her out. He only told her one thing, "Come." she followed, across the land, threw forest and desert, over hills and rocks until they came to the edge of a small villidge filled with pieceful inhabitence. he turned to her, fire in his eyes.
"Oki, you have done well, learning and growing under my careful watch. you have nearally became exactly what I had amagined. you only must do one thing, and then you can be released upon the world... you must go, in to that villidge and slaughter every last villidger, man, woman, and child. kill them all, bathe in their blood, feast upon their flesh..." Okibi shook her head vilently, tears rushing to her eyes. she was on the edge of a nervus break down, the past filling her head. Screaming, thrashing... everyone dying around her. she began to shake like a leaf.
"What the fuck do you mean no! You will do this now! How the fuck do you ever expect to become stronger? to be able to avenge your fallen comrads, those who wanted piece. you have to be able to kill with out remorse, to elemenate all in your path. you must be able to obliterate everyone, and anyone who aposes you."
She was crying profusely now, butt was resalute. she bowed her head, and nodded to his words.
"Yes master..."
She turned, and faced the villidge. "Okibi," she turned slowly back to face him, all emotions fled from her face.
"Yes?"
"Use nothing but your bare hands, and your hunting knife. it will make it more personal, and make sure you miss none."
She spun away, to hide the anger in her eyes. she walked slowly, entering the villidge. it was just about dinner time, so everyone was in their huts. she strolled the the first one, and knocked gently.
A small child opened the door, looking up. okibi spoke one phrase, before drawing her knife in an downwards arc cleaving the childs head in two, blood gushing everware, brains leaking to the sides...
"I am sorry... forgive me?"
She kicked the body to the side, and entered. at the table sat a man, a woman, and another child... the child appeared to be a little girl of the age of four.
Okibi walked to the man, whos mouth was wide open. she stabbed him in his left eye, spinning and ripping the blade out the right side of his head. his body fell sideways, blood leaking on to his dinner plate. the woman tried to scream, but okibi sent a louping kick, that was rather clumsey do to her inability at tyjutsu, but still managed to crush the womans wind pipe. she spun, jumping on the little kid knocking the chair over. she began to stab the body repetely, until the child stopped squarming.
Okibi repeted the process in every building until she was possitive there were no more living sovilians in the villidge.
She turned and walked out covered in blood and brains, and other vital parts to the human anadamy and faced the person whome she called "master."
"Well done, well done okibi. I must congraduate you, you have passed all my expectations... you make me proud." He was smiling ear to ear.
"I am glad... I am glad... because this makes it easy to do now..." The world around okibi faided to night, inveluping the man. the metal in his kunai, in his shurican, and in his tips of his boots all shot in to the ground, holding him tightly. she spoke quietly.
"You have turned me in to a monster, a killing machine with out feelings... I will udalize this to my best capabilities, becoming the worlds strongest mercinary... however, I must take care of all of my busyness first... starting with you, the person whome turned me against my nindo, my ninja way... the person who pulled me of the path of piece, and in to the path of distruction and violence... die master, Plasma style: great fire ball jutsu!"
A giant ball of white energy flashed out from ware the night began, consuming the man in his tracks. the girl left in the after math was clean of all blood, matter, and other disterbing pieces, do to the extream heat melting it. she blinked, and turned in the direction in which kiri lay. she needed to take care of one more thing, before she could begin to find a new master to serve...
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Okibi traveled to kiri, and started a great investigation. by this time, a new kage was implace, misuto hoshi. She was rather surprised, the man actually seemed to have some back bone and great morals. he was all for the people, and their defence where as the previus one seemed from what she had been told all for his own well being. after several months of hard questioning and murders of savilians and ambu level personell, she discovered that the old kage had died from a heart failyor, two kages back. he now two generations of kages ago. okibi was madder then hell to find this out, but more determained then ever to find a new person to serve.
She spent the next eight years looking for someone that was sadistic enough, but had a outer nicety behind them to need her servuses. she searched long and hard. everytime she thought she had found someone that she could call "master" or "leadge" she would find out about their own gread, and be forced to kill them brutally, but officiantly.
Finally, she got wind of the distruction of kiri, kono, and the attack upon kumo. She took a little wile, but she aventually also found out where the orders were coming from, and it shocked her emencely. it seemed all the orders were coming from suna, eather directly from the kazekage, or someone named mei.
Okibi traveled to suna to discover what exactly was going on. When she reached suna, things became kaotic. Tenshi saw her almost immidiately. he had heard of her, which surprised her. it seemed her name had become rather big in the under ground, both as a blessing and a curse.
"Okibi-chan, how are you?" Tenshi's familiarity was strange to okibi. No one, and she ment no one had ever been so kindd to her. The person in front of her was strange as well. wisdum gazed out of his eyes, beyond his bodies years.
"Um... good... I uh... was wondering... Let me get to the point. First of, if your villidge was under attack what would you do?" Okibi was trying to find out Tenshi's morality, and his views. If he proved to be a lier, she would flip the switch on her rotating blades, and get the hell out of there.
"As I have done, I have stepped to the side and allowed the leader of the opposing force to take over; however, just because I have seemed to have came to an understanding doesn't mean I have. I will curupt it from the in side, and then I would take out the leader amerging as the power, and alowing my villidgers to live unmolested, and with the most freedum that they could wish for. don't get me wrong oki-chan, if a few villidgers get hurt, it hardly matters. as long as the mass mijority are fine... or even a little... then..." he stopped his speach smiling beotificly.
Her eyes were blazing, both with anger and admeration. she spoke quietly, "So... what must I do to be highered by you tenshi? what must I do in order to work under you..."
Tenshi crossed his fingers, lacing them and resting his chin upon them. He cleared his throat before speaking.
"My sorces tell me that with in two days time a female shinobi of the name Kerushii zetsu will make a irational move to self stop the forces in kumo. I want you to go their, to the futal lords manner... and stop her... she is a kiri ninja with the capabilities to control the temperature... do you think you can do it? if you pull it off then..."
"Consider it done."
She stood up fast, and exited with out being desmissed. She traveled the intire next day, until she reached the futal lords manner. using a signed note by tenshi, she was able to manoover threw the soldiers, scanning for a good place for a kiri ninja to hide. she thought about the name, and looked to the trees. she smiled.
She moved rappidly to the trees and waited in ambush.
A girl soon appeared, and okibi waited. with in a few hours, the girl tenced as if to run. okibi stepped out of the shadows and slashed fast, aiming to cut the tendens on the back of the girls legs, effectively ham-stringing her. she only partually suceeded, the girl was fast.
Kerushii had spun, avoiding the left cut, but suffering the right. she lashed up, attempting to kick wile dropping the temperature to well below zero. The issue that she had not expected was the ease in which the ninja avoided the attack. The temperature decrease failed to effect okibi, because okibi was constently gathering heat. okibi struck, knocking kerushii out with a single blow. using self administrated drugs She kept the kiri ninja unconsence for the trip back.
Tenshi was astonished, but delighted. he had not expected it to be ocomplished so easally. He took kerushii off okibi's hands, and smiled...
"Welcome to the ranks of the Shìkèìshuu"
Technique list:
~Plasma release: dome shaped barior technique: This technique creates a dome around okibi that has a opening at the top large enough for someone to enter. The dome is a blinding white color on the outside, but clear when stairing outwards. The flames, in which the barior is bilt from are 5530 degrees celcius, the same heat of the outer part of the sun. The inside is insalated, plus Hoshi's are built with a higher amunity to heat. This technique can only be used under extream stress both physicly and mentally, and drains 50 CP, with a 10 CP upkeep.
~Solar wind technique: this is a technique that sends out a giant burst of wind, that moves forword from the user at 450 KM per seccond. It drains 50 CP, and takes 7 posts to use, and has a cool down time of 10 posts after the origenal 7.
~Plasma release: This is a technique that is automaticly applied to all of her fire jutsu. She transfures the energy stored from acting as a solar panel and redistributes it outwards manifesting it with in her fire ninjutsu.
~Astral release: Magnetic field: The sun has small areas contained with in it where the magnetic field is 3000 times as powerful as the earths own magnetic field. Depending on the chakra expended, Okibi can cause things to become magnitized using the solar energy gathered. the origenal cost of the jutsu is 10 CP. to mage it able to target really small obgects such as hair pens, paper clips etc an aditional 5 CP is needed. In order to make it be able to attract little objects: Kunai, shurican, sinbon etc She must pay 10 extra CP. in order to get midium objects, Cars, trash cans etc she must pay an extra twenty CP. in order to atract huge objects (anything larger then a car) she will need to pay 50 CP. The weight does matter. obviuslly, she can not atract a steel beam with a kunai. the object being pulled must be smaller then the object in which the magnitism is placed.
stats:
Ninjutsu: 3000 (Plus500 for title)
Chakra: 2000 (+500 for title)
inteligence: 1000
Title: Bloody star: +500 to ninjutsu and chakra: gained from the massicur at the unnamed pieceful villidge that Okibi carried out. She left varius signs that it was the Suta clan who had caried it out, and was spotted by a group of fishermen in the bay near by, who quickly spred the tale.
